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Approved NPC McGill | Fleshtaker Reborn






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[OOC] [PHYSICAL] [SOCIAL] [COMBAT] [TRAITS] [HISTORICAL]


OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION​


INTENT: To document a resident of the Reef.
IMAGE CREDIT: Detroit: Become Human | Insect Warrior | Azrael Asylum logo
ROLE: McGill is a mysterious figure who has recently taken up residence in the Reef.
PERMISSIONS: N/A
LINKS: N/A

THIS BIO HAS BEEN COMPILED FROM THE FOLLOWING FILE SOURCES: AZRAEL ASYLUM PSYCHIATRIC PROFILES M-Z, CAMP SPYRIDON REFUGEE CENSUS, LAO-MON PLANETARY DEFENSE FORCES DATABANKS...



PHYSICAL INFORMATION​


AGE: 40s (Young Adult by the standards of his species)
FORCE SENSITIVE: Untrained Force Sensitive
SPECIES: Shi'ido
APPEARANCE:
McGill's appearance can vary wildly, but the most common form he assumes are that of a winged bipedal mothlike creature. His facial expressions are often exaggerated, or he displays an excessive reaction to various stimuli. Voice quivers when speaking (sounds whiny) or he speaks in a very low register (sounds creaky). He seems to go out of his way to unsettle others with unpredictable shifts in mood and demeanor, or by altering his appearance in grotesque ways. Since he does this as a way of frightening and controlling others, it is important to avoid showing surprise, fear, or uncertainty when he undergoes these transformations.



SOCIAL INFORMATION​


FULL NAME: Unknown
KNOWN ALIAS: "McGill"
OCCUPATION: Mercenary/Rebel Soldier/Refugee
LOYALTIES: Sithspawn Sanctorium
*Lingering effects from having been brainwashed have left McGill's loyalties fractured, shifting, and uncertain. He displays some degree of patriotism with regards to his homeworld, Lao-mon, and perhaps a lingering loyalty to the Mician Clan into which he was born and raised. He was a soldier in the Lao-mon Planetary Defense Forces, otherwise known as the Shi’ido rebel army, but for much of his time in their service, he was actually a double agent of the Brotherhood of the Maw.
WEALTH: Negligible
NOTABLE POSSESSIONS:
SKILLS:
  • Explosives expert
  • Training with firearms, martial arts
  • Repairs droids
  • Decent pilot
PERSONALITY: Brash and bitter, the one thing saving McGill from crashing and burning is his sense of humor. His inability to take the galaxy seriously anymore, no matter how much it hurts him, has given him endurance enough to survive anything. But it doesn't mean he can't still be hurt, and that same nasty galaxy keeps coming up with new and exciting ways to inflict pain.
Enslaved to a cruel mistress, McGill still isn't completely sure he's free from her clutches - in a way, he never will be. The "breaking" by the Maw has left him with a fractured personality; one side that is very much aware that something is wrong with him, and another that either doesn't care, or revels in it. He suffers from mood swings and his behavior is unpredictable.
Prior to his breaking, McGill was a teenage gang member turned rebel soldier. He still carries the rebel spirit, and chafes under authority. He can be quite manipulative, but these days he mainly just wants to be left alone.
LAST KNOWN RESIDENCE: The Reef, Coruscant



COMBAT INFORMATION​

WEAPON OF CHOICE: Explosives
COMBAT FUNCTION: Preferring to go out with a bang, McGill prefers big, loud guns, explosives, and flamethrowers. His aim in combat is to cause as much damage as possible, across as wide a range as possible. Like many Shi'ido, he avoids wearing armor so as not to impair his shapeshifting; as a result, he has a low damage threshold. He can survive even if he loses a few limbs, though at a certain point he will be unable to keep fighting.



