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Vapor-Class Star Destroyer

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

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  • Intent: To create a star destroyer to go in conjunction with the Sovereign-class Battlecruiser/Heavy Carrier
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Cruiser/Star destroyer
  • Length: 1040 Meters
  • Width: 400 Meters
  • Height: 216 Meters
  • Armament: Very High
    • 24 Heavy Triple Turbolaser Batteries
    • 18 Heavy Dual Turbolaser Batteries
    • 24 Medium Quad Turbolaser Batteries
    • 27 Medium Dual Turbolaser Batteries
    • 20 Medium Ion Cannons
    • 2 Wing Mounted O.B.I.C cannons
  • Defenses: Average
    • Standard Internal Defenses
    • Advanced EWAR, Electronic Countermeasures, Chaff, Flare Launchers
    • Standard Emergency Thrusters
    • Primary Deflector Shielding Array (Ray and Particle Barriers; Overlaid.)
    • Emergency Deflector Shielding Array
  • Hangar Space: Average
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: 4 squadrons ( 48 QIE Fighters)
    • Support Craft: 1 squadron ( 12 troop transports)
  • Maneuverability Rating: Average
  • Speed Rating: Average
  • Hyperdrive:
    • Class 1.0 [Main]
      • Path engine Class 6.0 [Backup]
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Life Support Systems
  • Communications Array
  • Sensor Arrays
  • Escape pods
  • Standard Navigation System
  • Standard Ion Engines
  • Standard Repulsorlift Engines
  • Encryption Network
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • The Vapor is far and away one of the best-designed vessels in the galaxy. First, it fixes all of the flaws of the old ISD line.
  • Though almost half as small as an Imperial-class star destroyer, they pack a similar, if not greater, punch.
  • The bridge is internalized, so the Vapor lacks the towering target that is the ISD command tower.
  • The Vapor also carries fewer fighters than an Imperial-class star destroyer but they are stronger, playing to the Final Dawn's strengths.
  • A Vapor-class is designed to be a capital-killing Star destroyer.
  • The Vapor also uses more modern technology to help run the vessel, allowing for a crew that is a fraction of the size of an ISD.
WEAKNESSES
  • The Vapor is extremely specialized for space warfare, While an Imperial-class star destroyer is meant to be an all-in-one garrison vessel, capable of holding space and supporting operations on the ground, the Vapor is not as well suited for this task.
  • The Vapor can only transport a fraction of the troops that an Imperial-class star destroyer can, and most of them will likely be tasked with garrison aboard the vessel itself.
  • The Vapor then requires additional support to mount effective ground campaigns being parred with Sovereign-class Battlecruiser/Heavy Carriers as command ships.
  • If the Vapor is facing a large fleet of warships it will have to retreat or hold its own until reinforcements arrive.
DESCRIPTION

It was created for the Final Dawn to be used as the backbone of the navy, for escorting the Sovereign-class of ships into battle. Its weapons consist of 24 Heavy triple turbolaser batteries, 18 Heavy Dual turbolaser batteries, and 27 Medium Dual Turbolaser Batteries for maximum damage output on enemy ships' hulls, also 20 Heavy Ion Cannons and 2 Wing Mounted O.B.I.C cannons for taking out their enemy's shields, the weapons are placed around the ship giving then an almost 360 degree of fire. Its complement of starfighters consists of 48 QIE Fighters with 12 troop transports/Gunships. The crew complement is 600 Officers, 115 Gunners, and 1600 troops, 800 for battle and the rest for shipboard security. The Vapor shields consist of 2 Primary Deflector shield generators (Ray shielding for defending against turbolaser hits, Particle shielding for defending against torpedos and space debris) which are overlaid giving the ship the best protection, cause the primary shield generators to fail, are deactivated or destroyed the emergency shield generator activates for a limited time giving the ship the possibility of escaping the battle. The Defences of the ship consist of an advanced EWAR, Electronic Countermeasures, Chaff and Flare Launchers. Some people say with all those advanced systems and weaponry the Vapor can hold her own against a dreadnought-sized ship for a short while.
 
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HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Pyre Palpatine Pyre Palpatine

This is an intersthing ship.
  • First, your ratings are overpowered (+1), please fix this.
  • I feel this armament rating more to a Very High than a High. To modify this, is just a recommandation, not mandatory.
  • The Hangar space is only 5 squadrons in this size, not 7, please fix this.
  • And please separate the different strengths and weaknesses, because difficult to see them in such a way.
  • And please explain what do you mean under "the smaller dreadnought, SSD-type vessels" The smallest is 5,000 metres long from these, and this ship's weaponry and defences are not reflect what you wrote.
 
Pyre Palpatine Pyre Palpatine

This is an intersthing ship.
  • First, your ratings are overpowered (+1), please fix this.
  • I feel this armament rating more to a Very High than a High. To modify this, is just a recommandation, not mandatory.
  • The Hangar space is only 5 squadrons in this size, not 7, please fix this.
  • And please separate the different strengths and weaknesses, because difficult to see them in such a way.
  • And please explain what do you mean under "the smaller dreadnought, SSD-type vessels" The smallest is 5,000 metres long from these, and this ship's weaponry and defences are not reflect what you wrote.
Better?
 
HPI AI; Terraris Command
Factory Judge
Pyre Palpatine Pyre Palpatine

  • Now the ratings are +2, so you have to decrase the ratings.
  • The Hangar space is only 5 squadrons in this size, you still wrote 6, please fix this.
  • The first and the third weakness ie nearly the same, so please delete one of it.
 
HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Pyre Palpatine Pyre Palpatine

Update on this? I have to move the thread to the Archive soon according to the Factory policy. I can give you a few more days if you need them, until Monday (2022.05.09.), to make the necessary edits or indicate that you are asking for a few extra days for this.
 
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