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[member="Abraxis"]
Must have missed yours. Updating
Must have missed yours. Updating
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[member="Connor Harrison"] [member="Abraxis"]
Missed both requests, they are now updated.
Missed both requests, they are now updated.
Good Ol' Scoundrel
Submission Name: Shatter Beam Pistol
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/87959-shatter-beam-pistol/
Summary of Modification:
Modification:
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/87959-shatter-beam-pistol/
Summary of Modification:
- Production
- Affiliation
- Manufacturer
- Slight change to description
Modification:
- Production change to Minor
- Affiliation change to Mandalorian Crusaders
- Manufacturer to Arakyd Industries and Outer Rim Engineer and Development
- Description: Remove this from the sentence - The shatter beam pistol is a perfect fit for Augustus Fel and reflects his destructive nature.
Laira Darkhold
Well-Known Member
Submission Name: Drahr'gam
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/66626-drahrgam/
Reason For Modification: I felt like it.
Modification: Please Archive.
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/66626-drahrgam/
Reason For Modification: I felt like it.
Modification: Please Archive.
Gherron Dragovalor
Space dad
Submission name: Alnox, the dark blade of light
Link: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/89387-alnox-the-dark-blade-of-light/?hl=alnox
Modification: Image change
Reason for modification: I found aN image that much better suits the sword.
Link: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/89387-alnox-the-dark-blade-of-light/?hl=alnox
Modification: Image change
Reason for modification: I found aN image that much better suits the sword.
Matreya
Well-Known Member
Submission Name: Sith Beskar'gam
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/23999-sith-beskargam/
Summary of Modification:
Changing the aesthetics (Img) and owner of the suit (not literal account, keep this the same. Rather in the sub I am noting he no longer owns it.)
Reason for Modification: Fos hardly ever uses the suit now, due to being more of a hermit, so he gifts it to his daughter
Modification:
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/23999-sith-beskargam/
Summary of Modification:
Changing the aesthetics (Img) and owner of the suit (not literal account, keep this the same. Rather in the sub I am noting he no longer owns it.)
Reason for Modification: Fos hardly ever uses the suit now, due to being more of a hermit, so he gifts it to his daughter
Modification:
Previous Design:
Current Design:
Intent: To give a face to the armor he has been using since he first joined the Mandalorians
Development Thread:Manufacturer: Daemos
Model: Sith Beskar'gam The Symbol of the Daemon Clan
Affiliation: Daemos [member="Tempist"]
Modularity: N/A
Production: Unique
Material: Beskar - Phrik - Armorweave
Helmet Utilities:
360° Macro-binocular View-plate
Infrared/Electromagnetic/Low-Light Scanner
Droid Mind Verbal Interface (Vessel & Armor Systems)
Oxygen Reserve Tank (2 Hour Supply)
Audio Receptor w/Amplifier
Encrypted Internal Comlink
Oxygen Filtration System
HUD (Heads-up-Display)
Motion Sensors
Armor Components:
Armorweave Cloak w/Hood
Armorweave Body Glove
Durasteel Leg Bracers
Bracer Rockets
Beskar Gauntlets
Beskar/Durasteel Torso
JT-12 Jetpack
Gauntlet Utilities:
Dur-24 Wrist Laser
Crushgaunts
Description:
Past ~ Upon his admittance to the ranks of the Mandalorian, several decades previously, it was a different time for Daemos. He was even more ruthless than he is now, taking the image of a demon as a way to back his endeavors. In the more recent times he once again brought it forth, to great joy for the man.
The torso is crafted from a finely combined Beskar-Durasteel compound, which is capable of sustaining minor plasma battle. Initially crafted from simply Beskar, he realized that such a piece would be imbecilic; being to heavy, to expensive etc. Each plate that combines to build the entirety of the mold is susceptible to repeated lightsaber strikes, sacrificing durability in place of more speed, while still being able to be struck three times in one place. This is also where the droid mind, and most of the technological equipment is located so as to allow the Helmet to not be overbearing on its own weight.
