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Approved Starship ETHEREAL CLASS HEAVY CARRIER

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Heavy Carrier
  • Length: 3,500 Meters
  • Width: 1,750 Meters
  • Height: 900 Meters
  • Crew: 45,100 Total Crew
    • 25,000 Enlisted (Comms, Operations, Weapons, Tactical, Intel, Engineering)
    • 7,000 Officers (Command, Engineering, Comms, Pilots)
    • 2,000 Medical
    • 7,000 Air Group (Deck, Fueling, Weapons, Launch, Landing, Engineering, Rescue)
    • 7,000 Marines (Security, Landing Operations)
    • 100 SOCOM (Transport, Medical, Intel, Overwatch, Operators)



  • Hangar Space: Extreme: (35)
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: 30 squadrons
    • Support Craft: 5 squadrons
  • Maneuverability Rating: Low
  • Speed Rating: Low
  • Hyperdrive: Yes
  • Hyperdrive: Class 1.0
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • DEDICATED BUT SEPARATE LAUNCH AND LANDING DECKS - While the fighters onboard are VTOL capable, the catapult systems allow for quick launches and landings, especially necessary in battlefield situations.
  • LONG RANGE THREAT - The fighter screen is not the only firepower.
  • I SAW THAT A MILE AWAY! - The long-range detection system keeps enemies from getting the drop on "The Ethereal".
  • ANNUNAKI - The Special Forces are designing a ship "The Annunaki", special docking clamps and ports can allow for it to dock on the ventral section of the carrier.
WEAKNESSES
  • SLOWER THAN MOLASSES IN JANUARY - "The Ethereal" has a lot of offensive and defensive options, but speed? Maneuverability? Those aren't any of them. The ship needs some headway to get to speed and turns like a brick... "Fecal Matter Domicile."
  • HEAVY CARRIER... NOT CRUISER - While "The Ethereal" can conduct ship-to-ship combat, this is not the primary focus of the vessel, and it could use some help in a fight.
  • GET THAT THING OFF MY BOAT! - "The Annunaki" must be completely detached from "The Ethereal" before she can jump to lightspeed.
DESCRIPTION
Losing "The Liberation" was a big, yet necessary blow to Liram. It did not shake his confidence in his abilities though as it can tend to do to some captains. In fact, when offered another command, he turned them down in favor of the new project. The Ethereal Class is suited perfectly for a Captain of Angellus' skill set. The focus on fighter capacity and the long-range sensors and weaponry, not to mention the room for a regiment of Marines, as well as mechanized division, make this carrier that is on that will cause a lot of problems. While she relies more on early detection and fighter screens, her firepower can hold up against many capital ships of similar size. Her fighter capacity is large enough to be lethal against many pirate groups. This is a Silver Jedi Defense Force asset, however if the Galactic Alliance Defense Force wishes to, they are more than welcome to place orders.

With the recent ambush of Brotherhood of the Maw Forces, Admiral Angellus took advantage of his rank and company position and put the carrier in drydock after the catastrophic damage put to it by "Quake Missiles". This was his first command and though he has much more responsibilities now, the class and line of ships hold a special places for him and he gave it the respect he felt it deserves now that he can.
 
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HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Liram Angellus Liram Angellus

Nice ship! I really like how this ship connected with the Annunaki. I found only one problem:
  • The submission bit overpowered, it has +2 rating. Please fix this.

That's all, please let me know if you edited this.
 
Going to to the other three (of the 5 at a time) here:

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: "Stellar" Class Marine Transport/Lander
Link to Submission: "Stellar" Class Marine Transport/Lander
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Change some tech, clean it up,

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Liberation Class Heavy Carrier
Link to Submission: Liberation Class Heavy Carrier
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Change the picture (what is it with me and pictures) and a few minor tech changes

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: "Ethereal" Class Carrier
Link to Submission: "Ethereal" Class Carrier
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Little more than change the name and some minor cosmetic changes.

Of course any and all changes will be documented :)
 
FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name:
Ethereal Class carrier "Ethereal"
Link to Submission: Right here.
Reason for Factory Modification Request:
Like all of them, just updating systems and weapons with GAL Tech. Also cleaning up the look.

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name:
Liberation Class Heavy Carrier
Link to Submission: Right here.
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Like all of them, just updating systems and weapons with GAL Tech. Also cleaning up the look.

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name:
Welkin Class Supercarrier "The Celestial City"
Link to Submission: Right here.
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Like all of them, just updating systems and weapons with GAL Tech. Also cleaning up the look.

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name:
"Liberator" Class Cruiser/Assault Carrier
Link to Submission: Right here.
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Like all of them, just updating systems and weapons with GAL Tech. Also cleaning up the look.

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name:
Avalon Class Destroyer
Link to Submission: Right here.
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Like all of them, just updating systems and weapons with GAL Tech. Also cleaning up the look.
 
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  1. Upped the length and the width
  2. Added 5 more squadrons of fighters
  3. Changed from "Limited" to "Semi-Unique"
  4. Changed out Armament with some GAL Tech and changed the rating to "High"
  5. Changed out Defense with some GAL Tech and changed the rating to "High"
  6. Changed Speed and Maneverability ratings to "Very Low" to compensate.
  7. Removed some standard features and added some Advanced Features (again, GAL Tech)
  8. Gave an IC explanation on the bottom in "Description".
Thanks John Locke John Locke ! :)
 
HPI AI; Terraris Command
Factory Judge
Liram Angellus Liram Angellus

  • The ratings are underpowered (-2), if you want you can edit.
  • The Hangar Space extreme is 35, not 30. Please edit.
    3500m [Base: 4 | Very Low: 9 | Low: 14 | Average: 19 | High: 24 | Very High: 29 | Extreme: 35]
  • The Comscans' link is broken again, please edit.
  • And I recommend to see visible that the "The Annunaki" is a link, not just the text, so delete the links' colour.
 
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