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Vainalorium

Important Note / Disclaimer:
In Centerra, different cultures use terms like "interconnections" and "celestial energies" for the Force, reflecting their beliefs. The Force is seen as magical, similar to the Ewoks' view. These terms show how each group understands the Force. Centerra often experiences Force anomalies, showing its strong link to cosmic energies. Events like the Stellar Convergence, where celestial bodies align, impact the planet's cultures and beliefs, emphasizing the balance between the Force and life. This portrayal is part of the fictional world's imagination.






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Vainalorium


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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To colorize, enrich, flesh out, and diversify the Planet of Centerra.
  • Image Credit: Novel Ai and some of my own skills
  • Canon: N/A.
  • Permissions: N/A.
  • Links: N/A.
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Vainalorium
  • Designation: Sentient
  • Origins: Centerra [Link to the Home World of Centerra]
  • Average Lifespan: 90 -200 years
  • Estimated Population: Planetary
  • Description: The Vainalorium are near-human beings with a graceful and slender build, long limbs, and pale skin. Their fine, straight hair and glowing skin give them a unique, beauty. Their clear, captivating eyes and shining hair add to their otherworldly charm, making them stand out. Their presence is mesmerizing, capturing the admiration of those who meet them.
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Breathes: Air
  • Average Height of Adults:177 cm /5 ft 9''+
  • Average Length of Adults: N/A.
  • Skin color: pale
  • Hair color: varied
  • Distinctions: The Vainaloriums have glowing skin, clear eyes, and shiny, flowing hair. They are known for their long limbs and gracefulness, which make them stand out.
  • Races: n/a
  • Force Sensitivity: standard
Strengths:
  1. Adaptability: Vainaloriums excel at adjusting to diverse environments and circumstances.
  2. Intelligence and Creativity: Vainaloriums possess exceptional problem-solving and innovative thinking abilities.
  3. Collaboration and Empathy: Vainaloriums are skilled at forming connections and working collaboratively with others.
Weaknesses:
  1. Fragility: Despite their unique appearance, Vainaloriums have relatively delicate physical constitutions, making them more prone to injuries.
  2. Sensitivity to Light: The radiant glow of their skin and the clear nature of their eyes make Vainaloriums sensitive to bright light sources, which can cause discomfort or even temporary vision impairment.
  3. Emotional Vulnerability: Vainaloriums possess heightened emotional sensitivity, which can lead to being easily overwhelmed by intense emotions or susceptible to manipulative tactics.
CULTURE
  • Diet:Omnivore
  • Communication: Spoken language, Centerran
  • Technology level: [Starwars Tech Levels] Industrial

    The Vainaloriums use advanced technology for exploration and improving their way of life. They've built machines and tools for travel, resource gathering, and construction. For example, they use steam-powered airships for exploring Centerra and have devices like automaton companions for help and protection on their journeys. In farming, they've introduced automated tools and irrigation to increase food production. Their technology helps them explore, trade, and live better across Centerra, showing their curiosity and ability to adapt to the planet's varied environments.

  • Religion/Beliefs: They dont have one specific religion of their own and tend to pick up religious view form other races on Centerra or blend a few ideas.
  • General behavior: Social, friendly, proud, skilled in arts, explorers and adventurers
HISTORICAL INFORMATION

The Vainalorium history is about exploring new areas on Centerra. They search for water, food, and learn about other cultures. They live scattered across the planet, without a central society.

Cultural Development:
Vainalorium society has nobles, merchants, and agricultural workers. Nobles are wealthy and powerful from birth, merchants earn through trade, and agricultural workers focus on producing food. They value their exploration achievements and like sharing their adventure stories.


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Matthew of Valendale Matthew of Valendale

Overall, this submission is pretty bare-bones. We're going to need you to elaborate.

1.) Please link the Planet somewhere in the submission. You can put it in the "Links" section.

2.) Races were left blank...Please put "N/A" if it doesn't apply or add what should be there.

3.) Please provide actual strengths and weaknesses rather than just "the same as a normal human" as this doesn't really tell us anything at all. You can try looking at other approved submissions for ideas to flesh it out. But if they're not really "different" than a base-line human except prettier...There's not much to go on here.

4.) Communication: What language do they speak? Galactic Basic? Centerran?

5.) Technology Level: What does "Industrial" mean in terms of Star Wars?

6.) Religion/Beliefs: were left blank...Please put "N/A" if it doesn't apply or add what should be there.

All of the sections could use some fleshing out, save, those areas where one word suffices. (Ex. Omnivore is fine, or the height, etc) If you're making a species you really want to make it your own by adding quirks, descriptors, etc. that will let them come to life.

Tag me when you're ready for me to look again.
 
1.) Please link the Planet somewhere in the submission. You can put it in the "Links" section.
Added Links
2.) Races were left blank...Please put "N/A" if it doesn't apply or add what should be there.
Added N/a
3.) Please provide actual strengths and weaknesses rather than just "the same as a normal human" as this doesn't really tell us anything at all. You can try looking at other approved submissions for ideas to flesh it out. But if they're not really "different" than a base-line human except prettier...There's not much to go on here.
Added some sentiments for weaknesses and Strength to make them a little more distinct. I really just wanted a simplified version or a basic race of this worlds 'humans'
4.) Communication: What language do they speak? Galactic Basic? Centerran?
Added languages
5.) Technology Level: What does "Industrial" mean in terms of Star Wars?
Added links and a description that helps flesh them out as a culture of adventures and travelers
6.) Religion/Beliefs: were left blank...Please put "N/A" if it doesn't apply or add what should be there.
Made some changes
--Added the usual Disclaimer as well.
 

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