Each Gauntlet holds the most lightsaber resistance, being severely durable while ungodly heavy for simple gauntlets. Crafted from rolled, rather than flattened, planks even furthers the durability of the Beskar. Beside the overall epic capabilities held by each, comes crushgaunts made entirely by Daemos. They arent as physically durable as the normal crushgaunt internal frame, leaving the hands in danger if a powerful enough pressure hits them - as the gaunts internal frame are crafted from durasteel. If the framing is broken, the pressure created from the servos is negated, as well as nearly entirely immobilizing the digits beneath.
The leg platings are just average durasteel plates, which is capable of defending against melee weapons for a break time, but nothing further. For the flight enabling tech, he has a total of 3 minute maximum flight (20 second bursts) sustainable power. The gas for which is held in a long thin tube along his spinal cord, underneath the armor.
Droid Mind tech is the base for the computerized controls over everything internally. The Mind is weaved into all of the technologies (meaning an EMP will take out the weapons and escape tools) which leaves the procsses as hand free, while endangering the stability of the suit itself. For the visual sensors, the helmet holds the capacity to see into the Electromagnetic scale, the Thermal scale, low light as well as macro binocular enhancements - allowing the wearer to see the hairs on the back of a fly at a hundred feet, stretching to its greatest extent at 200 yards.
PAST V2 ~ Having utilized the suit for many years now, it grew beaten and dented. Buffing these out, then fixing the scratches, Damien decided that he would fix the suit ever more. Instead of a simple refurbish however, he chose utter new appendages.
Firstly he replaced the Beskar-Durasteel compound of the torso, with a pure laden rolled-not-folded sheet of Beskar. This alone rose the pure defensive capability by nearly twice what it was. Second he added another layer to the Gauntlets, making sure to pay extra attention to the joints and like with a mesh. To which made it the strongest of the armors defense. The bracers and helmet were given the same treatment, save made from Phrik instead.
The biggest issues to come with such increase in durability? Weight and maneuverability. Hence additions of servos built into every joint, not to produce enhanced strength, no, simply to counter the weight issue. While the suit has power, his mobility will not be hindered, as the suit will literally carry its own. With this though, is always the retained mobile qualms: such as using the Force to jump etcetera. Fos will need so much energy spent to do so.
PRESENT ~ Since becoming a hermit, Damien (now known as Fos) has remodeled the suit in several ways. Firstly being an entirely new aesthetic design, as well as reshaping metals and adding buffers so that his daughter Adriel may be able to utilize the suit now. It has for a long while been known as the "Symbol of the Daemon Clan", and so he has applied the Clan Crest dominantly along the right chest plate.
With this he relinquished all ownership of the suit. From then on, it would always be known as belonging to [member="Tempist"].
Classification: Multipurpose
Weight: 90 kg
Quality: Class 9.5
Helmet ~ 7
Bracers ~ 7
Gauntlets ~ 10
Torso ~ 10
Other Feature(s): N/A
Current Design:
Intent: To give a face to the armor he has been using since he first joined the Mandalorians
Development Thread:Manufacturer: Daemos
Model: Sith Beskar'gam The Symbol of the Daemon Clan
Affiliation: Daemos [member="Tempist"]
Modularity: N/A
Production: Unique
Material: Beskar - Phrik - Armorweave
Helmet Utilities:
360° Macro-binocular View-plate
Infrared/Electromagnetic/Low-Light Scanner
Droid Mind Verbal Interface (Vessel & Armor Systems)
Oxygen Reserve Tank (2 Hour Supply)
Audio Receptor w/Amplifier
Encrypted Internal Comlink
Oxygen Filtration System
HUD (Heads-up-Display)
Motion Sensors
Armor Components:
Armorweave Cloak w/Hood
Armorweave Body Glove
Durasteel Leg Bracers
Bracer Rockets
Beskar Gauntlets
Beskar/Durasteel Torso
JT-12 Jetpack
Gauntlet Utilities:
Dur-24 Wrist Laser
Crushgaunts
Description:
Past ~ Upon his admittance to the ranks of the Mandalorian, several decades previously, it was a different time for Daemos. He was even more ruthless than he is now, taking the image of a demon as a way to back his endeavors. In the more recent times he once again brought it forth, to great joy for the man.
