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Approved Location Dolly Lane

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
SETTING INFORMATION
  • Structure Name:
    • Dolly Lane Entertainment Section otherwise known as just Dolly Lane
  • Classification:
    • Entertainment Section within one of the districts in the Residential Sector of the Station
  • Location:
  • Affiliation:
  • Size:
    • Large
  • Population:
    • Heavy
  • Demographics:
  • Accessibility:
    • Dolly Lane is easy to find and is accessible to all within the Station due to the giant sign placed above the entrance and recently finished construction by the Milvayne Commercial Association with the approval of the Administrators of the Station. The section is open to the public except for a certain day called the "Revenue Collection" Day which is when all the shops in the section count their revenue for the week.
  • Description:
    • Dolly Lane sits within the Residential Sector of Damascus Station and serves as a focal gathering point for the more strange and weird species that make the station their home. The Low Side of the Entertainment Section is within a carnival style with many colorful shops and vendors welcoming guests into the section. Prizes and games are set up to sucker children out of their parents credits and many games are rigged to only let certain species win. The Middle of Dolly Lane is considered the more business area with many infamous shops such as "Mister Barnaum's Force Emporium" which sells all kinds of strange rediumes and force related objects and "Huppon Exotic Flowery" which sells exotic plants and even carnivore ones. The Upper Side of Dolly Lane is home to the more fancy establishments such as the casino named "Light O Matic Casino" run by Xom Kleptos. Criminal Syndicates are known to hang out within the section.
POINTS OF INTEREST

Personal - Pub
Hagar's Pub

An old fashioned cantina located within the Lower Side of Dolly Lane. With old fashion lighting and seating which reminds people of the ancient sailing vessels before the invention of the hyperdrive so long ago. Although considered shady by some within the station it has many smugglers and informants scattered around. It has three levels with the last one reserved for more private conversations between people. The owner of the place is a quarren and self proclaimed "Kraken Pirate" called Luxyy "One-Hand" Hagar.
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Mister Barnaum's Force Emporium


Ancient mysteries abound within Mr. Barnuam's Force Emporium located within the Middle Section of Dolly Lane. As you first enter into the store you come into an open lounge with many bookcases filled with galactic texts and a globe of a mysterious planet. Claimed "Magic Items" sit around the globe on pillows. Although anyone worth their salt in the force could tell that they are nothing more than objects from the garbage. Rumors claim that Barnaum is a rogue jedi banished from the new jedi order for believing that the maw is the true savior of the galaxy. However the crazy old coot who runs the place will tell you different. There are actual force items but you must say a password to the owner to see them.
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Huppon Exotic Flowery

Located within an alley right next to Mr. Barnuam's Force Emporium is Huppon Exotic Flowery run by a supposed old nightsister called "Bogga Juzui". Although the place is dark and creepy on the outside and looks like quite a mess; it is brighter in the inside with artificial lighting to help plant growth. A counter sits in the back of the shop where the ugly old woman tends to her most prized plants and herbs. For purchase are many exotic plants with some known to be lethal the touch. It is recommended by those living within Dolly Lane to always have a person accompany you when you enter into the shop because many single people have been known to go "missing" all of the sudden.
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Lu Wong's Entertainment Square

At the end of the middle section of dolly lane lay a Denon and Atrisian Business called Lu Wong's Entertainment Square. It is the favored destination for those looking for denon without actually going to the planet itself; and has enough of an atrisian flair to be counted. Although the colored lights and golden statues, casino tables and more might impress; look hard enough and you will see a sinister underworld tone. Within underworld circles the owner Lu "Seven Sword" Wong is the head of Dai Zu a racketeering and arms gang that has a gruesome reputation on denon for butchering entire streets.
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Club VerSin

If there is one place where normal people aren't allowed within Dolly Lane would be the exclusive Club VerSin. Located within the upper side of Dolly Lane right next to the Infamous Casino called "Luck O' Matic" it is a hub for criminal activity on the station and many syndicates have private offices for discussing deals. Underneath the management of a Twi'lek Majordomo called "Sal Dar" and officially ruled over by Parok the Hutt. Terminals and game tables are set up along with a private cantina for club patrons which serve the best drinks in the entire station. Weapon modifications and cybernetics are also available.
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Luck O' Matic Casino

