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Approved Location Darasuum Yaim

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
SETTING INFORMATION
  • City: Darasuum Yaim (Eternal Home)
  • Classification: Rural City
  • Location: Vanquo
  • Affiliation: Clan Solus
  • Population: Moderate
  • Demographics:
    • Human 50%
    • Other 40%
    • Droids/AI 10%

Wealth: medium - The wealth of this location is pretty average for the amount of people who currently inhabit this place.


  • Stability: high - The city is pretty well fortified in terms of defence and security. Since most of the inhabitants are warriors by birth they are more than willing to protect their homes. On the terms of crime rate it is incredibly low and near non existent. Outsiders are all considered latent criminals and very few are trusted amongst the streets and walkways of Darasuum Yaim. Thus outsiders are restricted from entering deep into the city. If they are to enter they either must have permission from the Alor or founders or face been jailed and later banished from returning to Vanquo.

  • Freedom & Oppression: The Mandalorian people here have freedom within the confines of mandalorian and Clan laws. The ruler of Clan Solus Cynthia Solus Cynthia Solus and the founders are the people who set the laws. Certain areas of Darasuum Yaim are strictly Clan Solus access unless permission is granted , breaching the boundaries could result in banishment from the world. Failure to comply when told to stop may result in death. The people in the city are free to make their own choices in life.

  • Description: The city is made up of the members of Clan Solus and other Mandalorians. The Place was found by Delphine Solus and Rava Solus on the pursuit to locate a suitable location for the newly found and growing clan to set up home. The Place was chosen on its qualities. Clean water source, Fertile land, Ample space to develop home’s and other places. The location also offered a underground location that was perfect for forges.
POINTS OF INTEREST

Hall Of Alor’s -
This building was created as a meeting place for clan leaders and Mand’alor to conduct official business with Clan Solus. Inside Has a Statue of Mand’alor the Infernal and the holo images of the Current alor’s of the Large Clans that display around the room. It also houses private quarters for the attending Alor’s and penthouse quarters for the Mand’alor and family.

Memorial Wall -
The wall Was constructed so that the names of the fallen could be engraved here to always be remembered. This has been updated and expanded since the sith occupation of the planet Mandalore and it liberation. The wall contains over 1,680,000 names of those who has fallen.

Solus Nau'ur kad Entrance -
The entrance to the forge Is atop a large carved staircase carved into the mountains side. At the sides of the Square entrance archway is two Mandalorian Neo-Crusader statues standing tall and proud looking over the village. One of the statues is recognised to be of Cassus Fett and one of his clansmen. Once entering inside There is a Diagonal lift platform that will take people deep into the mountain.


Suumpir Adara (lake Adara) -

The lake that the City is built around got its name because of Mand’alor the Infernals daughter. Adara was the first to have gone into the lake for a paddle. Upon her comment that the lake was hers Dalphine thought it was only right the name the lake after the child. A name Cynthia Solus honored. The Lake itself is one of the local source of clean water for the residences that have taken home here.

Solus Manor -
The Solus Manor was the founding home to the founders of Clan Solus. Though as the village developed into a city, the Manor became a place for internal affairs, where the hall of Alors deal with those not tied to the House. This is the place that the future development of Vanquo happens and where important discussions are taken place between the leaders of the House.

Mountain side Hangars -
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These building is by far the largest of all that has been constructed. Built into the side of one of the surrounding peeks these hangers are capable of housing a ship no larger than a frigate and extending ports that can latch onto other ships able to enter atmosphere.

Sinkhole Hangers -
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These hangers are dotted all around the city able to house multiple starfighters or a corvette.

Beast pens -
The beast pens are not only just for livestock but also wild captured animals to begin been domesticated and trained to serve the mandalorian people. No animal is treat with cruelty and if the beast refuses to domesticate after so many weeks it would be returned to its natural place in the wild.

Solus Bajur (school) -

The Solus school is where the clans young and even adults go to get education and further education. Under the leadership of Cynthia Solus she has deemed it necessary for children to attend so that they can learn their people's history, languages of the galaxy, survival skills and so much more. Adults who attend often seek to learn new things and sometimes learn new crafts.

Solus Turr’ulur (daycare) -

The Daycare is an important place amongst the city. Since many parents lead working lives it is important that their children have a safe place to go. It also offers the children a place to play and grow with others their ages letting them form friendships.

Verborir Petir (Contract Center) -

A building for mandalorians to pick up bounties and contracts for work. They range from all kinds of work letting people choose from a variety of jobs to take up. All Contracts go through a team to list them into categories.

SECURITY - Medium

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  • Clan Solus (Mandalorians)
  • Sentry Turrets (placed in Hangers, security points and Entrance to the village)
  • Auto Turrets (Placed around the perimeter to keep unwanted guests out)


HISTORICAL INFORMATION

The Location was located by Dalphine and Rava Soulus in the year 853 ABY, it was also developed in the same year by Clan Solus, the aid from Mand’alor the infernal and fellow clans. The land was chosen due to many factors making it a suitable place for the clan. Not only because of that but the site is a historical place for the mandalorians. No longer must these mining camps desecrate such sacred lands.