The torso is crafted from a finely combined Beskar-Durasteel compound, which is capable of sustaining minor plasma battle. Initially crafted from simply Beskar, he realized that such a piece would be imbecilic; being to heavy, to expensive etc. Each plate that combines to build the entirety of the mold is susceptible to repeated lightsaber strikes, sacrificing durability in place of more speed, while still being able to be struck three times in one place. This is also where the droid mind, and most of the technological equipment is located so as to allow the Helmet to not be overbearing on its own weight.
Each Gauntlet holds the most lightsaber resistance, being severely durable while ungodly heavy for simple gauntlets. Crafted from rolled, rather than flattened, planks even furthers the durability of the Beskar. Beside the overall epic capabilities held by each, comes crushgaunts made entirely by Daemos. They arent as physically durable as the normal crushgaunt internal frame, leaving the hands in danger if a powerful enough pressure hits them - as the gaunts internal frame are crafted from durasteel. If the framing is broken, the pressure created from the servos is negated, as well as nearly entirely immobilizing the digits beneath.
The leg platings are just average durasteel plates, which is capable of defending against melee weapons for a break time, but nothing further. For the flight enabling tech, he has a total of 3 minute maximum flight (20 second bursts) sustainable power. The gas for which is held in a long thin tube along his spinal cord, underneath the armor.
Droid Mind tech is the base for the computerized controls over everything internally. The Mind is weaved into all of the technologies (meaning an EMP will take out the weapons and escape tools) which leaves the procsses as hand free, while endangering the stability of the suit itself. For the visual sensors, the helmet holds the capacity to see into the Electromagnetic scale, the Thermal scale, low light as well as macro binocular enhancements - allowing the wearer to see the hairs on the back of a fly at a hundred feet, stretching to its greatest extent at 200 yards.
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PAST V2 ~ Having utilized the suit for many years now, it grew beaten and dented. Buffing these out, then fixing the scratches, Damien decided that he would fix the suit ever more. Instead of a simple refurbish however, he chose utter new appendages.
Firstly he replaced the Beskar-Durasteel compound of the torso, with a pure laden rolled-not-folded sheet of Beskar. This alone rose the pure defensive capability by nearly twice what it was. Second he added another layer to the Gauntlets, making sure to pay extra attention to the joints and like with a mesh. To which made it the strongest of the armors defense. The bracers and helmet were given the same treatment, save made from Phrik instead.
The biggest issues to come with such increase in durability? Weight and maneuverability. Hence additions of servos built into every joint, not to produce enhanced strength, no, simply to counter the weight issue. While the suit has power, his mobility will not be hindered, as the suit will literally carry its own. With this though, is always the retained mobile qualms: such as using the Force to jump etcetera. Fos will need so much energy spent to do so.
----+++----
PRESENT ~ Since becoming a hermit, Damien (now known as Fos) has remodeled the suit in several ways. Firstly being an entirely new aesthetic design, as well as reshaping metals and adding buffers so that his daughter Adriel may be able to utilize the suit now. It has for a long while been known as the "Symbol of the Daemon Clan", and so he has applied the Clan Crest dominantly along the right chest plate.
With this he relinquished all ownership of the suit. From then on, it would always be known as belonging to [member="Tempist"].
Classification: Multipurpose
Weight: 90 kg
Quality: Class 9.5
Helmet ~ 7
Bracers ~ 7
Gauntlets ~ 10
Torso ~ 10
Other Feature(s): N/A
B E A C O N
[member="Zef Halo"]
While there was development done to keep the 50 meter range earlier during the initial submission, that was for semi-unique production. As you're asking for a raise to minor, I'd like another 10-15 posts of development. Whether it's collection/allotment of funds, more R&D, as long as it's relevant to the submission and the changes you're asking for it'll be acceptable.
[member="Draco Vereen"]
Archived.
While there was development done to keep the 50 meter range earlier during the initial submission, that was for semi-unique production. As you're asking for a raise to minor, I'd like another 10-15 posts of development. Whether it's collection/allotment of funds, more R&D, as long as it's relevant to the submission and the changes you're asking for it'll be acceptable.