Fancy and intimidating at the same time; the Luck O' Matic Casino takes up much of the room within the upper side of Dolly Lane. A grand entrance of ornate silver and golden doors leads to a grand lobby filled with machine upon machine of chance and tables of greed at every corner. A large statue to a long forgotten deity sits in the middle of the lobby with ancient scriptures written on its base in a foreign language. The lobby itself has six game halls which have varying levels of difficulty for those who like to take risks. The statue has a small lift inside which transports you to the personal office of Xom Kleptos; the Unofficial Master of Dolly Lane.


SECURITY: Medium

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

The Dolly Lane Entertainment Section was built by the Milvayne Commercial Association within Damascus Station after paying a considerable fee. The Entertainment Section was supposed to bring in revenue to the corporation by having many shopping centers and exotic goods within the residential sector of the station however the opening of a much more popular casino within the station led to the project being abandoned considerably early on but the corporation still retained official ownership to the property. The Hutt Space Consortium and more specifically the Former Vigo of the Black Sun Xom Kleptos moved into the section and claimed it has his own underneath his initials "Master X.K". Bringing his criminal and business expertise to the table; Xom Kleptos reinvigorated the economy into profit again.

Dolly Lane became more popular once the other casino's craze died down with many exotic goods opening up all across the section. When exotic goods came into play the crime syndicates came to answer and started the popular Club VerSin has their own personal hangout on the station away from the prying eyes of the administrators. Xom Kleptos himself as the unofficial owner of the section opened up the Luck O' Matic Casino located within the upper side of the section near the exclusive criminal club. Even though it is mostly populated by the strange and mystic the actual crime rates within are next to zero due to the strict no fighting rules enforced by Xom and his Black Sun Lackies that patrol the section without remorse. This saves the marines time from having to patrol that area unless searching for criminals. Although they should expect a fight upon entering into crime territory.

With its popularity on the rise and more criminals moving in; it is a considerable foothold for the Hutt Space Consortium as they expand their underworld reach through Enclave and Elysium Space.

 
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Nice level of detail overall! Just a few things to discuss before approval.

  • Unfortunately, we don't really have a clear template to use for a district of a station or city. Here you've used Generic Structure, which generally means a single building. Since it's all part of a space station, I guess that can work. However, I would personally recommend the Geographic Landmark template instead. It includes fields for Size, Population, and Demographics that would be useful for giving readers a feel for this shopping district. It doesn't have the Security field, but you can always add fields as long as you include all of the required ones. Ultimately it's your call, but I think those three added fields would expand on the district's character a lot.

  • Description: In this section you mention a "carnal style". Based on context I think you mean "carnival style". This is important because references to prostitution, which is commonly referred to as a "carnal trade", are against Chaos rules. If you mean carnival, please make that change. If you are making a reference to carnal trades, please remove that reference.

  • Security: Your link to the Toborro War Droids does not work; the wiki states that the page you linked to does not exist.
 
Under Review Credit Wizard Credit Wizard

Nice level of detail overall! Just a few things to discuss before approval.

  • Unfortunately, we don't really have a clear template to use for a district of a station or city. Here you've used Generic Structure, which generally means a single building. Since it's all part of a space station, I guess that can work. However, I would personally recommend the Geographic Landmark template instead. It includes fields for Size, Population, and Demographics that would be useful for giving readers a feel for this shopping district. It doesn't have the Security field, but you can always add fields as long as you include all of the required ones. Ultimately it's your call, but I think those three added fields would expand on the district's character a lot.

  • Description: In this section you mention a "carnal style". Based on context I think you mean "carnival style". This is important because references to prostitution, which is commonly referred to as a "carnal trade", are against Chaos rules. If you mean carnival, please make that change. If you are making a reference to carnal trades, please remove that reference.

  • Security: Your link to the Toborro War Droids does not work; the wiki states that the page you linked to does not exist.

That should fix it
 
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