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Approved Starship Edaar MKII Class Star Destroyer

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High Commander of the Lilaste Order
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification:
  • Length: 1500 meters
  • Width: 350 meters
  • Height: 260 meters
  • Armament: Extreme
  • 55 LO-77H
  • 40 LO-10H
  • 146 LO-78H
  • 44 LO-80H
  • Defenses: Extreme
  • LO-21H point defense cannons [186]
  • three layers of armor with one layer of Siegurium , with an additional layer of Siegurium plating
  • Anti Missle countermeasures such as flairs and Chaff launchers.
  • Missle Warhead Deactivaters
  • two Main shield Generators
  • three backup generators
  • Hangar Space: Base
  • Hangar allocation 2
  • Maneuverability Rating: low
  • Speed Rating: low
  • Hyperdrive: 1.5

STANDARD FEATURES

  • Standard Communications Array: Essential for long-distance communication across space.
  • Standard Deflector Shield Generator: Provides protection against space debris and enemy fire.
  • Standard Hyperdrive: Allows for faster-than-light travel across the galaxy.
  • Standard Ion Engines: Offers reliable propulsion and maneuverability in space.
  • Standard Life Support Systems: Sustains crew life in the vacuum of space.
  • Standard Navigational Systems: Crucial for plotting courses and avoiding navigational hazards.
  • Standard Repulsorlift Engines: Enables the ship to hover and land on planets with atmosphere.
  • Standard Sensor Array: Detects nearby objects and threats, essential for navigation and combat.
  • Can Enter Atmosphere: Designed to operate both in space and within planetary atmospheres.
  • Lilaste Order Weapon Systems: Equipped with advanced weaponry tailored to Lilaste specifications.
  • Ammunition: The ship is equipped with 2000 rounds per LO-10C turret, ensuring ample firepower.

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

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STRENGTHS


  • Wedge-Like Design: Optimizes weapon firing angles, allowing all weapons to fire forward for maximum effect.
  • Panoramic Defense: Equipped with turrets on nearly every side, offering minimal blind spots and enhanced protective coverage.
  • Bombardment Capability: Main armaments are positioned on the underside for effective planetary bombardment.
  • Heavy Armament: A vast array of weapons paired with high survivability makes it a formidable anti-capital ship weapon.
  • Dual Engagement: Capable of engaging two targets simultaneously with strategic weapon placement.
  • Dual Bridge System: Features two bridges for separate command and control functions, enhancing operational flexibility.
  • Emergency Ejection for Ammunition: Equipped with a mechanism for emergency ammunition ejection to prevent catastrophic failures.
  • Vacuum Chamber: Includes an emergency atmosphere venting system in the ammunition storage to prevent fire hazards.
  • Regenerative hull: The included materials, Seigurium and Fyrirdögun, allow the ship's hull to regenerate light to medium damage.


WEAKNESSES


  • Broad-Side Vulnerability: The wedge-shaped design may reduce firepower in broad-side engagements.
  • High Heat Signature: The extensive weaponry generates a large heat signature, compromising stealth capabilities.
  • Ammunition Hazard: Carrying live ammunition poses a risk of catastrophic explosions during a hull breach.
  • Reduced Speed: The ship's weight and size affect its speed and make it an easier target.
  • Explosion Risk: If ignited, the ammunition for LO-10H turrets could cause a massive explosion, potentially damaging nearby ships and structures.

DESCRIPTION

The transformation of the Edaar Class into its MKII variant involved a meticulous reimagining of its architecture. The engineers embarked on a bold initiative to strip down vulnerable sections of the hull, a move aimed at reducing excess mass and making room for more advanced armaments. This process wasn't just about subtraction; it was equally focused on strategic addition. This endeavor's crowning achievement was rearranging the hull section, which allowed the installation of more LO-10H Mass driver cannons. This pivotal upgrade significantly bolstered the ship's offensive prowess, granting it unparalleled firepower and a range that dwarfed its predecessors.

The MKII variant wasn't just built for destruction. Its design incorporated many safety innovations to safeguard the vessel and crew from the inherent dangers of carrying and deploying high-caliber ordnance. Among these features was a sophisticated emergency ammunition ejection system designed to jettison volatile payloads in the face of a catastrophic hull breach, averting a potentially devastating explosion. The ammunition storage was also equipped with a vacuum chamber and an emergency atmosphere venting system that could prevent fire hazards before they spiraled out of control.
 
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Ravenfire

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Laphisto Laphisto

Hi there, I will be the judge for this submission.

So a few things, firstly hyperdrives don't factor into the balances anymore.

Second thing hanger make sure it always has the number associated with it so no one gets confused in this case base: 2

Third thing, you are actually two points under balance. Your choice if you want to change it or leave it as is.
 

Ravenfire

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