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Approved Tech Hemo Augmentation

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Cybernetic Implants for Sasori and Atrisia
  • Image Source: N/A
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Internal
  • Size: Extremely Small
  • Weight: Extremely Light
  • Resistances:
    • Energy: Very High
    • Kinetic: Very High
    • Lightsabers: None
    • Other: Sonic: Very Low
    • Other: EMP/ION: Very Low
    • Other: Sensors: Very Low
    • Other: Radiation: Low
    • Other: Fire: Low
    • Other: Cryo: Low
    • Other: Acid: Average
    • Other: Vacuum: None
    • Other: Darkside: Very High
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Temperature control/heat reflection: Designed for internal temperate regulation of the body. THey wiull rarely feel discomfort from temperatures.
  • Locator beacon: For emergencies to be retrieved with rescue teams.
  • Materia converts energy into oxygen to handle the larger body mass and muscles.
STRENGTHS
  • Allows body to quickly staunch bleeding and enhances microcellular regeneration. The body will start to heal almost instantly once injured but will not immediaately heal from wounds it can still take hours to days depending on the severity.
WEAKNESSES
  • Heavy Chance of forming blood clots that can cause stroke
  • Requires high level of physical health to undertake
DESCRIPTION
Designed using information found on the old Czar project and improved upon in some ways. The procedure is a lot more complicated. Instead of simple injections over a day or two it requires a full procedure where tiny holes are drilled into the bones of the pelvis and down into the marrow. The procedure itself is painful and requires several weeks to recover from but the results are a marked improvement and there are some problems.

The Anti Hemorrhagic procedures of the Czars used to quickly clot their wounds doesn't provide a healing factor but it does allow the body to stop bleeding quickly when it is wounded. The high stress the body will go under from the biots that are being used and the additional procedures to improve the body. It isn't recommended this be undertaken on a whim.

THe procedures increased risk and coordination with the bodies biots and the upgrades that have been developed. The increased stress and effects can become a heavy danger to the well being of the ones receiving it. High level of mental and physical conditioning to handle the stresses are what make it a rare procedure that is undertaken only by a select few.

The years of research have vastly improved the strength and effeciency of the hemo implants and blood augmentation. Allowing the doctors to be able to use it and when combined with most implaants for project herald the implanted blood becomes essential in the super soldiers. Stopping bleeding quickly and starting the healing process while also holding and producing more oxygen to handle the enhancements of the body.
 
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Cathbodua said:
The Anti Hemorrhagic procedures of the Czars used to quickly clot their wounds doesn't provide a healing factor but it does allow the body to stop bleeding quickly when it is wounded. THe blood cells are able to carry more oxygen when they are produced and travel through the lungs. It is better able to provide oxygen rich blood to the body to handle the more intense strain of using the more enhanced biots within the cardiovascular system.
The blood clotting effect is reliant on exposure to air (which, generally, is an oxidizing effect, meaning hitting oxygen), adding more oxygen to the blood in concert with this would simply clot the subject's body. And more oxygen in the blood does not make someone more physically healthy, it is toxic. Pulmonary Oxygen Toxicity (which is too much oxygen being cycled through the lungs) causes intense, sharp, pain, and too much oxygen to the nervous system can actually cause seizures and can render someone unconscious.

Too much oxygen in body tissue causes Hyperoxia, which is something that can cause disorientation, respiratory problems, and myopia.

Adding oxygen into the bloodstream for those that do not need it is, essentially, lethal. Adding it to the body permanently is lethal.

This procedure would, in a nutshell, kill the ordinary human being, and after a time would kill most any other life form.
 
[member="Lily Kuhn"] yeah I know it is meant to help feed the enhanced Lung Implant and Heart Implants that are designed to improve people. As requested and required needed to get more oxygen to the blood. The czar hemo augmentation is one of the few maybe only real blood augmentation research and why it is a heavy risk for them to use with increase risk of clotting in the blood streams. It isn't adding the oxygen to the blood and body for kicks it is to handle the increased demand of the new organs.
 
