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"Light, Durable even against a lightsaber, and holds an edge well.
Even has a field disruptor, for cutting cowards through their energy shields"

—Tayl Vizsla to Samara[1]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Contained energy blade \\ Vibro-blade Hybrid
  • Size:
    • Beskad:
      • Average
    • Kal:
      • Small
  • Weight: Average
SPECIAL FEATURES
STRENGTHS
  • Lightsaber resistant:
    • Mandalorian steel blade provides natural lightsaber resistance, Capable of parrying blows during extended engagements.
    • Contained energy blade is unaffected by other lightsaber blades, Capable of parrying lightsabers during extended engagements.
  • Cutting power:
    • Contained energy blade can cut through any material that other lightsabers can with ease.
    • Capable of cutting through flesh and bone on the battlefield with unsettling ease.
    • individual field disruptor allows the weapon to cut through basic energy fields.
  • Ultrasonic Vibro-blade:
    • Ultrasonic Vibro-generator allows the blade to cut through flesh, Bone and even durasteel with unsettling ease.
  • Speed:
    • While not weightless like other lightsabers, The mandalorian steel blade is still surprisingly nimble for a blade of it's size.
  • EMP\Ion resistance:
    • Reinforced duraplast internals protect the weapon's vibro-generator and lightsaber properties from Ionic\EMP damage, And will remain activated and intact when struck.
WEAKNESSES
  • Cortosis:
    • Cortosis will temporarily short out the contained energy blade on contact
  • Lightsaber resistant materials:
    • Contained energy blade cannot cut through lightsaber resistant materials, Such as reinforced Duraplast, Cortosis, Beskar, Allusteel, etc.
  • Structural design:
    • The angular and jagged design of the blade provides the wielder's opponent leverage when attempting to control the wielder's blade, As well as the wielder. It is quite literally, A double edged sword.
  • Not a throwing saber:
    • Trigger based activation means that the contained energy blade deactivates when the trigger is released, Making it a poor choice of throwing weapon.
  • High maintenance:
    • Despite the mullinine edge, The saber-beskad and Kal require frequent sharpening, And the polished ori'ramikad wood sheath requires re-polishing and treatment. Additionally, The electronic internals should be regularly cleaned.
DESCRIPTION
Based on an Ancient mandalorian design from Aloy Vizsla's past, The Roonic pattern Beskad and Kal were both designed by Aloy Vizsla as a Duelist's blade set for mandalorians hunting the Sith. The design featured a traditional styled Beskad blade that was wider near the tip and designed to cleave through enemies and batter their defenses, But featured a longer and more slender blade than traditional mandalorian designs, Giving the wielder an elegant and precise form in battle.
The weapon was given a segmented activation trigger; Holding in the upper rigger would activate a plasmatic-lightsaber blade along the edge of the weapon, Which was cruder than Jedi or Sith designs, Bearing similarities to the Ren saber designs, Which were slightly unstable and resulted in a rippling energy blade that was known to spark violently and make unsettling crackling sounds.
Holding in the lower trigger would activate the ultrasonic vibro-generator, Causing the weapon to produce a high pitched humming sound when swung and cause cut devastating wounds clean through organic matter and metals alike.
This second method of damage was included to provide a backup alternative in the event that the contained energy blade was shorted out by cortosis. Though some might say that Aloy simply wanted a "Mandalorian aesthetic" to prevail over the weapons of Jedi and Sith.
A smaller version in the form of a mandalorian Kal was constructed after successful tests and typically constructed in paired sets like the the Kal & Beskade wielded by the ancient Neo-crusaders.​
Single handed Saber-Beskade were worn on the hip, With the Saber-Kal worn on the same hip above it. They both came with decorated sheaths made from polished Ori'ramikad wood.​
Two-handed variants of the Beskade were sometimes worn on the back, While Kal that had not been paired with a single handed beskade were worn on hanging sheaths horizontally on the front of the belt, Or at the small of the back.​

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Submission Name: Vizsla dueling sabers || Lightsaber Beskad & Kal
Link to Submission: Heeeere
Reason for Factory Modification Request: I'd like to alter the affiliations and manufacturers now that the parent faction is kinda dead-ish

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Submission Name: "Starfire" gauntlet plasma caster
Link to Submission: Link
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Same as the above.

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Submission Name: PK-45 "Peacekeeper" hybrid pistol
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Same as the above

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Submission Name: EE-5 Particle carbine
Link to Submission: thissss
Reason for Factory Modification Request: same as the above
 
HPI AI; Terraris Command
Factory Judge
Aloy Vizsla Aloy Vizsla

Looks good, however:
  • The Market Status is weird, if it is open, anyone can use it, not just that two faction what you wrote. But if you write Closed market, only those can use whom are in the Affiliation.
  • And about the production scale, you wrote Semi-unique, but the Affiliation is a minor faction and a Major faction. Please delete one of it, and if you keep the Enclave, please mention only PCs can use it.
    Production: The scale is Semi-Unique (A single small unit, squad, or squadron),
 
FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: EE-5 Particle Carbine
Link to Submission: xxxxxxxxx
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Due IC events and faction changes, I would like to update the affiliation, reference images and any broken images\links in this and the following submissions.

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: PK-45 "Peacekeeper" hybrid pistol
Link to Submission: xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Reason for Factory Modification Request: [See Above]

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Submission Name: Vizsla Dueling beskad & kal
Link to Submission: xxxxxxxxx
Reason for Factory Modification Request: [See Above]

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Submission Name: Ml.II "Starfire" Plasmathrower
Link to Submission: xxxxxxxxx
Reason for Factory Modification Request: [See Above] I also want to revert the name to "Plasma-caster" as it rolls off the tongue better >.>

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Tayl's Beskar'gam :: Unchained
Link to Submission: xxxxxxxxxxx
Reason for Factory Modification Request: [See Above] I would also like to update it in line with IC events

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Apex: cybernetic anatomical system
Link to Submission: xxxxxxxxx
Reason for Factory Modification Request: I would like to completely rebalance this submission by removing certain components and altering the strengths accordingly

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FACTORY ARCHIVAL TEMPLATE
Submission Name: "Starfire" gauntlet plasma-caster
Link to Submission: xxxxxxxx
Reason for Archival Request: This is now obsolete due to the Mk.II variant
 
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CHANGELOG:
  • Updated manufacturer
  • Updated affiliation
  • Minor description change(grammar)
  • Changed quote, sourced from roleplay
  • Changed submission name
  • New div code

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