Codex Denied 1st fleet | Order of the Force

[Varloc]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To defeat the enemies of the Order
• Image Credit: none
• Permissions: none
• Links: none

GENERAL INFORMATION

• Fleet Name: 1st Fleet | Supremacy Fleet
• Classification: War Fleet
• Affiliation: Varloc and The Order of the Force
• Fleet Symbol:
• Description: This fleet is used mainly for defeating all enemies of the order. This fleet can do most naval operations, assault, defense, etc. This fleet is known for its tactical abilities. The fleet is commanded by Varloc, but when he is not available Tryre Allastar is commanding the fleet. This fleet is allied with the Orders Army corp.

SOCIAL INFORMATION

• Headquarters: none
• Ports of Call: none
• Goals: To defend and serve the order
• Reputation: Most people like the fleet for they know of its ability to have low death rates and low failure rates.
• COMPOSITION INFORMATION
• Fleet Size: Large
• Lead Ship: The avenger flagship
• Composition:

1x Annihilator class warship
2x Battlecruiser Fighter Transport

3x Defender class star destroyer
4x Phoenix I class star destroyer
8× Imperium class Star Destroyer
+flagship

MEMBERS
Varloc

NPCs
Tryre Allastar

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
This fleet was formed to be versatile, able to defend, attack, ferry troops and other things. This fleet has well trained officers, so battles are always fought strategically. This fleet used to fight pirates but now, they fight other powerful forces.
This fleet fought at a battle against a pirate lord in the outer rim, where this fleet defeated 30 ships, while only losing 3. The battle was one of the first tests for the fleet.

FLEET BATTLE TACTICS
Block formation- This formation is ment to protect other ships, by surrounding them.
Hammer formation- This formation is one of the most commonly used by the fleet, it's simple but it can change very quickly.
Stinger formation- This formation is just like Hammer Formation, but this one uses the fighters and lighter ships to execute quick, constant low damage attacks.
Wedge formation- This formation is used to quickly break through enemy lines.
Wind formation- This formation is used to take on enemy ships with specialized weaponry, by staying far enough apart.

 

[Allyson Locke]

Varloc

This submission needs a lot more work, the description is extremely short and not very informative as well as the historical information. I'm moving it back to pre-codex to allow you to have time to work on it. I suggest making use of the pre-codex to flesh out your submissions for live codex in the future.

Thank you.

There's also a broken link for your image for the "army symbol"

 

[Varloc]

Allyson Locke ready to be moved back to live judging.

 

[Allyson Locke]

Varloc there are some spelling errors please make sure to correct that I'll move to live judgement afterwards

 

[Varloc]

Allyson Locke
Fixed spelling, ready to be moved to live.

 

[Srina Talon]

Varloc

I would suggest that you flesh out this submission a lot more before moving this to Live Judging - It could use a lot more information and detail. It's very, very bare bones.

 

[Srina Talon]

Varloc

Still working on this?

If I don't hear anything back in a few days it will be archived due to inactivity. If you would like it pulled back out of the archived so that it can be worked on - Please make the request in the Submission-Modification Thread.

 

[Srina Talon]

Archived due to Inactivity