Approved Starship Ragnos-class Qotsisajakaar Superiority Starfighter 'Speed Lover Mk. I' Line

[Avernus]

Spoiler: Image (Bad Photoshop)

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a cool interceptor-style starfighter tailored to the strengths of force users.
• Image Source: Original image found here. Edits done by yours truly.
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: [x][x][x]
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: AvCorp™ Enterprises
• Affiliation:
  • Avernus and his apprentices.
  • The Qotsisajakaar
• Model: RG66-QOT 'SPDLVR' Mk. I
• Production: Semi-Unique
• Material:
  • Composite Hull
  • Impervium
  • Matrix Armor
  • CP90 Durasteel
  • Laminanium
  • Durasteel

Alusteel Skeleton
Faraday Cage Components
Electronic Components
Computing Components

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Interceptor
• Length: 8m
• Width: 4m
• Height: 2.2m
• Armament: High
  • Rapid-Fire Heavy Laser Cannons [x4]
  • Missile Launchers [x4]​
    • Proton Torpedoes
    • Brilliant Missiles
• Defenses: Low
  • Composite Hull
  • Deflector Shielding
  • Particle Shielding
  • Ray Shielding
  • Ion Shielding
• Squadron Count: None
• Maneuverability Rating: Extreme
• Speed Rating: Extreme
  • Twin Ion Drives
  • In-line SLAM Drive
• Hyperdrive Class: Average

STANDARD FEATURES

• C-3A Mercury Class Communications Suite
• LS-132 Terra Life Support Systems
• Sensitive and highly-responsive controls.

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

• IE-10 Event Horizon Ion Drives
• Nightshadow Coating
• C-31a Dog Fight Inertial Compensator
• Laser Reflective Armor
• AR-0B Damage Reduction Armor Component
• Anti-Ion Emission Tracers
• Shroud

STRENGTHS

• Do You Have Any Idea How Fast I Am?: The lightweight and specially designed frame of the 'Speed Lover' ships, coupled with the Even Horizon Ion Drives being constantly overclocked by the onboard SLAM Drive allow this interception to scream across the battlefield at blinding speeds.
• You Almost Had It. You Gotta Be Quicker Than That!: The internal compensators and highly responsive controls make the 'Speed Lover' an extremely slippery and almost obnoxiously maneuverable ship.

WEAKNESSES

• Can I get some uhhhhhh, Force Powers?: The lack of sensors and other systems within 'Speed Lover' interceptors mean that the pilots will be heavily reliant on their force-sensitive capabilities in order to navigate and detect enemy ships.
• Does a 10 hit your AC?: The defenses included on 'Speed Lover' are at a bare minimum level to keep the ship function in atmospheres and to protect against space debris. While not quite a paper-starfighter, they still aren't very durable. Like the lack of sensors, the lack of heavy defenses requires the pilot to rely on their force-sensitive capabilities to keep the ship intact.

DESCRIPTION
Along with the Turbo L.O.V.E.R, several starships were also commissioned. Emphasizing speed and armament, the original design from the MASSIVE BRAIN OF THE MIGHTY Gat Tambor was modified by Avernus to forgo certain systems than could be substituted by the pilot's use of the force. Omitting these features allowed engineers to make the ships faster and with heavier armament. The small group of ships was made specifically for Darth Avernus and his apprentices in mind. Some select members of the Qotsisajakaar will also be allowed to use the unclaimed models.

 

[Avernus]

Stand up. There you go. You were dreaming, what's your name?

[ John Locke ]

Not even last night's storm could wake you. I've heard them say we've reached Morrowind, I'm sure [you'll move this to factory kthx].

 

[Listib Hibin]

We have some problems!


NECESSARY CHANGES!

Image Source: Original image found here. Edits done by yours truly.

Please like the website where you found this. Not just the image itself.


Inform me when you make the listed changes and we can move forward! This submission by the way...is scary.
Avernus

 

[Avernus]

Listib Hibin

I changed the link to the wookie article where I pulled the image. Hopefully that puts everything in order.

 

[Listib Hibin]

Yep!
Approved! Awaiting Mentor Approval!

Avernus
John Locke

 

[John Locke]

Avernus | Listib Hibin

Looking good so far. there is just one thing that jumps out at me.

Permissions

I've noticed that you're using someone else's' company, Technoid Manufacturing, along with the DS 'Cuora' Pattern anti-disruptor plating, which is a closed market submission. Before we can approve this submission please provide the required permissions to use both of these. In addition, the C-31a "Dog Fight" Inertial Compensator is a closed market submission and as such permissions need to be provided for its use.

 

[Avernus]

John Locke

Ope. Yep. I once again forgot to list my permissions in a sub. Hopefully, everything is in order now.

 

[John Locke]

Avernus

This is going to sound pernickety, but none of the permissions provided actually allow you to use Technoid as a manufacturer, just to use their products. If you were to remove Technoid as a manufacturer that would be fine, or get additional permission.

In the same way, Darth Mailphant's permission says NGO. A small thing I know, but it'll prevent any issues down the line.

 

[Avernus]

John Locke

No worries, I initially misunderstood the original issue with the perms so that's on me. I removed Technoid as a Manufacturer and just stuck to AvCorp only. I also went ahead and got properly worded permissions for the Inertial Compensator, and removed the 'Cuora' Pattern armor because I for some reason thought it was a technoid sub and mistakenly listed it thinking I had permission.

 

[John Locke]

Avernus

Thank you so much for fixing that.

APPROVED