The Owl's Critique Thread

[Ilias Nytrau]

I've been on this site just over a year. Some of you know me from before my arrival, and some of you I have come to know since. Some of you might not know me at all. I've had a lot happen in my life over the past year, and as a result my roleplay and whatnot has suffered.

Still, I'm interested in what you have to say.

If you've been lucky/unfortunate enough to have me as a Codex Judge - or remember when the Codex didn't exist and I was an FJ, feel free to give feedback on that. But I'm primarily here for you all to critique me as a writer and give feedback on my characters. Some of them are more active than others.

I'm mostly looking for feedback on the following...

[member="Ilias Nytrau"]
[member="Jannik Morlandt"]
[member="Meeristali Peradun"]
[member="Lucianus Adair"]
[member="Ibaris Varanin-Jacobs"]
[member="Siyndacha Aerin"]

...but I'll take words on these ones if you know them at all and have anything to say.

[member="Selinica Miriya Cailis"]
[member="Falcon Gyndar"]
[member="Tes Dralyn"]
[member="Ordon Trozky"]
[member="Ferian Adair"]
[member="Marselia Urstalis"]
[member="Auswyn Nothrael"]

So, hit me. Tell me what you think.

 

[Not Ordo]

[member="Ilias Nytrau"]

I like how you nestle in my branches

 

[Ilias Nytrau]

[member="Kal Izka"]

*hoots affectionately*

 

[Aran Finn]

Not enough hot, sweaty Luc imo ... >.>

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Ilias Nytrau"]
I've not RP'ed with you much, but I have found you in the Codex arena to be fair, balanced and sane.

...You'd be amazed how rare that is.

 

[Ilias Nytrau]

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

Fair, balanced, and sane? Thanks! I'll take that.

At least you didn't call me 'nice'.

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Ilias Nytrau"]
Because I didn't want to lie here in public.
<_<

 

[Ilias Nytrau]

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

Good man.

 

[Rianna Organa]

[member="Ilias Nytrau"] in the codex you were helpful and understanding when I submitted the Ravensclaw farm.

As a writer I enjoy your style finding it easy to follow and an enjoyable read.

 

[Ilias Nytrau]

[member="Rianna be Ar'klim"]

Why, thank you! I do try to be accommodating and helpful.

We really should write together at some point - when I'm not so bogged down by life... and threads. Me and my terrible RP habits!

 

[Rianna Organa]

[member="Ilias Nytrau"] you are welcome. When you're ready let me know I will be there.

 

[The Spark]

I've been on this site just over a year. Some of you know me from before my arrival, and some of you I have come to know since. Some of you might not know me at all. I've had a lot happen in my life over the past year, and as a result my roleplay and whatnot has suffered.

Still, I'm interested in what you have to say.

If you've been lucky/unfortunate enough to have me as a Codex Judge - or remember when the Codex didn't exist and I was an FJ, feel free to give feedback on that. But I'm primarily here for you all to critique me as a writer and give feedback on my characters. Some of them are more active than others.

I'm mostly looking for feedback on the following...

[member="Ilias Nytrau"]
[member="Jannik Morlandt"]
[member="Meeristali Peradun"]
[member="Lucianus Adair"]
[member="Ibaris Varanin-Jacobs"]
[member="Siyndacha Aerin"]

...but I'll take words on these ones if you know them at all and have anything to say.

[member="Selinica Miriya Cailis"]
[member="Falcon Gyndar"]
[member="Tes Dralyn"]
[member="Ordon Trozky"]
[member="Ferian Adair"]
[member="Marselia Urstalis"]
[member="Auswyn Nothrael"]

So, hit me. Tell me what you think.

I love everything you do, I love you writing. I love the characters you develop.

I loved Jannik when I first came to the website, I believe we had this convo a long time ago - I was always confused about him like, is he on crack? He always amused me and I was always intrigued in his inner monologue and workings. I believe that was during the Invasion of Coruscant that it really kinda opened me up to him.

All of your characters and your ability to be so diverse one way or another is off the chart and I enjoy every moment writing with you or reading what you have written.