[member="Draco Vereen"]
Archived.
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Do you have an image for me to change?Rylan Thatcher said:
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[member="Fos Misao"]
Updated
Updated
Gherron Dragovalor
Space dad
B E A C O N
[member="Rylan Thatcher"]
Updated
Updated
Good Ol' Scoundrel
[member="Lisette Kuhn"]
Submission Name: Shatter Beam Pistol
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/87959-shatter-beam-pistol/
Summary of Modification:
Modification:
Submission Name: Shatter Beam Pistol
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/87959-shatter-beam-pistol/
Summary of Modification:
- Production
- Affiliation
- Manufacturer
- Slight change to description
- Range
Modification:
- Production change to Limited
- Affiliation change to Mandalorian Crusaders
- Manufacturer to Arakyd Industries and Outer Rim Engineer and Development
- Description: Remove this from the sentence - The shatter beam pistol is a perfect fit for Augustus Fel and reflects his destructive nature.
- Optimum range: 50m
B E A C O N
[member="Zef Halo"]
I need the link for both manufacturers, please.
I need the link for both manufacturers, please.
Good Ol' Scoundrel
B E A C O N
[member="Zef Halo"]
Updated
Updated
Laira Darkhold
Well-Known Member
Submission Name: Kandosii'beskad
Link to Submission:
Reason for Modification: I wanted it to be able to be a Greatsword too, and I felt like toning it down a tad... Don't judge me.
Summary of Modification:
I beg of thee to change my fonts back after you copy paste, as they often default from 14 to just Size.
Link to Submission:
Reason for Modification: I wanted it to be able to be a Greatsword too, and I felt like toning it down a tad... Don't judge me.
Summary of Modification:
- New Picture
- Changed Lengths
- Removed Ostrine and Ionite
- Added Ijaat Mereel as a Manufacturer
KANDOSII'BESKAD
Image Source: Herehttp://www.keyword-suggestions.com/YnJvYWRzd29yZA/
Intent: Draco's Sword, I got tired of carrying around three weapons, so I combined them.
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Development Thread:
Model: Not Applicable
Affiliation: Select PC's
Modularity: Yes
Material: Phrikhttp://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Phrik/Legends, Cortosis, Electronics
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
Classification: Machete/Sword/Spear
Size: One Handed or Two Handed
Length:
Blade:
DESCRIPTION
Rygel Larraq is not often a front line warrior seen with the vanguard. After having built the series of Captain Larraq's Naast'beskad, a fine, proper weapon any warrior, built to the Slayer of Dromund Kaas's specific standards, Draco took back to the design, looking it over and incorporating some lessons with forging, Metallurgy, and Art of the Small to create a fearsome weapon to the Mandalorian’s liking.
The Kandosii'beskad were forged beneath the mountains on Concordia, deep in the Clan Hall of Clan Vereen, tempered in blood and ice from the moon, forged in fires fueled by the Mandalorian's own Force Power, and cast against his beskar hammer and anvil. The spear appears similar to a beskad, with a broad blade, being short, and a tad on the heavy side for a weapon of its size, allowing it to be wielded in the traditional style of Mandalorian warriors easily and seamlessly, fitting for any son of Mandalore.
First, the handle. The hilt of the weapon is made from Phrik, a light-weight substance known for its incredible durability and lightsaber resistance. The main reason Phrik was used for the haft and hilt of the weapon was because of the Echani Molecular Compression technology being fused with it made the beskar hilt far too back heavy given that the blade itself wasn't excessively heavy. The Phrik modeled version is perfectly balanced weight for a one-and-a-half handed sword.
Second the hilt guard is made of Cortosis, a very light weight material as well. This was then alchemized and imbued with Force Power, allowing it to absorb different forms of Force Lightning, such as Ionize and Electric Judgement into the guard, and channel it through the blade when the blade strikes something, in a burst of electrical Force power. Because the hilt is so small, the alchemy has a minimal effect on the weapons' weight. The crossguard's interior is lined with electrical resistant material to prevent the energy from conducting through it and the blade into the hilt or half of the weapon.
