Approved Tech Paladin Power Armour

[Ira Sarrin]

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a set of armour for the Paladins of Nomadic Peoples Coalition
• Image Source: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/Ydr8Y
• Canon Link: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Powersuit
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Nomadic Peoples Coalition
• Affiliation: Nomadic Peoples Coalition
• Market Status: Closed-Market
• Model: Paladins Armour
• Modularity: No
• Production: Limited
• Materials:
  • Titanium
  • Durasteel
  • Thermal Gel
  • Armorweave
  • Beskar
  • Various other components

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Power Armour
• Weight: Extreme
• Resistances:
  • Energy: High
  • Kinetic: High
  • Lightsabers: High
  • Extreme Temperatures: High
  • Radiation: Very High
  • ION/EMP: Low

SPECIAL FEATURES

• All:
  • Servo Motors
  • Life Support
  • Micro Fusion Reactor
  • Vacuumed Sealed
• Helmet:
  • HUD
  • Angel Navis Operating System
  • Encrypted Comlink
  • MFTAS
  • A variety of Sensors
• Torso:
  • Built in Jet-pack (Allows for easier movement in space and dropping from orbit)
  • Pouches for spare magazines
• Arms:
  • 2 x Fallen Angel Reentry Shield Mk1 (one per arm)
• Legs:
  • Magnetic Space Boots

STRENGTHS

• Servo Motors
• Durable

WEAKNESSES

• Loud
• Heavy

DESCRIPTION

The original idea for the armour was to fill in the need for some sort of heavy armour for the Holy Knights Infantry when they complained about the lack of armour support and mobility on ground and ship actions however once the first prototype was finished and presented to Willow & Ivy. The Holy Prophets being so impressed by the quality of the power armour decided instead give it to the then new Paladin core.

 

[MANIAC]

Ira Sarrin

• I'm sorry, but I cannot accept it in this form. The materials that you wrote never give any "Force resistance" to the armour, so here the Average already means None, and you cannot go under the Average to gain free points for it. Due to this, I have to ask you to modify the Force resistance to Average and please adjust the other resistances accordingly.
  • And please modify the other resistances as well in the light of this.
• And about the image, we never accept links which leads into only the art (.jpg, .png, etc), and usually we never accept Pinterest or Reddit either if the art exists in different places. But this time not, and it looks like this reddit link was made by the creator, so please use this.

 

[Ira Sarrin]

Hello MANIAC I've fixed the image issue fingers crossed. On the other issue of the force resistance the Angel Navis Operating System does give very minimal protection as it in part has a soul within it, I hope that explanation makes sense and thank you very much for your help.

 

[MANIAC]

Ira Sarrin

I see, but due to the materials the Average = None . So you cannot go under the non existing resistance. If you want minimal resistance please use the "High" as rating.

 

[Ira Sarrin]

MANIAC hopefully the resistances have been sorted, thank you very much for your help and your patience

 

[MANIAC]

Ira Sarrin

Yes, it is good now. Thank you!

Approved.

 

[John Locke]

Ira Sarrin | MANIAC

This submission is being pulled due to its similarities with the power armour from Warhammer 40K.

While all power armour has certain similarities, your armour is rather too close to the Warhammer power armour for comfort.

In particular the emphasis on the powered gauntlets, similar to the powered gauntlets of the Space Marines.

Constructed for one of only a handful of Paladins of the Nomadic Peoples Coalition each suit is in it's own right a work of art, each and every suit is hand crafted for the specific wearer and a part of a Paladins initiation rituals is to stand in vigil over the master artisans of the Keeper caste as they make it without succumbing to sleep.

This section of your description is very much a rip from the space marines of 40k.

Overall your armour is right on the line, so I'm going to need to make some adjustments to pull the armour away from Warhammer. Adjusting the description and image would be a good start along with fleshing out the armour itself a little.

 

[Ira Sarrin]

Hello John Locke first I'd like to apologist for any trouble I've caused and hopefully I've sorted out the problems.

 

[John Locke]

Ira Sarrin

Thank you for your apology, but no trouble at all. This is perfect thank you.

Thank you for taking the time to correct this so quickly.

Approved