Alric Kuhn
Handsome K'lor'slug
Hi there, I've done one or two critiques of Alric before, asking people what I should change and what they thought. This time I thought I'd post this with an additional question.
What are your overall thoughts of this character? Do you like him? Hate him? Admire him? Think he's overblown?
I am genuinely interested in any and all thoughts and before I ask you yours I'll put down my own.
Alric is, in my opinion, my second most ever developed character. The only other character I've written who I would describe as more comprehensive and well developed would be Darth Moridin, Soliael is a close second, but I think Alric narrowly beats him out. Alric has been through a lot. He's in one of the longest threads In on the board, has connections with dozens of characters, has founded and grown three corporations, has met Sith Lords, Jedi Masters, and even Vong Overlords. He's "Died" and come back from the dead, has two daughters and will shortly be getting married for a second time in a story that has spanned almost an entire OOC year.
My point is, this character has a done a lot, and he's been fleshed out quite a bit. As a NFU, a Non-combat character(mostly), and not an expert in any particular sci-fi field(Scientist, slicer, etc) I'm quite proud of all I've accomplished with this character, and although I took some stumbles I quite like what Alric has become in the end.
So give me your opinion, whether good or not.
What are your overall thoughts of this character? Do you like him? Hate him? Admire him? Think he's overblown?
I am genuinely interested in any and all thoughts and before I ask you yours I'll put down my own.
Alric is, in my opinion, my second most ever developed character. The only other character I've written who I would describe as more comprehensive and well developed would be Darth Moridin, Soliael is a close second, but I think Alric narrowly beats him out. Alric has been through a lot. He's in one of the longest threads In on the board, has connections with dozens of characters, has founded and grown three corporations, has met Sith Lords, Jedi Masters, and even Vong Overlords. He's "Died" and come back from the dead, has two daughters and will shortly be getting married for a second time in a story that has spanned almost an entire OOC year.
My point is, this character has a done a lot, and he's been fleshed out quite a bit. As a NFU, a Non-combat character(mostly), and not an expert in any particular sci-fi field(Scientist, slicer, etc) I'm quite proud of all I've accomplished with this character, and although I took some stumbles I quite like what Alric has become in the end.
So give me your opinion, whether good or not.