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Approved Species Kreea Shrill

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To expand the lore of several subs
  • Image Credit: White Lion Spirit King
  • Canon: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: N/A
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Kreea Shrill
  • Designation: Semi-Sentient
  • Origins:
  • Average Lifespan: 50 Years
  • Estimated Population: Scattered
  • Description: Thickly muscled and covered in soft white fur. THey reside near crystal caves on the world and staunchly defend them from others with hostile intent. THeir manes are thick white fur that is very soft and when they shred it yearly if it is collected for conforters and pillows. THe fully grown males can stand on all four legs near five feet tall with whitish gold claws for digging into rock and ice.
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Breathes: Type I
  • Average Height of Adults: 1.75m
  • Average Length of Adults: 2m
  • Skin color: Pink
  • Hair color: White/Silver
  • Distinctions: Stands on four legs with a thick mane of hair and is able to roam around in the snow and ice.
  • Races: N/A
  • Force Sensitivity: All
Strengths:
  • Weather Adaptedt: Adapted to the cold and harsh environment of RHen Var, their noses can find small amounts of food and their fur keeps them warm, claws made to dig into ice and minorly into stone. THeir fur is soft but with a semi oily sheen to prevent snow from penetrating to their skin
  • Loyal Creatures: When raised from birth with a single individual they can become very loyal and friendly. Willing to defend and protect their masters.
  • One Sided: Their meat, is slightly poisoned for most creatures. It is high in mercury and will make others who eat it deathly ill with a possibility of them dying
  • Senses: Living on Rhen Var where solari force crystal are natural and other crystals. Their senses have adapted to finding the crystals under the snow and in the caves of the world.
Weaknesses:
  • No Sweat Glands: Adapted to the cold weather of Rhen Var, their thick bodies and fur let them survive in the cold. Off world outside of cold environments they can't handle the heat and will start to die.
    • Note: With their thick fur and no sweat glands running and overworking their bodies for long periods of time can be equally dangerous on the planet itself
  • Flammable: Due to their fur-covered bodies, fire poses a significant threat to them.
  • Force Nullification: They are able to sense and hunt crystals in the force. Without it they are still massive beasts but they lose a lot of their senses pretaining to hunting and tracking across large distances.
  • Mentally Open: Their minds are easier to reach and connect with using telepathic techniques like beast language/taming. Making them easier to influence
CULTURE
  • Diet: Omnivore: THey can eat just about anything on Rhen Var, buried in the ice and snow. What small vegetation that can grow near geothermal vents in caves or small creatures around the crystal caves. In the end they are omnivores.
  • Communication: Roars
  • Technology level: Far Below Galactic Standard
  • Religion/Beliefs: Regarded as noble creatures by those who are on Rhen Var, they can be seen as guardians of crystal caves and jedi tombs.
  • General behavior:
    • With the World:
      • Born on Rhen Var and attracted to the different locations where crystals and force users have been buried. THey are not able to use the force but are more like a bloodhound and able to sense it namely the lightside of the force in the form of the Solari Crystals that naturally grow on the planet. They are not fully sentient but seem to have an animal level of intelligence and can be domesticated in small groups to be used as guard animals of temples and crypts on the planet. THey forage for food below the frost layer and a number of the different species on the world that have slowly been transported to build up its own Eco-system.
    • With Each Other:
      • They are friendly, attacking sometimes but no more then any other creature with their own kind. They can generally be found in small groups of 5-10 with one or three being adults and the rest children. Once they are old enough to survive they head out on their own and find their own mate or area to live. Groupings of them can be found around large caves usually with crystals or geothermal vents with the largest generally in the front of the cave while the young ones or the really old are in the back. Fights do happen and they can be vicious as they will bite and claw each other for food, mates ect ect
    • With Outsiders:
      • They are indifferent for the most part, attacking if they are attacked but they are willing to ignore. Those in the wild at least, the ones raised or in touch with most of the people on the planet itself might approach looking for food or trying to get a place to interact with them. With poachers and hunters that come to the world they can attack them more like a pack instead of one on one, going for the legs and throat to either wound the prey or as a means to quickly finish them off.
    • Bonding:
      • Being born and raised by a force user allows them to bond with them. Sometimes in a way that they will become a fierce protector and companion of that individual. The bond can create a bridge with them being able to sense each others emotions and even mentally connect to one another. If either dies it can be felt or even dangerous depending on the level of force bond.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Found on Rhen Var in great numbers long ago. Once they were considered an apex predator when the world was lush and vibrant. Renowned for their furs that were died out to collect oil for fires or use the fur for cloaks and blankets. As the once native inhabitants of Rhen Var lived and slowly died once the cataclysm shifted the world into a frozen tundra. Many of them died out like a number of the species on the planet, some slowly over the centuries began to adapt to their new environment and with some care they were able to survive in the snow and frost now. The caves where they once hunted serving as protection and shelter with trace sources of food that they would be able to eat, the few people who came to the world sometimes bringing supplies for themselves that they could work to find if left unattended at night. Their white furs letting them blend into the environment now after all those centuries of adapting

