Approved Starship ST-149

[Ben Craig]

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Codify a shuttle.
• Image Source:
  • Link - Edited by yours truly
  • Bottom Art Credit to Ingrid L'lerim
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions:
  • Link
• Primary Source: N/a

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: N&Z Umbrella Corporation
• Affiliation:
  • Intelligence & Security Bureau
  • Ben Craig
  • The Vernichten
• Model: ST-149
• Modularity: N/A
• Production: Limited
• Material:
  • Quadanium steel outer plating
  • Impervium reinforced Durasteel hull
  • Tunqstoid lining
  • Quadanium steel outer plating
  • Transparisteel viewports
  • Duralium Reinforced Ersteel 145 inner plating
  • Ersteel 145 reactor plating

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Personal Shuttle | Squad Deployment Dropship
• Length: 14.39 meters
• Width: 10 meters
• Height: 25.1 meters (with wings up-right)
• Armament: High
  • NZ HP1 Turbo Laser
  • NZ RTL1 Launcher
• Defenses: High
  • NZ SS-1 Primera Shield System
• Squadron Count: | Low: 8 |
• Maneuverability Rating: Low
• Speed Rating: High
• Hyperdrive: Yes
• Hyperdrive Class: 2

STANDARD FEATURES

• N/A

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

• NZ SS-1 Primera Shield System
• NZ HP1 Turbo Laser
• NZ RTL1 Launcher
• NZ SAP-1A Sensor Systems Array
• NZ OS-HD2 Hyperdrive System
• NZ SSTC Soft Slicer Technology Coupler
• NZ ZMD Performance Package
• ZEUS Mk II

STRENGTHS

• Strong Defense and Offense
• Personnel Capacity

WEAKNESSES

• Storage Capacity
• Shield System Cool Down
• EMP Strikes

DESCRIPTION

• The ST-149 was the first product manufactured by InfiniVerse , now owned by N&Z Umbrella Corporation. Having undergone many changes and upgrades, the ST-149 is a unique one of a kind personal shuttle and squad deployment vessel. With it's expanded body being able to hold twenty troopers instead of the original fifteen, the ST-149 is an ideal choice for rapid troop deployment. It is also a luxury styled shuttle known to many officers and bureaucrats.

Spoiler: UPDATES:

8/2/2020: Changed: Format, Image, Out of Character info, Production Information, advanced systems, technical specifications, Description

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[Ben Craig]

Runi Verin

this submission is is ready to be moved

 

[Runi Verin]

Ben Craig

I believe you're a little confused here. This should be made on the ship template as opposed to vehicle. You should also note that the entire template will need to be used as per this rule:

• The entire template must be used in your submission. Users can customize templates to their own personal liking, but the template's fields are not to be changed/removed/altered, additional information may be added but base fields may not be changed or removed.

Please tag me when you've amended and I'll move this to active judgement.

 

[Ben Craig]

Ben Craig

I believe you're a little confused here. This should be made on the ship template as opposed to vehicle. You should also note that the entire template will need to be used as per this rule:



Please tag me when you've amended and I'll move this to active judgement.

My apologies, my mistake. I believe it is all fixed and ready to go! Thank You!

Runi Verin

 

[Runi Verin]

Ben Craig

Hey there. Quick review with just a few things needing amending before we can approve.

• Affiliation: Open-Market ; Ben Craig ; The Vernichten

Please can you hyperlink your biography and 'The Vernichten' here.

• Width: n/a

Unless you're saying this vessel is two dimensional, this rating is very much applicable.

• Hangar Space: N/a
• Hangar Allocations: N/a

A vessel of this size under 50m does not qualify for a hangar space rating. This should instead feature the following:

• Squadron Count: (Please provide the amount of fighters this submission would have in a squadron. The average squadron for any starfighter is 12, at lengths averaging 12.5 meters. The bigger the fighter, the smaller your Squadron Count should be. The smaller the fighter, the bigger your Squadron count can be. [None: 1 | Very Low: 4 | Low: 8 | Average: 12 | High: 16 | Very High: 20 | Extreme: 24 ] Squadron Sizes may be listed as just the rating.)

 

[Ben Craig]

Runi Verin

Hey, thanks for the feedback!

Biography is linked, The Vernichten is linked.

Width added

Hanger Space added, Hanger Allocations are none since this is a shuttle, no ships can fit inside it.

Ben Craig

Hey there. Quick review with just a few things needing amending before we can approve.


Please can you hyperlink your biography and 'The Vernichten' here.

Unless you're saying this vessel is two dimensional, this rating is very much applicable.

A vessel of this size under 50m does not qualify for a hangar space rating. This should instead feature the following:

 

[Runi Verin]

Ben Craig

I think we've got wires crossed on this one. As stated above (and from the small craft template I initially linked), it should be squadron count, not hangar count/allocations. Vessels need to be a minimum of 100m to have a hangar allocation.

 

[Ben Craig]

Ben Craig

I think we've got wires crossed on this one. As stated above (and from the small craft template I initially linked), it should be squadron count, not hangar count/allocations. Vessels need to be a minimum of 100m to have a hangar allocation.

Sorry about the confusion, I was just confused about how a shuttle could be part of a squadron since it wasn't exactly meant to fight, after i asked about it on the Discord, i understand now. Edited, and hope everything is cleared!

Runi Verin

 

[Runi Verin]

Approved.

 

[Runi Verin]

Moved to Pre-Factory as per author's request. Please remember to make a note at the bottom of your submission summarizing the changes you have made and tag a member of the Factory Staff once you're ready for active judgement.

 

[Ben Craig]

Done, Runi Verin

 

[Runi Verin]

Approved.

 

[John Locke]

Submission Name: ST-149
Link to Submission: https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/st-149.134071/
Reason for Pre-factory Request: Update the submission

Moved to pre-factory per OP request.

Please remember to include a list of changes made when you tag a member of factory staff to move the submission to live judgement.

 

[Ben Craig]

John Locke Move it up chief!

 

[Gir Quee]

Ben Craig , I'll be your factory judge for this submission. Conceptually, this looks solid, though it looks like this may be blending a combination of older and newer template styles for both capital ships and starfighters.

• Hangar Space: None
• Hangar Allocations: None
• Maneuverability Rating: High
• Speed Rating: High
• Hyperdrive Class: High : 1

Its size means that it should use the small craft template, which means it should not have "hangar space" or "hangar allocations" fields. Additionally, with the 5.1 template we have an additional field of "Hyperdrive" (which only has the options of "Yes" or "No"). A hyperdrive class of x1 won't require any additional balancing, but this is otherwise over-powered by one rating. As always, the options to reduce this are by lowering a rating, decreasing production, or adding a significant weakness.

Let me know if you have any questions. Thanks!

 

[Ben Craig]

Gir Quee

Done!

 

[Gir Quee]

Ben Craig , template part looks good now, but this still looks it's one rating over what's considered to be balanced:

Limited Production (-2)
Armament: High (+1)
Defense: High (+1)
Squadron Count: Low (-1)
Maneuverability: High (+1)
Speed: High (+1)

4-3 = 1

 

[Ben Craig]

Gir Quee

Done!

 

[Gir Quee]

Ben Craig approved!