Approved Starship Agitator-Class Super Heavy Battlecarrier | NIV Predator

[Listib Hibin]

Issues.

• FINAL DAWN

Link is broken, please fix.

• Spectral Diffuser

Does not link to the Spectral Diffuser, please check again.

You are also one rating to high, please reduce a rating.

Let me know when you fix these.
Marlon Sularen

 

[Marlon Sularen]

Issues.


Link is broken, please fix.


Does not link to the Spectral Diffuser, please check again.

You are also one rating to high, please reduce a rating.

Let me know when you fix these.
Marlon Sularen

I spoke to some other Factory Judges last Friday and they told me that i could keep these ratings as long as i balanced it with a significant weakness as shown in this screenshots below

So wouldn't i still be able to to keep these ratings at the expense of a significant weakness?

 

[Listib Hibin]

Marlon Sularen

Normally yes but your weakness I am classifying as not enough. It can retract into the battle cruiser and makes it nearly nothing for a weakness. Try again or reduce a rating. Apologies if seeming stern, using phone at work.

 

[Marlon Sularen]

Listib Hibin

Would this be enough?

 

[Listib Hibin]

I will count it as such.

APPROVED!
Marlon Sularen

 

[John Locke]

Submission Name: Agitator-Class Super Heavy Battlecarrier - The Predator
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Factory Modification Request: To give the vessel a nice lil' upgrade >:3

 

[Listib Hibin]

Marlon Sularen

Before I go ahead and judge, what exactly did you change for your logs on this starship submission?

 

[Marlon Sularen]

Marlon Sularen

Before I go ahead and judge, what exactly did you change for your logs on this starship submission?

I think i already wrote that in the Changes Log at the bottom of the sub.

 

[Listib Hibin]

All in order.

APPROVED!
Marlon Sularen

 

[Ravenfire]

Submission Name: Agitator-Class Super Heavy Battlecarrier | FDS Predator
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Factory Modification Request: To update the submission in preparation for future threads

Submission Name: Pryde-Class Battlecarrier
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Factory Modification Request: To update the submission in preparation for future threads

Submission Name: Phaetra-class Light Battlecarrier
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Factory Modification Request: To update the submission in preparation for future threads

Submission Name: Praetorian-Class Star Destroyer | FDS Hand of Judgement
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Factory Modification Request: To update the submission in preparation for future threads

 

[Marlon Sularen]

Ravenfire

This is ready for live judgement

 

[MANIAC]

Marlon Sularen

Looks good. I found only two problems:

• The third permission is a discord link, so it is broken, I would like to ask you to edit it.
• The other one is an individual cannot own / fielded warships more than 500 metres. I would like to ask you to delete your character name from the Affiliation.

 

[MANIAC]

Marlon Sularen

Update on this? I have to move the thread to the Archive soon according to the Factory policy. I can give you a few more days if you need them, until Thursday (2024.04.11.), to make the necessary edits or indicate that you are asking for a few extra days for this.

 

[Marlon Sularen]

MANIAC The necessary edits have been made

 

[MANIAC]

Marlon Sularen

Thank you!

Re-approved.