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Approved Starship The Star Seed

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  • Intent: To create a unique corvette for First Sister

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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Heavy Frigate/Yacht
  • Length: 250 meters
  • Width: 250 meters
  • Height: 250 meters
  • Armament: Extreme
Heavy Continuous Laser Beam Cannon

Anti-Starfighter Continuous Laser Cannons (8)

Customizable Missile Launch Tubes (6)

Seismic Charge Release Bay

Ion Turrets (14)


  • Defenses: Extreme
Heavy Shielding

Emergency Deflector Shielding

Stygium Cloaking Device

Back Up Hibridium cloaking device

Superheavy Turadium Hull
  • Hangar Space: Average
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: 1 Squadron of Vulture Droids
    • Support Craft: 1 Lambda Class Shuttle
  • Maneuverability Rating: Very Low
  • Speed Rating: Very Low
  • Hyperdrive Class: Very Fast / 0.2
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Encrypted Communications Array
  • Emergency Deflector Shields Generator
  • Prototype Hyperdrive
  • Standard Ion Engines
  • Prototype Life Support Systems
  • Prototype Navigational Systems
  • Prototype Repulsorlift Engines
  • Prototype Sensor Array
  • Advanced Targeting Systems
  • Can Enter Atmosphere and Land
  • Master Suite
  • Escape Pod
ADVANCED SYSTEMS


Turadium Superheavy Armor Hull

Prototype Deflector Shield

Stygium Cloaking Device

Vast Weaponry, It's Main Weapon being a composite heavy beam cannon

Shipwide Healing Field Generator

Ultraheavy duty powerplant with emergency heavy duty back up

Interior of a utilitarian yacht

Capable of self repair due to onboard Laminanium Nanomachines

Prototype Hyperdrive

Advanced security defenses, including a squad of Model 1 Nuetralizers, and a squad of YVH-1 droids, along with two ASP-19 droids and a Sith Training Droid personally constructed and programmed by Darth Xiphos

Stock IG-86 Droids

Private Library containing books on Electricity Research Related to it, Droid Building and Maintenance Manuals, Sword Fighting, and Assassination Techniques, all focused at very close ranges. Books on the anatomy of multiple humanoid species. Books on Stage Magic

Sith Meditation Chamber


STRENGTHS

The Lap of Luxury: Utilitarian, in Imperial Aesthetics, but has all modern amenities, including an armory, Training Droids, and a security force, and a large library containing Multiple subjects. Has a Ultra Heavy duty powerplant with a heavy duty, emergency back up

Hulk Smash!: Bristling with Multiple heavy weapons, such as a Continuous Heavy Laser Cannon, Anti Star Fighter Continuous Laser cannons, Missile Tubes, Seismic Charge Release Bay, Ion Turrets and customizable Missile Launch tubes

Omni-directional: There is no good angle to attack from, as it's minor weapons are all expertly placed to provide full coverage

Stealthy: Has a Stygium Cloaking Device that can keep it hidden for 14 hours, at the cost of all weapons and Shielding turned off, also has a heavily Encrypted comm array, as well as a back up cloaking device that uses Hibridium

Security Force: A Force of Deadly Model 1's guards First Sister while aboard

Contemplation: A meditation Chamber allows Sister to focus and hone her powers

Aegis: An extremely armored hull and powerful shields give it a chance to survive all but the very worst atracks, and can repair itself with a massive supply of highly condensed carbon and Laminanium Nanites. Also has a shipwide healing field Generator that can heal all but the most severe wounds, tuned to affect only First Sister, healing her rapidly no matter where she is on the ship

Hyperdrive: A shockingly fast 0.2

WEAKNESSES


Hyperdrive Limits: One jump requires it to wait 35 minutes before it can jump again

Weapon Recharge: It's main continuous laser Cannon can only fire every 007 minutes. It's standardContinuous Laser Cannons can only fire every thirty seconds

Stealth Recharge: Requires 48 hours to recharge after every use for it's main cloaking device, and 24 hours for it's back up cloak. While The Hibridium device has been modified so it won't become unstable when the ship enters hyperspace, it can only remain active 007 hours and still imposes a Double Blind Effect. Also, all weapons systems must turn off when cloaks are active

Slow: You ain't outrunning a Tie Fighter

Molasses: You aren't out flying one either

Concentrated Bombardment: Focusing massive fire on one spot causes shields and armor to fail faster.