Cathbodua said:
[member="Lily Kuhn"] yeah I know it is meant to help feed the enhanced Lung Implant and Heart Implants that are designed to improve people. As requested and required needed to get more oxygen to the blood. The czar hemo augmentation is one of the few maybe only real blood augmentation research and why it is a heavy risk for them to use with increase risk of clotting in the blood streams. It isn't adding the oxygen to the blood and body for kicks it is to handle the increased demand of the new organs.
First I'm going to address how this would work with the lung implant, so it's easier to make sense of what I'm saying (and especially in relation to the combined effects of this with that biot):
  • The lung implant increases oxygen intake, which is what the submission says. (It does not say it requires more oxygen)
  • The hemo augmentation increases oxygen in the bloodstream.
  • Both of these increase oxygen.
  • Both of these throw the body out of homeostasis.
  • The body then goes into shock.
  • Tissues begins to oxidize (this is what happens to humans as they age and die)
  • The body dies.
You are killing anyone who utilizes a combination of these two implants. Increasing oxygen in the bloodstream is lethal, it throws the body out of homeostasis. If the only things you are changing are the pulmonary and cardiovascular system, everything else is going to suffer.

Description: Designed by Sakura using the knowledge of the human biot project from the rift, the Sakura heart is a step above their artificial heart in that it is a natural organ that would be able to work in people. The tissue is stronger and made better to be able to handle stress at higher levels. The increased flow of adrenaline allows for better performance from the implanted users while the reduced risk of stroke or a heart attack is a benefit while in the field or a high demand profession. The common risks of organ failure or rejection are there and it is recommended that recipients continue to take their anti rejection meds to prevent it. The demands of the operation also require a high level of physical health as with most of Sakura's implants. Some of the benefits of them however is with the hearts and organs growable transplanting organs to sick patients means they have virtually no list of patients in need of organs.
Again, with the Heart implant submission, no where does it say it needs increased oxygen. In fact, it says that it increases the flow of adrenaline - which is incredibly dangerous - and would cause devastating effects by speeding the heart rate up while being coupled with the hemo augmentation.
  • Heart works faster, which will clearly mean more oxygen is being pulled from the lungs (which is covered by the lung submission).
  • This causes stress on the lungs.
  • Hemo Augmentation causes Hyperoxia, which causes strain on the lungs (as I mentioned prior) and a wide variety of other problems.
  • You are now having three sources of increased oxygen flow through the circulatory system.
    Lungs pull in more oxygen
  • Hemo augmentation permanently adds more oxygen to the body.
  • Heart works harder and thus cycles more oxygen from the lungs + what is already being added to the bloodstream through the body.

[*]Combining these is the perfect triple threat that only speeds up the issues of Hyperoxia, Oxygen & Pulmonary Oxygen toxicity.
So, as I've emphasised before, this submission is lethal to anyone who uses it, doubly so for anyone who pairs it up with one of the submissions you've mentioned above.

If you want this submission to not immediately kill the person using it, then I would remove the oxygen addition.
 
Cathbodua said:
Alright edited it out and the judge recommended improving the intake for the lungs and blood in the one submission to properly work together here and here
In the future, be aware that everything in the human body (and all living organisms) work together and rely on homeostasis to function. By altering one or two systems, but not altering every single thing to compensate, you take the body out of homeostasis and that is eventually lethal. When we're talking about a large influx of oxygen into the bloodstream, that is incredibly dangerous to the nervous system. Every action has an effect when it comes to messing with the human body, it's why we have to take immunosuppressant drugs when recieving organ implants - white blood cells attack it as an outside source. Immunosuppressant drugs reduce our body's immune system, effectively compromising our ability to fight infection and disease. This can also lead to general frailty, which is seen in patients of AIDS and other autoimmune diseases. Whereas someone taking immunosuppressant drugs might be crippled by the common cold, someone with such an increase of oxygen through the bloodstream will have crippled nerve endings and may experience chronic seizures, and eventually death (which is pretty much certain when the increase of oxygen is permanent).

So when trying to change one thing in the body, be aware of what it does to everything else.

Now that there are no issues with this I can move on to the next step.

I'm going to set this to pending secondary approval.
 

Ravenfire

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FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Compacted Pack
Link to Submission: Compacted Pack
Reason for Factory Modification Request: updates

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Offhand Field Injector
Link to Submission: Offhand Field Injector
Reason for Factory Modification Request: updates

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Hemo Augmentation
Link to Submission: Hemo Augmentation
Reason for Factory Modification Request: updates

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Muscle Enhancement Augmentation
Link to Submission: Muscle Enhancement Augmentation
Reason for Factory Modification Request: updates

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Bonemer Enhancement
Link to Submission: Bonemer Enhancement
Reason for Factory Modification Request: updates
 
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