Approved Starship Annihilator class warship

[Varloc]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To make a Ship that has the firepower for my plans
• Image Source: N/A
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: none

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Order of the Force Production Company
• Affiliation: Varloc, The Order of the Force.
• Model: Quad ion engine Heavy Battle Cruiser.
• Production: Limited
• Material: Alusteel and Durasteel Alloy, and transprasteel and other ship components

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Heavy Assult cruiser
• Length: 3,000 meters
• Width: 1,000 meters
• Height: 500 meter.
• Armanent: Very high: 24 heavy turbo laser cannons, 64 turbo laser cannons, 64 ion canons, and 12 tractor beam projecters.
• Defenses: high
• Hangar Space: Average
• Hangar Allocations: (This is the allocated amounts of starfighters and support craft (dropships, shuttles,gunships,etc) this submission can hold in its hangar based on the maximum hangar space capacity listed above)
  • Starfighters: 8 Squadrons
  • Support Craft: 3 Squadrons
• Maneuverability Rating: Very low
• Speed Rating: High
• Hyperdrive Class: 2
• Other complement: 10,000 troopers, 12,000 tons cargo

STANDARD FEATURES

• Standard Communications Array
• Standard Deflector Shield Generator⁵
• Standard Hyperdrive
• Standard Ion Engines
• Standard Life Support Systems
• Standard Navigational Systems
• Standard Repulsorlift Engines
• Standard Sensor Array
• Standard Frigate Weapons
• Standard Targeting Systems

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

• Advanced Turbolasers
• Advanced Laser Cannons
• Advanced Shielding

STRENGTHS

• Has high firepower and defences
• Can enter atmosphere for easier troop landings

WEAKNESSES

• Has bad maneuverability
• Cannot land on planet.

DESCRIPTION
This ship is the workhorse of the Navy of the Order (The Order of the Force). It is grey and is vary large. It is able to carry a moderate landing force and fighter Squadrons. Thy ship is powered by a vary strong reactor core, and is moved by its 4 ion engines. The ship has powerful weaponry to defeat most ships of its size, that dare stand in its way.

 

[Varloc]

John Locke
ready for approval

 

[Vora Kaar]

Varloc

Read the Rules of the Factory. You are not allowed to bump your own submission when waiting for a judge to approve or deny it.

You will have to wait for a judge to get to this like everyone else.

 

[Listib Hibin]

Classic warship but we have some issues.

I cannot do a ratings review until this is solved. See, you are a Minor Faction, so at 4,200 meters, you cannot have a Minor production ship. At 4,200 meters, it be considered a Unique ship as it is a combat ship. Please change the production rating or sizing.

Also I am pretty sure there is no such thing as Super Turbo Lasers, please remove the Super part. Also if you need help figuring out a few, there is Quad, Triple and Double. The Super could be replaced with Heavy as that is generally the higher classification of a Turbolaser.

Also I have no idea what you are doing for Primary Source section. Clarify.


Let me know when you make the required changes.
Varloc

 

[Varloc]

I changed it, sorry about that.
Listib Hibin

 

[Listib Hibin]

You still have not done the following:

Also I am pretty sure there is no such thing as Super Turbo Lasers, please remove the Super part. Also if you need help figuring out a few, there is Quad, Triple and Double. The Super could be replaced with Heavy as that is generally the higher classification of a Turbolaser.
That means no Super Turbo Lasers. You can say heavy if you want as that is accepted or show me the wookeepedia page showing Super Turbo Lasers as I cannot find it.

Also I have no idea what you are doing for Primary Source section. Clarify.


You are also still breaking the length rules.

You are at 3000 meters which qualifies as Limited. Going above 2,000 KM means it becomes Limited. There is no middle ground. Mass/Minor share the same rating. This submission is current production rating is Minor. You are a minor faction so either make your production Limited OR decrease this to 2000 meters.

Let me know when you done these changes. All of them.
Varloc

 

[Varloc]

Fixed
Listib Hibin

 

[Listib Hibin]

• Hangar Space: Average
• Hangar Allocations: (This is the allocated amounts of starfighters and support craft (dropships, shuttles,gunships,etc) this submission can hold in its hangar based on the maximum hangar space capacity listed above)
  • Starfighters: 16 Squadrons
  • Support Craft: 6 Squadrons

2000m [Base: 2 | Very Low: 5 | Low: 8 | Average: 11 | High: 14 | Very High: 17 | Extreme: 20]

This is incorrect now, please repair to the average.

Thy ship is powered by a vary strong reactor core, and is moved by its 4 ion engines. The ship has powerful weaponry to defeat any ship that dare stand in its way.

Sorry I missed this, can you make it more of Can Defeat any ship...remember that Super Star Destroyers exist also so I do not think this ship can win against SSDs. Rewrite this place.

You are above one rating. Please decrease one rating
Varloc

 

[Varloc]

Fixed
Listib Hibin

 

[Listib Hibin]

Approved, awaiting Mentor Approval.

Varloc
John Locke

 

[John Locke]

Varloc | Listib Hibin

APPROVED