[member="Switch"] pretty cool over all. I'd say the privileged girl running away from home is 10/10 (i almost audibly groaned :/) but the whole part about leaving the pirate industry is like 3/10. Also the fear of the dark is pretty legit, 1/10. Pretty nice all in all. I'd say like total 3/10. All in all pretty legit.
[member="Vladimir Tedesky"], the jaded warrior with dead parents, he might do some wrong on an occasion but in the end he'd rather do what's right, I do admire that your parents were killed by a force of nature rather than someone using force, and not doing the vengeance storyline. While considering the idea has been done before but there's still room to do something new with a character like this. 7/10
Born criminal, almost die criminal, rebuilt, still a criminal. You get bonus points for not "turning to the light". On the Cliche Chart I'd rate you 5/10. Not really chliche but also not entirely original.