The Kreea are considered a rare sight outside of the small encampments that might raise one or two for foraging domestically. They are next to never seen offworld except by rare hunters who have come to the planet to get a pelt. Once the Silver Watch came to the planet and started to try and restore parts of the world and make it fit for people to live and learn on the world they became more and more common. Their beast tamers who brought silverwings and jakobeasts worked with them to try and learn all that they could. Noting their affinity for sniffing out and finding tombs or caves where force crystals and objects can be. With the force itself being one of the homes to rare solari crystals they have been described as a proto tuk'ata
from before the creatures were corrupted by the darkside. Semi intelligent as they can sense hostility and understand when spoken to, with the ability to bond with a force user.

The jedi explorers who have encountered them making note of how they are attracted to places where crystals grow. With the solari on the planet it has an opposite effect compared to creatures like the tuk'ata and hssiss dragons. Who are surrounded by darkside energies on their homeworlds and group near caves, tombs and lakes on worlds like Korriban and Ambria. The designation they have on the world itself let them be seen almost as guardians on the world, finding caves and tombs that the jedi discover and use. Protecting the graves so they are not disturbed in most of the cases with their claws and teeth. The Silver Watch and jedi visiting Rhen Var can use them to find places where crystal might grow or even food if they seem to get stranded in the cold as they will be attracted to them as well as vents for warmth. THose domesticated usually growing larger with a more ample supply of food.

The jedi scientists who have studied them found some problems which explains why they are passive, their bodies do not sweat which can be a problem. Running or intense heat will cause them to have seizures before killing them, their ability to sense and mental openness is something that they worked with to experiment. Not much to find there, it was easier compared to some of the other creatures who might resist. Their fur, being so thick and covered in an organic oil their bodies produces to protect from the cold. Also makes it dangerous around heat as it can catch on fire. Their hides and the meat also proving inedible as it is more unsuitable to human stomachs. Some of them were unsure whether the others of the species could safely eat it or if they avoided it.
The silver watch along with other jedi researchers have continued to study the species in hopes of understanding what the world was like before whatever shifted and happened.

With observation they learned they were more open minded as it were to being communicated with via the force. The energy field seemed to be something they trusted but the real reason was uncertain, the theory was the proximity to force crystals on the planet and lack of real contact with human's or any species hadn't made them hardened or suspicious of people. A vague theory but for the time it is the best they have while they continue to study the species as well as Rhen Var itself working to improve what manner of life they can on the world. Now the Kreea are regarded with some pride for those jedi who aere able to bond with and reach one, form a friendship through the force much like when being sent on a quest to gather your own crystal. Now you can get your own animal companion to accompany you on the frozen world. Within the silver watch where things can be harsh it can be a blessing.

