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Tech Review Bio-Organic Medication Synthesis Organ

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Sword Herald Special Purpose Industries
  • Affiliation: Calligenia Io
  • Market Status: Closed-Market
  • Model: N/A
  • Modularity: Yes
    • May be Implanted in Bio-Organic Nuetralizers, Biots, and HRDs
    • Compatible with Organic and Cybernetic Modifications
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: Vong Biot Tissue
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Drug Synthesis Organ
  • Size: Average
  • Weight: Average
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Vaccine Synthesis Cells - Capable of producing a vaccine to a given disease upon exposure, including some types of cancers.
  • Antidote Synthesis Cells - Capable of producing an antidote to a given poison, toxin, or venom upon exposure. Can also produce anti-radiation inoculants.
  • Medication Synthesis Cells - Capable of producing medications which can treat afflictions ranging from parasites, autoimmune disorders, and various chronic conditions. Can also produce painkillers, stimulants, depressants, disinfectants, synthetic hormones, and general anesthetics.
  • Memory Cells - Records diseases, poisons, toxins, or venoms that a Nuetralizer or biot has already been exposed to and generated antidotes for, allowing these to be produced faster with later exposure. In addition, medications and drugs can also be placed ‘on tap’ to allow them to be synthesized faster.
STRENGTHS
  • Synthetic Healer - The organ is capable of producing antidotes, vaccines, and treatments for any number of afflictions. It is also capable of producing utility drugs ranging from disinfectants to anesthetics.
  • Varied Delivery - The organ can produce drugs in gas or liquid form.
  • Drug Shortage - A Nuetralizer or biot equipped with the organ can be walking drug factory. It can help to relieve drug shortages in hard-pressed clinics which are far from established production lines.
WEAKNESSES
  • Alpha Red - Alpha Red toxin can kill the organ, likely causing extreme bleeding, liquefaction, and a host of other deleterious effects.
  • Vong Tissue - The organ is allergic to and unable to produce antidotes for Baffor tree pollen, due to it being constructed out of Vong Biot tissue, much like the crab armor worn by the Yuuzhan Vong. Naturally, exposure to this substance can be fatal or deadly to various degrees, for both the organ itself and the Nuetralizer, as well.
  • Dependent Power - The organ does not include its own source of power. Should it be severed from the host's power plant, it will no longer function.
DESCRIPTION
Derived from the capabilities of the Crisis Nuetralizer, the Bio-Organic Drug Synthesis Organ is a medication synthesis organ designed for Bio-Organic Nuetralizers and biots. It is capable of synthesizing any number of drugs, vaccines, antidotes, and other medications from the host’s body fluids. In this regard, it is ideal for ‘outback’ and battlefield clinics, where drug shortages are common. All in all, the organ is hoped to expand the healing capabilities of those Nuetralizers it is given to, allowing them to treat patients under even the most demanding conditions.
 
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If it already existed I would have used that instead. I kind of hoped that the point of the factory was creating new stuff that didn't already exist, but I guess I was mistaken. Regardless, I changed it to unique and added an affiliation.

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It does exist to create new items that are beyond the understanding of others. The difference is also the balance of creating things that are powerful in of itself. Both is the miracle drug, this wishes to also be its own miracle drug that cures all as an organ from Vong Tissue, not Fosh Tears available at any time.

APPROVED!
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FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Bloodflower Sapphire
Link to Submission: https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/bloodflower-sapphire.175581/
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Add AEGIS Nanoarray and Droid Brain Defense System

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Bio-Organic Medication Synthesis Organ
Link to Submission: https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/bio-organic-medication-synthesis-organ.176656/
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Rushed the changes on it and want to augment the capabilities to better fit a unique item

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: "Taral" Sith Trooper Armor - Designation: UX-0626
Link to Submission: https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/taral-sith-trooper-armor-designation-ux-0626.150374/
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Update
 

Krass Wyms

Jedi Tech Division
Factory Judge
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Hello, I shall be looking at this today.

Hyper Heal - In many ways, the organ is capable of producing medical miracles. And yet, none so clearly as the powerful healing agents it is capable of synthesizing, especially the likes of Aspha Serum and Bacta-H, which are capable of healing wounds within moments, making for a kind of technological Force healing.
Yeah this is going to need some heavy dialing down. It was previously accepted after being toned down because of how much healing it could do. So sub modding it to bypass the previous judges requests and points.

No. There is almost zero basis for something to exist as is, even Bota which boasts to be one of the greatest kinds of medication in Star Wars, can mutate and be ineffective after a few harvests and is considered the miracle drug of Star Wars.
this wishes to also be its own miracle drug that cures all as an organ from Vong Tissue, not Fosh Tears available at any time.

