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Approved Starship Air'mar Cruiser MKII

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High Commander of the Lilaste Order
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a Cruiser for the Lilaste Order.
  • Image Source: Taken by me in Avorion [symbol source]
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source:N/A
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION


TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

  • Classification:
  • Length: 670 meters
  • Width: 150 meters
  • Height: 170 meters
  • Armament: Extreme
  • LO-10H Mass Driver Cannons [10]
  • LO-77H Tri Barrel Turbolaser Batteries [33]
  • LO-78H Heavy Turbolaser Batteries [73]
  • LO-80H Ion Cannons [30]
  • Defenses: Extreme
  • LO-21H point defense cannons [42]
  • three layers of armor with one layer of Armor plating
  • Anti-missle countermeasures such as flairs and Chaff launchers.
  • Missle Warhead Deactivaters
  • two Main Shield Generators with three back ups
  • Hangar Space: base
  • Hangar allocation: 0
  • Maneuverability Rating: low
  • Speed Rating: low
  • Hyperdrive: Average | 2.0

STANDARD FEATURES

  • Standard Communications Array
  • Standard Deflector Shield Generator
  • Standard Hyperdrive
  • Standard Ion Engines
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Navigational Systems
  • Standard Repulsorlift Engines
  • Standard Sensor Array
  • Can Enter Atmosphere
  • Lilaste order Weapon systems
  • the ship contains 2000 rounds of ammunition per LO-10C
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
N/A

STRENGTHS

  1. Tech Integration: Incorporates advancements from Fyrirdögun, Dral Kayatr, Seigurium, LO series ensuring potent offensive and defensive capabilities.
  2. Optimized Firepower: The wedge shape enables focused forward firing for maximum damage.
  3. Comprehensive Coverage: Weapon turrets cover almost all angles, minimizing blind spots.
  4. Fortified Defenses: Enhanced armor and shield generators ensure robust protection.
  5. Automated Defense Systems: AI-powered defenses for real-time threat identification and mitigation.
  6. Enhanced Fire Control: Advanced fire control systems ensure optimal accuracy and rapid target acquisition.
  7. Redundant Systems: Backup shield generators ensure continuous protection even when primary systems are compromised.
  8. Emergency Ejection: with the number of live rounds on board, the storage area containing the shells has been modified for an emergency ejection should the ship have a critical failure and start to get destroyed
  9. Vacuum Chamber: the room that the Shells are stored in also comes with emergency atmosphere venting. as a way to remove all oxygen from the room should a fire threaten to ignite the highly explosive shells.
  10. Enhanced Energy Distribution: Advanced energy distribution systems ensure optimal power supply to all weapon and defense systems,
  11. Self-Healing Armor: using alloys made from Laminanium, the ships hull can "heal" minor breaches or damages autonomously while out of combat . Enhancing their effectiveness.

WEAKNESSES

  1. Limited Lateral Firepower: The ship's design reduces its effectiveness in broadside engagements.
  2. Heat Signature: The weapon systems produce a significant heat signature, negating stealth capabilities.
  3. Ammunition Risk: The storage of live ammunition for LO-10H creates a risk of catastrophic explosions in the event of a hull breach.
  4. Maneuverability Issues: The ship's size and shape hinder rapid movement and adaptability in combat.
  5. Speed Constraints: Low speed can be a strategic disadvantage during retreat or rapid repositioning.
  6. Resource Intensive: The advanced systems require significant maintenance and operational resources.
  7. Complex Operation: The integration of various advanced systems requires a highly trained crew, making the operation of the cruiser complex.
  8. Targeting System Limitation: The advanced targeting system is susceptible to jamming and electronic warfare.
  9. Armor Weight: The self-healing armor, while robust, adds significant weight to the cruiser, contributing to its maneuverability and speed issues.
  10. Complex Systems: While powerful, the myriad of advanced systems can be complicated and require specialized training for practical use.
  11. Beyond Repair: even with laminanium if the Ships hill takes to much damage and or doesn't have time to repair the minor damage it will lose its ability to self "heal"

DESCRIPTION

With the success of the Air'mar cruiser and after sufficient combat testing of the vessel, it was noted that the ship had some weak spots in its armament placement. and with modularity in mind the the R&D team of the Lilaste order began working on a way to fix that, and Instead of building an entirely new ship from scratch, they went to work on stripping the ship down to its bare hull and removing some portions in the armor to allow for a wider range of motion for turrets. the ventral side sections were widened and in its place two rows of turrets. to boost the firepower of the ship. The vessel was also repainted to match the Lilaste order colors.
 
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Ravenfire

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FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Centurion class Star destroyer
Link to Submission: Centurion class Star destroyer
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Change to Defence rating to better fit with the armor used

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Air'mar MKII Heavy Cruiser
Link to Submission: Air'mar MKII Heavy Cruiser
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Change to weapon rating to better fit with the amount of weapons on board

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Drak'iv Destroyer
Link to Submission: Drak'iv Destroyer
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Change to weapon rating to better fit with the amount of weapons on board

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Dh'ivo Corvette
Link to Submission: Dh'ivo Corvette
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Change to weapon rating to better fit with the amount of weapons on board

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Drak'iv Shield Popper Frigate
Link to Submission: Drak'iv Shield Popper Frigate
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Change to weapon rating to better fit with the amount of weapons on board
 

Ravenfire

King of Pumpkins
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Laphisto Laphisto

Great but you still have listed changes, which could include adding new subs, removing subs and the like. As I have said before we like having an idea of how closely the reapproval judge needs to look.
 

Ravenfire

King of Pumpkins
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Laphisto Laphisto

Excellent, thank you for that.

Now new problem, the factory admin wants us all cracking down on people just linking other submissions as strengths and weaknesses. Thus I would like you to either remove any strengths or weaknesses that includes such links or has such links or secondary option expanded on the strengths and weaknesses. Such as instead of just saying the inherent weaknesses of Fyrirdögun, saying something more like While the incorporated metals do allow for some passive regeneration from any damage deal this is only effective if the ship manages to survive a combat encounter. As an example, now you don't need to parrot that word for word if you do decide to expand on them like I'm suggesting but it would be nice if you did expand on them or rolled them into other strengths and weaknesses.
 

Ravenfire

King of Pumpkins
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Submission Name: Dhivo Corvette
Link to submission: here
Reason for Factory Modification Request: to fix images

Submission Name: Drak'iv class Frigate, [Shield Popper varient]
Link to submission: here
Reason for Factory Modification Request: to fix images

Submission Name: Drak'iv Destroyer
Link to submission: here
Reason for Factory Modification Request: to fix images

Submission Name: Air'mar Cruiser MKII
Link to submission: here
Reason for Factory Modification Request: to fix images

Submission Name: Edaar Star Destroyer MKII
Link to submission: here
Reason for Factory Modification Request: to fix images
 
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