"The Battle of Vanquo took place in 3964 BBY, when the Mandalorian Neo-Crusaders attacked the Outer Rim mining world of Vanquo at the beginning of their war with the Galactic Republic. A resource world near the Mandalorians' true target—the ecumenopolis of Taris—Vanquo was part of a Republic security cordon known as the Jebble-Vanquo-Tarnith line designed to protect Taris from Mandalorian aggression. That did not deter the Mandalorians from attacking Vanquo as part of a three-pronged offensive aimed at Taris, with Neo-Crusader leader Mandalore the Ultimate designing the Vanquo battle to lure away the Republic Navy's left flank and open up a corridor to Taris. Squads of Mandalorian Shocktroopers easily secured the mining camps on Vanquo's nightside, while the Mandalorian and Republic fleets engaged in a heated space battle above the planet. Eventually, Republic Captain Saul Karath was forced to retreat, and the Mandalorians conquered the planet. The Mandalorian victory at Vanquo gave the Neo-Crusaders an Outer Rim stronghold they never relinquished and also set the stage for their conquest of Taris not long afterward.” - wikipedia

It is for this reason it held high importance that the Mandalorians once again held not just its claims, but residence of the planet too. As defenders of the mandalorian people Clan Solus having a home at this stronghold meant that they would forever prove their loyalty to protecting their people, their history and their culture.

The Mandalorians descended quickly in force to the location that is now known as Darasuum Yaim. Caught by surprise, the mining camp had no time to react. While some fled many tried to fight back the Mandalorians from their camp. Little did they know it was no longer their camp and never was in the first place.

As they was liberating the area Rava noticed an entrance to a cave that had statues covered by over growing fauna. Upon clearing some the woman began to see the shape of a neo-crusader T visor, once it had all been cleared off she could accurately make out the armor of Cassus Fett and the one adjacent to it a neo-crusader. Stairs that once led inside had been replaced with an industrial lift. Those inside either faced their doom or was captured and banished from the world.

Over the years Darasuum Yaim has transformed from village to town to city fast. Its expansion was rapid after the treaty of Vanquo. Homes needed to be build to accommodate the survivors of the sith empires purge of Mandalore, Concord Dawn and other former Mandalorian worlds. Through the expansion of residential, industrial needs raised opening up a district with eco friendly warehouses and factories. Even though Darasuum Yaim has expanded, when flown over you are still able to see the its origins thanks to a buffer zone. In this time Clan Solus evolved into House Solus, having Clan Gred, Clan Tal and smaller clans join.

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removed all and similar coding errors
Edited village to city and added in last paragraph as some historical reasoning for the growth.
Edited the description of Solus Manor
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[member="Cynthia Solus"]

I assume Clan Solus doesn't have a group submission, minor faction or anything?

Also your tag broke here:

The Home can fit twenty in although currently only ten take residence here (Bir Solus, Kad Solus, Delphine Solus, Rava Solus, Jaick Solus, Vhela Solus, Corl Solus, Jayda Solus, Cynthia Solus, @Helly rayne)
You may want to fix that.

You also forgot to fill the canon field out. If it isn't a canon location simply put N/A there.
 
[member="Jairus Starvald"]

No not yet the lore sub is to go up after this so I can add these to the assets lists . Also no minor since I don't have many pc in the clan to warrent a sub faction.

Other than that edited
 
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Cynthia Solus Cynthia Solus

Hi, I'm Judah, and I will be reviewing your submission. There are a couple quick things to look at, so let's jump into it.

No. 1 OLD TEMPLATE

The template you are using is the not the most current, so you will need to ensure you bring this template up to current. You can find it here for ease of use. I am guessing you meant to use the city template. Please be sure all the fields from the template I linked are included. such as permissions. If there are any which do not apply simply mark those as N/A

No. 2. BROKEN LINKS

Several of your links are broken Here is a list:

Kebii'tra Aranar Automated Gun Platform
The Battle of Vanquo (I get an error)

No. 3. SPOILERS

In your submission you have text or links placed in spoilers. According to the guidelines spoilers can only be used for images.

Spoilers and Tabs are not permitted in submissions, however, images can be placed in Spoilers. This is the only exception. Text should not be hidden.

Please be sure that any text or links you have hidden in spoilers are taken out of the spoilers please. Any images you have may remain.

No. 4. FORMATTING ISSUES

Due to the age of the submission there are a few formatting issues, but I think these will be fixed by bringing the template up to date. If you would like I can have this moved to pre-codex if you just want to start with a blank slate.

Go ahead and tag me when you have decided how to proceed. As always you can just make the edits here if you like.

Thanks!
 
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