Slow heal: Takes a day for Nanites to fully repair damage, and carbon supply must be re stocked after


DESCRIPTION

The Star Seed is Xiphos's welcoming gift to First Sister, a deadly prototype War Yacht personally designed by Xiphos as the proof of concept for a more general series of warships, The Star Seed can ferry First Sister anywhere in the Galaxy, and gives her a good chance of surviving very tough encounters with enemy ships. As armored and crawling with weapons as it's designer, the resources to build it were supplied by Countess Arianna Belasko.
 
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There is...a lot to unpack. Be warned, this may seem more critical than previous reviews.

  • Classification: Heavy Corvette/Yacht
  • Length: 250 meters
  • Width: 250 meters
  • Height: 250 meters
This is Frigate size, not corvette. Please change at least the word Corvette.

  • Armament: Extreme
Composite Beam Heavy Energy Cannon

Experimental Arc Caster Radial Electric Weapon

Turret Mounted Heavy Particle Beam Cannons (6)

Anti-Starfighter Continuous Laser Cannons (8)

Customizable Missile Launch Tubes (6)

Seismic Charge Release Bay

Interior Heavy Sonic and Heavy Ion Turrets

Rating: Extreme
There is a lot wrong here so I am going to section this but short answer for here, this is way to powerful for an extreme armament frigate.

Composite Beam Heavy Energy Cannon

Turret Mounted Heavy Particle Beam Cannons (6)

Interior Heavy Sonic and Heavy Ion Turrets
A frigate cannot hold this many heavy weaponry. A Composite Beam Energy Cannon is usually the size for at least an Extreme Armament Cruiser but a heavy is more for a Battle Cruiser or Dreadnought Size. Same deal with Particle Beam Cannons which can be done, but not at Heavy classification as they are much heavier and much more powerful, more for cruiser on up. Same deal with Sonic and Ion heavy turrets though normal ones are perfectly acceptable.

Experimental Arc Caster Radial Electric Weapon
What is this? I need a lot more information or at least an item linked to this before attempting to allow it through.

  • Defenses:
Heavy Multilayer Shielding

Quick Regen Emergency Deflector Shielding

Stygium Cloaking Device

Experimental S-Thread Cloaking Shield

Superheavy Turadium Dampener Hull

Experimental Missile Track Scrambler
This is also wrong, there is no rating. Also what is Experimental Missile Track Scrambler, is there a link to that or the S-Thread Cloaking Shield? The Quick Regen Emergency Deflector Shielding? Also Heavy Multilayer Shielding and Superheavy Turadium Dampner Hull need links as most likely, those sound more towards Star Destroyer/Battle Cruiser classification.


  • Length: 250 meters
  • Width: 250 meters
  • Height: 250 meters
  • 200m [Base: 0 | Very Low: 0 | Low: 0 | Average: 1 | High: 2 | Very High: 3 | Extreme: 4 ]
    350m [Base: 0 | Very Low: 0 | Low: 1 | Average: 2 | High: 3 | Very High: 4 | Extreme: 5 ]
    500m [Base: 0 | Very Low: 1 | Low: 2 | Average: 3 | High: 4 | Very High: 5 | Extreme: 6 ]
  • Hangar Space: Average
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: 2
    • Support Craft: 1
This is also wrong. Your length at 250 meters, rounded down is 200 meters, meaning your average is one squadron. You cannot round up. Please repair this.


Once we get past this, we can review it further as there is a lot to do right now. If this is found to frustrating or otherwise, we can send it back to Pre-Factory for further changes or archive it if it is to much trouble to handle.

Let me know what is done.
Laertia Io Laertia Io
 
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