I thought you had one of these! Finally I can give you some feedback!
Anyways, I will break this up a little bit.
Writer:
I have always enjoyed talking to you on a personal, or a writer/writer level. You take time to talk to those who you are Roleplaying with to make sure you are both on the same page, and are extremely open out it. Even telling people/myself that if anything needs fixed or if we have questions you are more than willing to ask. I will admit I have in the past just so then I can get the full page on whatever we are writing, but to say the least, you are open, and willing to communicate. Plus, you are just a good person over all. I enjoy the time I have spend under you as an apprentice with Kale, and I hope to spend more time with you.
Writing:
Your writing style is good, and clearly defined. Its concise and clearly has thought. Not ramblings or just late night pushes. You make the quality matter over quantity. Which is what this site is all about. Having posts that mean more than what they actually are. You hit this on the head very often and I don't think I have had a post of yours which I didn't want to, or was not excited to read and then reply too.
Character:
Romi, I feel is a very thought out and well played character. My entire idea on how people should play a character is that there is a Starting point, but there is no end point. There is only "During." You shouldn't play a character to get to one goal that is easy to reach or whatever. Because once they do that, they have no other purpose. Instead, write someone who has many goals, or ideas or propositions that you could follow. And I feel that Romi, has been written like this. She trained under a Master, and when they left, Romi was thrust into very difficult situations physically, emotionally and spiritually. It changed who she is to what she is now. She always has to fight. For one reason or another. Not because she "wants to be the best." but because she is trying to train others (Like myself), Defend people, Stop the bad guys, what have you.
She has, pun intended, character driven motives other than the a-typical ones. She is a Damaged person, trying to seek a way to either bring herself back together, and/or preventing others from being broken by the same means.
[member="Romi Jade"],