Third the buttspike of the hilt and haft are crafted in the manner of a Force Pike's power tip and discharge capacitor crafted from cortosis, forged with the aid of Sith Alchemy to enhance its durability. The small spike can send a shock using a concentrated nerve impulse similar to a stun blast or electrostaff. At the lowest setting, the spear can deliver excruciating electrical shocks, higher setting are said to be able to cause temporary paralysis and muscle spasm, sometimes even death, and at maximum setting the spike can be driven through flesh, bone, and even durasteel plating with relative ease. It is powerful enough to incapacitate a full grown wookiee with its nerve shock.
Finally the blade itself. The blade is crafted from specially treated and altered phrik, molecularly re-aligned so that it would never dull and lose its razor-sharp edge, it would never rust or decay, and would be slightly more durable than normal phrik similar as though it had been Force Imbued. The very minor treatments of metallurgy and alchemy, using old techniques allows it to operate similar to a Sith Sword, absorbing lightning and reflecting energy blasts.
Special Features:
Intent: Draco's Sword, I got tired of carrying around three weapons, so I combined them.
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Development Thread:
- Phrik: http://starwarsrp.ne...gainst-sekalus/http://starwarsrp.net/topic/76857-raid-death-watch-piracy-against-sekalus/
- Cortosis: http://starwarsrp.ne...n-on-a-mission/http://starwarsrp.net/topic/82569-man-on-a-mission/
Model: Not Applicable
Affiliation: Select PC's
Modularity: Yes
- Aesthetics
Material: Phrikhttp://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Phrik/Legends, Cortosis, Electronics
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
Classification: Machete/Sword/Spear
Size: One Handed or Two Handed
Length:
Blade:
- Knight’s Sword: 75 Centimeters
- Greatsword: 120 Centimeters
- Spear: 30 Centimeters
- Knight's Sword: 20 Centimeters
- Greatsword: 30 Centimeters
- Spear: 140 Centimeters
DESCRIPTION
Rygel Larraq is not often a front line warrior seen with the vanguard. After having built the series of Captain Larraq's Naast'beskad, a fine, proper weapon any warrior, built to the Slayer of Dromund Kaas's specific standards, Draco took back to the design, looking it over and incorporating some lessons with forging, Metallurgy, and Art of the Small to create a fearsome weapon to the Mandalorian’s liking.
The Kandosii'beskad were forged beneath the mountains on Concordia, deep in the Clan Hall of Clan Vereen, tempered in blood and ice from the moon, forged in fires fueled by the Mandalorian's own Force Power, and cast against his beskar hammer and anvil. The spear appears similar to a beskad, with a broad blade, being short, and a tad on the heavy side for a weapon of its size, allowing it to be wielded in the traditional style of Mandalorian warriors easily and seamlessly, fitting for any son of Mandalore.
First, the handle. The hilt of the weapon is made from Phrik, a light-weight substance known for its incredible durability and lightsaber resistance. The main reason Phrik was used for the haft and hilt of the weapon was because of the Echani Molecular Compression technology being fused with it made the beskar hilt far too back heavy given that the blade itself wasn't excessively heavy. The Phrik modeled version is perfectly balanced weight for a one-and-a-half handed sword.
Second the hilt guard is made of Cortosis, a very light weight material as well. This was then alchemized and imbued with Force Power, allowing it to absorb different forms of Force Lightning, such as Ionize and Electric Judgement into the guard, and channel it through the blade when the blade strikes something, in a burst of electrical Force power. Because the hilt is so small, the alchemy has a minimal effect on the weapons' weight. The crossguard's interior is lined with electrical resistant material to prevent the energy from conducting through it and the blade into the hilt or half of the weapon.
Third the buttspike of the hilt and haft are crafted in the manner of a Force Pike's power tip and discharge capacitor crafted from cortosis, forged with the aid of Sith Alchemy to enhance its durability. The small spike can send a shock using a concentrated nerve impulse similar to a stun blast or electrostaff. At the lowest setting, the spear can deliver excruciating electrical shocks, higher setting are said to be able to cause temporary paralysis and muscle spasm, sometimes even death, and at maximum setting the spike can be driven through flesh, bone, and even durasteel plating with relative ease. It is powerful enough to incapacitate a full grown wookiee with its nerve shock.