With the constant attacks and changes on Rhen Var between jedi and sith... there was a danger that the Kreea could be killed in a purge or battle.... Orihime with several jedi relocated a few to polar regions of different worlds to try and give them a chance. Being careful to preserve them and make the area they were kept the most fitting for them. As something that could be brought to worlds like Hoth or others with ice covered landscapes. Where a jedi could use the back up from a force hunting lion that will protect them if they have bonded with it. She brought them to places like Ahch-To and the frozen polar regions where the jedi and caretakers could monitor them, the force rich world would hopefully prove effective in nourishing them as well as Atrisia and Shri-Tal where they could populate and be preserved.
 
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Netherworld

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Orihime Ike said:
One Sided: Their meat, is slightly poisoned for most creatures. It is high in mercury and will make others who eat it deathly ill with a possibility of them dying
  • This isn't a Weakness, it's a Strength. Please move it to the appropriate section and add another actual Weakness.


Orihime Ike said:
Diet: THey can eat just about anything on Rhen Var, buried in the ice and snow. What small vegetation that can grow near geothermal vents in caves or small creatures around the crystal caves
  • The wording here is slightly unclear – are they omnivores or herbivores?


Orihime Ike said:
Technology level: Dar Below Galactic Standard
  • You probably meant 'far' here?


Orihime Ike said:
THey are not able to use the force

Orihime Ike said:
telpathy with the force (beast friendship/taming)
  • A bit conflicting here. Please clarify your idea with the level of Force sensitivity of the species.


Orihime Ike said:
are more like a bloodhound and able to sense it namely the lightside of the force
  • Being able to sense the Light side of the Force is no small detail. This should be added to Strengths.
  • Furthermore, please clarify if and how they're able to sense only the Light side, but not the Dark.


Orihime Ike said:
they have been described as a proto tuk'ata from before the creatures were corrupted by the darkside
  • This seems like a neat piece of History, but if you want to keep it, I'd like you to expand on it. Right now it's a bit too vague.
 
[member="Netherworld"]

edited and expanded where you wanted it. TO answer your question solari crystals grow naturally on Rhen Var whihc lightsided crystals would be more common then darkside crystals or places for them to sense. It would just be something natural from the environment.

If you want more expanded on in the description I can do it likely this weekend
 
Well hello there, been a short while since you've visited the Codex.

So, all in all this is an interesting creature but there's one thing that we're going to have to nix.

I have handy a list of about half a dozen species submissions made by you using Pokemon as their pictures. I also have handy a link to a Pre-Codex you've got in a faction forum of a rather absurd amount of Species subs for just about every Pokemon there is.

We were ok with a handful of them going through before since it never seemed like you were intending to... collect them all, but now that I have an idea of the broad scope of this project you've undertaken I'm going to be putting my foot down.

This is a Star Wars forum. This is not a Pokemon forum.

I will not be approving anymore Pokemon creatures in the Codex by you or by anyone in accordance with the rules against crossovers and the rules sustaining the theme and setting of the forum.

Remove the Pokemon picture - find something original and fitting of the Star Wars setting or leave it pictureless, then we will get on with the remainder of this judgement.

[member="Orihime Ike"]
 
Submission Name: Kreea Shrill
Link to Submission: Kreea Shrill
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Update to current standards and fix subs

Submission Name: Do-Ro-Ro
Link to Submission: Do-Ro-Ro
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Update to current standards and fix subs

Submission Name: Re-Al
Link to Submission: Re-Al
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Update to current standards and fix subs

Submission Name: Fa-Ut
Link to Submission: Fa-Ut
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Update to current standards and fix subs

Submission Name: Hi-Zen-Ko
Link to Submission: Hi-Zen-Ko
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Update to current standards and fix subs
Please include a list of changes and don't forget to tag Codex Staff when you're ready, or, you can use the "Ready for Judgement" Pre-Fix.
 

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