Approved Lore The Chained Tome

[Darth Empyrean]

[member="Gir Quee"]

Added.

 

[Gir Quee]

Approved.

 

[Luca Donskoi]

Moved to Pre-Factory for edits.

Please remember to include a list of any and all changes made to this submission prior to tagging a member of the Factory Staff.

 

[Darth Empyrean]

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  Changed Image and Source (Broken Link)
  
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  General Reformatting
  
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  Change ‘The Slave’ to ‘Darth Maliphant’
  
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  Changed various Masters (Never utilized the submission / Gone from the site)
  
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  Removed 5 Limit, but still Semi-Unique for a more dynamic limit should it be needed.
  
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  Hotlinked Titanium under Materials
  
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  Added Information under ‘Darth Maliphant’s Additions’
  
  Added Mother Talzin’s Grimoire
  
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  Added the Telos Holocron
  
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  Added a complete copy of the One Sith’s Archives (Taken from Darth Adekos)
  
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  Added The Nameless Book (recieved from Maliphant’s time in the Primeval)
  
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  Added Autobiography of Darth Maliphant
  

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Added Judas Foster Additions

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  Added The Tome of the Unshackled
  

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Removed OOC Note / Mod Edit for cleanliness sake.

[member="Alden Akaran"]

All good to be put back.

 

[Darth Empyrean]

Runi Verin

This is ready for factory again. Listed changes made to the submission are in the prior post.

 

[Runi Verin]

Darth Empyrean

This is a shame as this is a good looking sub, but Holocrons are now the purview of the Codex Lore section. You can find a link to their template here. If you want, I can move this sub into the Pre-Codex for you to edit accordingly or I can archive it entirely.

 

[Darth Empyrean]

Runi Verin

If you could, I'd love this moved to Codex! I wasn't aware of the changes, so that works fine by me.

 

[Runi Verin]

Darth Empyrean

No worries. It was a fairly recent change, so some confusion is expected. Moved this now.

 

[Darth Empyrean]

Srina Talon

I believe I've updated this to the specifications of the Codex. Apologies for its unconventional nature, hope it looks alright!

 

[Scherezade deWinter]

Darth Empyrean Under review

 

[Scherezade deWinter]

Darth Empyrean This is a beautiful peice of Lore and it is always a pleasure reading your submissions. The only comments I have are of the technical kind:

• Under Out of Character Information, you are missing the Permissions field from the template.
• Under Contents, as you've changed your account name from The Slave to Darth Malifant, I recommend that you change the name there as well to keep it all uniform. Alternatively, you could add a few words explaining that this was the name he went by at the time.
• Under Contents as well, please link to the Telos Holocron.

Once the edits are done please tag me back so that I could approve this submission

 

[Darth Empyrean]

Scherezade deWinter

Added permission field, changed the one instance of 'The Slave' to Darth Maliphant, and have the Telos Holocron already linked to the submission for it; assuming that is okay, I mean.

I hope that works!

 

[Scherezade deWinter]

Darth Empyrean Thank you very much for the edits Approved!

 

[Srina Talon]

Submission Name: The Chained Tome
Link to Submission: https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/the-chained-tome.111685/
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex:

Don't forget to include a list of changes and tag a member of Codex Staff when ready.

 

[Darth Empyrean]

Changes made:

• Removed Darth Metus (Was never used)
• Added Darth Adekos along with his contributions
• Added Adrian Vandiir along with his contributions
• Added to Maliphant’s section:
• The Proper Way to Corrupt a Jedi, by Velok of Toola
• Kezeroth’s Holocron of Rage
• Access to the Aikstus Ra information network.

Srina Talon

 

[Allyson Locke]

Wow, this is amazing good work

RE-RE-RE-REApproved