Finally the blade itself. The blade is crafted from specially treated and altered phrik, molecularly re-aligned so that it would never dull and lose its razor-sharp edge, it would never rust or decay, and would be slightly more durable than normal phrik similar as though it had been Force Imbued. The very minor treatments of metallurgy and alchemy, using old techniques allows it to operate similar to a Sith Sword, absorbing lightning and reflecting energy blasts.
Special Features:
- Compression/Decompression: The Weapon's handle is able to be extended, taking it from a One Handed Knight's Sword to a Two Handed Spear using Echani Molecular Compression Technology, while the blade is able to elongate into a Greatsword almost doubling its length.
- Lightsaber Resistant: The Handle is made of Phrik, a Lightweight Lightsaber Resistant Metal, and the blade and crossguard are both alchemized to be Lightsaber Resistant as well.
- Short Out: The Buttspike, pommel, and crossguard are made from Cortosis, able to deactivate lightsabers on contact.
- Blaster Deflector: With the Magnetic Polarity reversed, the weapon is able to deflect Blasters, Charrics, Ion weaponry, and other energy based weapons like a Sith Sword is able to.
- Lightning Absorption: As with basic Sith Swords the guard of the weapon can absorb lightning, electric judgement, and ionize bolts it comes in contact with and release it when the blade strikes a solid object.
- Enhanced Edge: The edge of the blade is much sharper than normal, enhancing its cutting capabilities greatly. Furthermore, the whole blade is constructed similar to that of a Force Pike, allowing it to slice through Durasteel plates with relative ease.
- Stunner: The Buttspike is actually a pretty powerful Force Pike, capable of incapacitating a full grown wookiee on full power, or worse.
- http://starwarsrp.ne...68-naastbeskad/http://starwarsrp.net/topic/76868-naastbeskad/
- http://starwars.wiki...ce_pike/Legendshttp://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Force_pike/Legends
- http://starwars.wiki...wiki/Sith_swordhttp://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Sith_sword
- http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Force-imbued_blade
I beg of thee to change my fonts back after you copy paste, as they often default from 14 to just Size.
Judah Dashiell
Salvage Empire
- Submission Name : Advanced Heads Up Display Tracker
- Link to Submission : http://starwarsrp.net/topic/49559-advanced-heads-up-display-tracker/
- Reason for Modification : Ownership change , Auction results
- Summary : Judah's son [member="Makai Dashiell"] was gifted Laravan Corporation in an auction by [member="Danger Arceneau"] .Judah currently runs the corporation. In a recent auction, Judah took the currently unused HUD Tracker and used it as a bargaining chip with the Mandos and Clan Rekali. HUD Tracker rights have been revoked from the One Sith(in place before his acquirement) and are now transferred to those he promised it to under his leadership.
Laravan Corporation : http://starwarsrp.net/topic/38188-laravan-corporation/?hl=%2Blaravan+%2Bcorporation[Ownership transfer at bottom]
Gordian Reach Auction : http://starwarsrp.net/topic/90877-the-great-gordian-reach-sector-auction/page-2[Auction results]
Advanced Heads Up Display Tracker : http://starwarsrp.net/topic/49559-advanced-heads-up-display-tracker/
Good Ol' Scoundrel
Submission name: Gheleon's Bo-Rifle
Link to submission: At work atm and it won't let me link it Sorry, Lis. If you can use the search bar in the approved technology for me, I would be really grateful.
Reason for Modification: Old character (Gheleon) is dead so I am changing the ownership of the weapon to this one - Ghul Taran
Summary of Modification: New affiliation.
Modification:
Affiliation change to Ghul Taran
Link to submission: At work atm and it won't let me link it
Sorry, Lis. If you can use the search bar in the approved technology for me, I would be really grateful.Reason for Modification: Old character (Gheleon) is dead so I am changing the ownership of the weapon to this one - Ghul Taran
Summary of Modification: New affiliation.
Modification:
Affiliation change to Ghul Taran