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Codex Denied Adjudicators Mercenary Company

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Mercenary company for a character to lead
  • Image Credit:
  • Canon: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: N/A
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Organization Name: Adjudicators
  • Classification: Mercenary Company
  • Affiliation: Kenth Berik
  • Organization Symbol: (Image) - Patch on the uniform of every members located on the right shoulder
  • Description: The Adjudicators is a Mercenary Company made up of veterans and civilians from various current and former Imperial factions. Apart from Mercenary jobs the Adjudicators focus on imposing law on planets or areas deemed lawless
GEOGRAPHICAL INFORMATION
  • Headquarters: Carida - The company maintains a single office on Carida, the planet of its founding. Despite this, almost all ranking members are instead based at their respected fleets/ships such as Mern Squadron
  • Domain: None. The Adjudicators remain mobile, travelling large regions of space. Their relationships between planets vary greatly, from restorers of order to authoritarian invaders
  • Notable Assets:
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Hierarchy: The Adjudicators consists of a mixture of corporate and naval ranks and titles. The Adjudicators is headed by a CEO and company chiefs. At the same time the CEO acts as the head of Adjudicators and the chiefs consist of high ranking officers.
  • Membership: The Adjudicators accepts both Imperial veterans and civilians, the latter taking part in a short but intense basic training and the former taking part in a company orientation program as well as certain key bits of basic training. Individuals looking to join simply have to apply via a ranking officer of the group who will review their background. From there the officer will either approve or disapprove the candidate depending on their history (criminal record, previous service, work history, Identification documents). Veterans wishing to attain their previous rank must consult their recruiting officer and will be judged on a case by case basis
  • Climate: There is a large and ever present military atmosphere within the company. Members receive full or partial basic training, R&R, postings, etc.
  • Reputation: Mixed - Rumours are heard of a force of former imperials and mercenaries forcefully imposing law on various planets between jobs.
  • Curios: Each member is outfitted with a uniform:
    • Officers - Black military uniform with company insignia
    • Standard Personnel - Black Jumpsuit with company insignia.
    • Security Troopers - Black Jumpsuit with white plastoid chest piece and boots. Company Standard: Veteran's may retain helmets and other pieces of armour to denote previous Imperial service.
  • Rules: Company Standard - Set of rules laid out by the company which; ensure it's legality with various factions and keeps the company a professional force
  • Goals: The company has two goals as outlined in the Company Standard:
    • Primary - Restore order to former imperial worlds.
    • Secondary - Provide premier mercenary services to current and former Imperials.
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HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Retired Captain Kenth Berik was disgusted as he watched once mighty Imperial strongholds abandoned and unprotected as Imperial factions rose, fell and splintered across the galaxy. Kenth decided to then done his uniform once more and sent out a call to former colleges and veterans of any imperial faction to join him. Thus the Adjudicators and Mern Squadron was born, initially only having enough members to operate a single corvette, it has since grown in size, recruiting more veterans as well as civilians seeking a place in the mercenary fleet. Operating under the guise of a Mercenary Fleet, Kenth has planned for the fleet to operate as both a Mercenary Company and a security fleet. The mercenary aspect allows the Adjudicators to gain necessary funds and useful connections to allow them to complete their goal of restoring order to abandoned systems.
 
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Zak Dymo

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Kenth Berik Kenth Berik

I'll be doing this review for you. There's just one issue that I see.

1. Image Credit.


The provided link just leads me to a blank search page. I'll need a source for your header image. Here's an article that might help you with sourcing that.

I note that you also have a link to a Rebels screen shot for the military uniform. That should also be reflected in the Image Credit section, such as by linking the IMDB entry for that show.

Those are my thoughts. Please tag me when you have completed any edits.
 
Submission Name: Adjudicator Mercenary Company
Link to Submission: https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/adjudicators-mercenary-company.138624/
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Give it an update and reformat it.

Submission Name: Mern Squadron
Link to Submission: https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/mern-squadron.138619/
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Give it an update and reformat it.

Submission Name: Adjudicator Security Troopers
Link to Submission: https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/adjudicator-security-troopers.138760/
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Give it an update and reformat it.
Please remember to include a list of changes and be sure to tag a member of Codex Staff and or use the "Ready" Pre-Fix when you need it moved back to Live Judging.
 
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