NPC Review The Dawers

[Franceline Dawer]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION FAMILY INFORMATION

• ● Intent: To create 2 family NPCs for Franceline Dawer to interact with between each of her adventures, providing me with a narrative isolate where I can have her process her own character development. These fine folks are to serve as narrative devices.
  ● Image Credit: Mom, Dad
  
• ● Family Name: Dawer
  ● Family Type: Nuclear
  ● Place of Origin: Balmorra
  ● Family Size: 2
  ● Loyalties: Galactic Empire / High Republic / Galactic Alliance
  ● Description: Survivors of the Maw's reformation into the Galactic Empire. Low class and fractious, scarred by the material conditions surrounding their unstable and ever-changing environment. Formerly extremely overprotective. Remnants of the old times.
  

FAMILY MEMBER 1 Name: Neena Dawer Age: 47 Species: Human Role: Matriarch, mother Languages: Basic Skills: Beekeeping Notable Possessions: N/A Holdings: N/A Appearance: Stout, presenting typical features expected from decades of prolonged malnutrition. Personality: Main force behind the family unit's coveting of Franceline Dawer . Concerned with her disease, slightly dissatisfied with her upbringing and deeply insecure about the future of her daughter.

FAMILY MEMBER 2 Name: Ofred Dawer Age: 54 Species: Human Role: Patriarch, father Languages: Basic Skills: Watch-making, agriculture Notable Possessions: N/A Holdings: N/A Appearance: Bulky, used to carrying weights. Shiny eyes surrounded by wrinkly twitching eyelids. Personality: Irritable and paranoid, discomforted greatly by the ever-looming threat of the Empire's many systems of oppression hurting his family. Overworked with horticultural pursuits, seeks peace in amateur watch-making and repair

 

[Judah Lesan]

Franceline Dawer

You have some broken links for photos and it seems your tabs may be broken as well.

Let me know when you are ready for me to look at this again, or if you need help.

 

[Franceline Dawer]

You have some broken links for photos and it seems your tabs may be broken as well.

Let me know when you are ready for me to look at this again, or if you need help.

Photographs have been replaced w/ Imgur links.

Tabs seem to be working on my end, could you elaborate on how they appear broken?

Thank you

Judah Lesan

 

[Judah Lesan]

Franceline Dawer

They we’re not wanting to change over earlier, but that seems resolved now.

[APPROVED]

 

[Judah Lesan]

Franceline Dawer

I had to pull this back. It seems you’re missing several of the OOC fields from the template. All
of them are required. If any of them don’t apply you can put N/A.

For reference here is what I need:

• Intent: [ State why you are making this submission and what purpose it will fulfill in RP. ]
• Image Credit: [ Provide credit to the original artist of the images in your submission. Link to the web page where it can be found and state the name of the original artist if possible. Each image used must be credited. Use TinyEye, Google Image Search, or the Image Credit FAQto help.]
• Permissions: [Please link any Marketplace purchase or similar approvals to use other Writers' content as part of this submission.]
• Links: [ Provide links to any relevant threads, characters, companies, locations, etc here. Canon or otherwise. Especially obscure references, or events important to the submission.]

and

GENERAL FAMILY INFORMATION
[ Include any general information about this NPC family here. Describe who it started with and or any events that may be tied to it. This area is for any general information that you might want other readers to know. ]