This wants to be unique which is fine but it should still be within the bounds of the universe. There was no one and all miracle cure. Bota worked different for different species and had severe limitations. Healing tears from mount sorrow were powerful as well as a few other things but aside from force healing by force gods most things had limitation. THis has no weaknesses to limit the healing just the bare standard for a vong biot. If you want to add massive jumps in strengths it should have something to rebalance it at the bare minimum.

Material: Vong Biot Tissue
THis is going to need a big canon basis. Vong biots were grown and raised for a specific purpose. Being combined to make more complex equipment. Tissue harvested would and should have the same effective nature of miriskin. Which did nothing it required a living things. A single organ doing so much is far beyond the capabilities without it being a full fledged creature.

Memory Cells - Records diseases, poisons, toxins, or venoms that a Nuetralizer or biot has already been exposed to and generated antidotes for, allowing these to be produced faster with later exposure. In addition, medications and drugs can also be placed ‘on tap’ to allow them to be synthesized faster.
Drug Shortage - A Nuetralizer or biot equipped with the organ can be walking drug factory. It can help to relieve drug shortages in hard-pressed clinics which are far from established production lines.
Given that this is unique it would be for a singular being the wording here makes it sound both interchangeable just neutralizers passing it around or that there are more then one which would be in violation of the unique production rating.

All and all vong tissue did not work like that... if it did then their creatures would have been more broken then they already were able to be. Just having the tissue without canon examples of it being this powerful when not a living thing this will need extensive rebalancing. An all in one miracle means to solve all problems and give instant healing factor to one being but also everyone around with no limitations. Sounds prime for abuse. Unique production is good but the dial for overpowered is going to need to go from 11 to a 2 and weaknesses to the healing are going to be needed beyond the standard vong weaknesses.
 

Krass Wyms

Jedi Tech Division
Factory Judge
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  • May be Implanted in Bio-Organic Nuetralizers, Biots, and HRDs
Drug Shortage - The organ effectively turns Calligenia into a walking drug factory. It can help to relieve drug shortages in hard-pressed clinics which are far from established production lines.
You changed the wording in some places but in others it still reads as made for more then one.

Malhealing - Due to the extreme healing speed of Bacta-H, a complex, messy, or infected wound might result in malhealing, resulting in tissues being grown in the wrong place.
Removing the instant healing in the strengths but keeping the ability unlisted is not going to fly. Yes this could be a decent weakness for it.... but you are still healing like wolverine as well as being able to do it for others. I would recommend focusing what you want and not go for everything. Specialized healing is possible but not everything.

THis is going to need a big canon basis. Vong biots were grown and raised for a specific purpose. Being combined to make more complex equipment. Tissue harvested would and should have the same effective nature of miriskin. Which did nothing it required a living things. A single organ doing so much is far beyond the capabilities without it being a full fledged creature.
You have still not answered this.
 

Krass Wyms

Jedi Tech Division
Factory Judge
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Alright allow me to look it over
May be Implanted in Bio-Organic Nuetralizers, Biots, and HRDs
All in all, the organ is hoped to expand the healing capabilities of those Nuetralizers it is given to

I will quote the previous judge

Maybe as Unique but there is still almost no basis for this other than tears that had to be force infused.

THe sub it unique the wording will need to be altered to not make it seem the organ is able to be passed around to multiple characters as unique generally denotes a PC

Material: Vong Biot Tissue
Can you give me a canon basis where this is used for the Vong?
THis is going to need a big canon basis. Vong biots were grown and raised for a specific purpose. Being combined to make more complex equipment. Tissue harvested would and should have the same effective nature of miriskin. Which did nothing it required a living things. A single organ doing so much is far beyond the capabilities without it being a full fledged creature.
You have still not answered this question, as I stated above vong tissue does not function independently of a creature. I will quote your weakness as well as the wookiee for the vong crab armor.

Vong Tissue - The organ is allergic to and unable to produce antidotes for Baffor tree pollen, due to it being constructed out of Vong Biot tissue, much like the crab armor worn by the Yuuzhan Vong. Naturally, exposure to this substance can be fatal or deadly to various degrees, for both the organ itself and the Nuetralizer, as well.

As the armor was a living creature, it was subject to a living creature's problems and was found to be dangerously allergic to the Bafforr tree pollen, discovered during the Battle of Garqi. The armor could also be destroyed by Force lightning.

THe crab armor was living still, it breathed, it fed. It was not just a piece that could be taken.

It is also going to as previously requested need some drawback. All of the healing strengths, near constant production of thousands of various drugs across the galaxy from many more species as potential. With no draw back or balance in the weaknesses. Even without the modifications it is a strong ask.
 

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