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Approved Starship The Witch's Boudoir

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Dispara Na'Gara

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard Navigation System
  • Standard Life Support System
  • Standard Targeting System
  • Communications Suite
  • Standard Shield Generators (energy, particle and ion)
  • Medical Bay
  • 2 Escape Pods
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Fast and Nimble - The smaller size coupled with enhanced thrusters and the SLAM allows the Boudoir to move and maneuver quickly at sub-light speeds.
  • Survivability - With its complement of shielding technology, advanced armor and point defense weapons, the Boudoir can survive a ptiched battle long enough to make an escape.
WEAKNESSES
  • No Squadron Hanger Space - To allow for added upgrades, the ship has no squadron hanger space. This leaves the Boudoir without the benefit of fighter protection or the use of support craft, aside from Dispara's Sciss fighter.
  • No Big Punch - While it's complement of weapons are very effective against ships with standard armor, they are less effective against heavily armored ships.
DESCRIPTION
The heavily modified Scarab-class corvette is designed to be a light, stealthy, agile pirate vessel to complement larger ships on raids. Escort and boarding craft have been left out to make room for additional armament and advanced systems, with just enough hanger space for one large fighter. Boarding vessels takes place through the Boudoir's two force tunnels. A small force can also be carried aboard the Sciss fighter which is armed with breaching lasers. The array of rapid-fire weapons are configured to quickly breach a ships shields and armor, though most of the batteries are not heavy, making heavier armor on larger capital ships more difficult to penetrate.
 
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Dispara Na'Gara

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This is a reboot of this ship which was originally created under a now deleted account for this character. The intent is to delete the original ship posting and submit this sub as new.

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HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Dispara Na'Gara

Nicely made ship again! However I found two problems:
  • The Sciss Fighter's permission is not good, you linked the DM, and we cannot see those. So please make a print screen and link the picutre.
  • The other problem is, your submission is overpowered (+2, with SLAM +3). For a ship of this size, you will not gain a minus point(s) for the hangar size's rating. So if this reach the 0 (which is the High) it is 0 point, and below this all of the ratings also 0 point. So you have to count this as an Average rating. In the light of this, please modify your ratings.
And if you have any questions about this, feel free to ask them here.
 

Dispara Na'Gara

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Thanks for the review!

So, looks like I spaced out some during edit. I placed images of conversations in the Permissions section. Also got a better understanding of how to measure balance and I think I have it correct now.
 
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