TRAITS​


S T R E N G T H S
SHAPESHIFTER: McGill is a Shi'ido, a species of shapeshifter with a wide range of malleability. He can mimic the characteristics of other living beings or objects, though he cannot drastically increase or decrease his mass without great effort. This also gives him the ability to regenerate lost limbs and damaged tissue over time.
SOLDIER OF FORTUNE: McGill shows clear signs of having worked as a mercenary, exhibiting numerous skills and training (see Abilities section).
FORCE SENSITIVE: McGill is sensitive to the Force, but untrained.
NOMAD: McGill grew up as a member of a tribe of wanderers. He is predisposed to mobility and independence, never content to settle in one place, and also knows how to "disappear" if need be.

W E A K N E S S E S
MENTALLY UNSTABLE: Even after being deprogrammed, McGill has been left with post-traumatic stress disorder and a tangled web of other neuroses. His Mician heritage makes him weak-minded and vulnerable to skilled telepaths.
ARSONIST: McGill harbors an unhealthy obsession with fire, explosions, and chaos in general. He has been repeatedly arrested for arson.
HATRED: McGill is most motivated by rage, lashing out violently against all who dare oppose him - even if it would be best to back down.




HISTORICAL INFORMATION​

KNOWN HISTORY:
  • Born and raised a member of the Mician clan
  • Left Lao-mon some time during childhood, raised elsewhere (learned to speak Basic, fighting, demolitions, other skills?)
  • Returned to homeworld at the beginning of the Maw conquest to join the rebels ("sacred duty"...?)
  • Was not well regarded by his superiors, who viewed him as a "troublemaker" and "loose cannon"
  • Started a gang within the rebel ranks which operated independently of the rest of the army, known for prolific use of explosives against the enemy
  • Was captured by the Mawites, tortured and "broken" into a Fleshtaker
  • Released and continued to live among the rebels as a sleeper agent up until failed liberation attempt
  • Evacuated along with numerous other rebels to Refugee Camp Spyridon, where his condition deteriorated
  • Admitted to an Azrael Asylum facility for treatment
  • Escaped during the Maw assault on Coruscant...
  • ... only to be captured yet again amid the chaos by a female Shi'ido "witch"
  • She suddenly abandoned him on Ession, where he was found attacking a Crusader with a double-bladed lightsaber
  • He was later rescued by the Benandanti, who successfully restored his mind
  • As a Shi'ido refugee, he wound up staying at the Reef, a sanctuary for Sithspawn and others affected by the Sith on Coruscant

  • Things Fall Apart - First appearance as NPC. McGill is part of a group of Shi'ido returning to Lao-mon at the beginning of the Maw conquest, led by a small squad of Jedi including Ala and Errik Nimdok. Participated in an early assault on the Goshen War Camp (well, a rescue mission, actually). COMPLETED
  • The Great Battle of Coruscant - McGill escapes from Azrael Asylum during the Maw attack on Coruscant.
  • Arsonist's Lullabye - "Official" character introduction. McGill tries to commit arson but can't get the lighter to work. He encounters Damsy Callat, who chases him briefly before he loses her in the city.
  • Impossible Hour - Identified as "the arsonist", McGill gets tricked by a woman and fights with Kai, resulting in his hands being cut off. Kai is knocked unconscious and McGill seemingly disappears.
  • Unearthing Horror - Captured by a mysterious Shi'ido witch, McGill is forced to join in the breaching of an ancient "tomb" on Lao-mon.
  • Homecoming - McGill fights a Crusader and is defeated.


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STATUS: ALIVE
RISK ASSESSMENT: MEDIUM



SHI'IDO FLESHTAKER REBORN



Div by Kyra Perl
 
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Under Review Kai Bamarri Kai Bamarri

This is a cool concept (stop stealing my Fleshtakers tho, I need them to burn the galaxy with), and the Div looks great! Just one thing is missing before approval. Per Codex rules, no template fields may be omitted. This sub is missing the Personality field under Social Information. Please add that back in, and we should be good to go!
 

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