Feedback on "Just A Little Message"

[Darth Carnifex]

I personally think that this is my most brutal post ever conceived, but I really wanna hear what the rest of you schmucks think about it?​

​

Was it good writing, or am I too edgy for my own good?​

​

Thread Link​

 

[Thurion Heavenshield]

[member="Darth Carnifex"]

Honestly, this is just expected behaviour from Kaine.

 

[Jamie Pyne]

[member="Darth Carnifex"]

I was about to go to bed last night when you sent me the link, it was worth reading Very awful and terrible, but I always love to read your writing. (And writing with you!)

 

[Lord Ajihad]

[member="Darth Carnifex"]

Popping the little boy's head like a balloon was a nice touch

 

[Darth Ferus]

Was a simple elegant brutality. Great inspiration for myself and how I write Ferus.

Good show.

 

[Vilaz Munin]

I think it was great, bro.

That boy's head tho...

[member="Darth Carnifex"]

 

[Darth Carnifex]

[member="Darth Carnifex"]

Honestly, this is just expected behaviour from Kaine.

Your children are next, Heavenshield.

 

[Marcus Itera]

Savage.

 

[Hailey Sosis]

[member="Darth Carnifex"]
This why I secretly love you

But why no @mention

 

[Darth Ophidia]

I enjoyed it.

 

[Vaulkhar]

Garbage

[member="Darth Carnifex"]

Spoiler

Amazing

 

[Darth Carnifex]

Yer gon' get a spankin' boi

[member="Vaulkhar"]

 

[Vaulkhar]

You don't love me even though I fight for you!

Why can't you be more like [member="Thurion Heavenshield"]?!

*Runs off crying tears of lava because son of Kaine Zambrano, Sith Lord of Edge*

 

[Darth Carnifex]

[member="Thurion Heavenshield"]'s compassion will be his undoing as I smash his children against the rocky shores in my sea of hatred.

 

[Isamu Baelor]

I await the PM's of someone demanding you edit out the brutality.

Top stuff tho.

 

[Darth Carnifex]

OI, THEY CAN BLOODY WELL TRY

[member="Isamu Baelor"]

 

[Ra Vizsla]

Edgelords gonna edgelord.

 

[Darth Carnifex]

I wouldn't have it any other way, daddy-o

[member="Ra Vizsla"]