Approved Tech OMEGA SQUAD FYB Special Ordinance

[Aien Mueller]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create Specialized Carbonite based ordinance in powercells, 40mm grenades, and rockets
• Image Source: The last stand fandom.com, TheSpecialistsLTD.com, Defensereview.com
• Canon Link: Carbonite
• Permissions: My Subs
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: BlasTech Industries
• Affiliation: Aien Mueller, Lt. Bren Alazar , Thirdas Heavenshield
• Market Status: Closed-Market
• Model: N/A
• Modularity: Yes
• Production: Semi-Unique
• Material: Explosive casing components, Powercell components, Carbonite, frozen carbon dioxide, water

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Carbonite Gas Ordinance
• Size: Average
• Weight: Average
• Explosive Type: Chemical
• Delivery Method: Fired, or Launched and Self-Propelled
• Effective Range: Long Range
• Area Of Effect: Average
• Damage Output: Very High (Especially effective against the Bryn'adul)

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Three different types of the ordinance: 60mm Rocket (capable of loading into Omega Squad FTB Rocket), 40mm Grenade (capable of loading into LPD53 Grenade Launcher), and Powercells (Capable of loading into and augmenting Cryo-blasters)

STRENGTHS

• IT'S CARBONITE: The proof is in the pudding. Carbonite and Carbonite weapons have a history of freezing enemies and targets.
• THREE DIFFERENT DELIVERIES: The multiple designs leave Omega Squad with plenty of options.
• BRYN'ASIKUL: While not officially specifically designed for use against the Bryn'adul but as a "cold" weapon in general, it's a Bryn weapon, designed with their physiology in mind.

WEAKNESSES

• ONE AND DONE: Other than the powercells, meant for blasters, these weapons are really just "one-shot Charlies" and you will some pretty good aim to reach your target with them.
• ONE PURPOSE ONLY: Sure, these weapons can do damage to tech and droids, but the slow, bulky effect is not good for much else if your reaction time is good enough. You may be hurt by it, but it's not that hard for you (if you are not Bryn) to get out of the blast radius before freezing up)

DESCRIPTION
Tired of having his team's hands proverbially tied, Aien began using every authorization he could give, use every advantage that his position, and can muster, and every connection he could call in to begin untying them. The Ronto, the armor, The FIST, this is in a long line. This is a designed ordinance that comes in the form of powercells, 40mm grenades, and 60mm rockets and is purely for the Bryn'adul. Is it obsession? Maybe, but it is an obsession with the best of intentions in mind. To protect the people of the SJC.

 

[Aien Mueller]

Okay Matthew Locke John Locke Listib Hibin This SHOULD be good for judging

 

[Felix Aquila]

Hello Aien Mueller

I'll be looking over and judging this app!

 

[Felix Aquila]

So, first things first, I will say that your app is slightly overpowered, i have to balance the sheet from its highest damage potential which is the Extreme Vs the Bryn'adul. My suggestion would be to remove the extreme rating and simply add that it is especially effective against the Bryn as an additional strength, that would be great, otherwise you would have to balance the extreme rating.

I would like a description on how you augment blaster weapons with carbonite. As these seem like two completely different types of weapon systems. Carbonite needs to be cooled to freeze things solid, which you've allured to in materials. Blasters are typically heat weapons, which is at odds with that delivery mechanism. My Suggestion would be to; remove the blaster option or perhaps say it can augment cryo blasters / weapons by adding Carbonite Gas to the mix.

Strengths and weaknesses look great!

Description seems fine.

All in all a great app, variable ammo is super useful!

 

[Aien Mueller]

Alrighty, Felix Aquila . I took your suggestions. Should be good now.

 

[Felix Aquila]

Aien Mueller , Fantastic~

This should be something that is explained in the strengths field, anything with a rating of Extreme - V.Low Or V.High - Extreme requires elaboration as to how in strengths Or weaknesses.

• Damage Output: Very High (Especially effective against the Bryn'adul)

After that, you should be golden.

 

[Aien Mueller]

I misunderstood Felix Aquila , sorry about that. Fixed.

(LOL see what I did there?! )

 

[Felix Aquila]

Matthew Locke

I did see what you did there!

PENDING APPROVAL

 

[Matthew Locke]

Aien Mueller

You are still one point overpowered, you don't have to change this, but do be mindful that your sub can be recalled if we see any abuse.

Spoiler: Balance Sheet

 

[Aien Mueller]

I'll change the weight to "Average"

 

[Aien Mueller]

There you go Matthew Locke

 

[Matthew Locke]

Thank you for your cooperation Aien Mueller

Approved

 

[Ravenfire]

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: FYB 40mm grenade
Link to Submission: FYB 40mm grenade
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Editing affiliation and minor updates

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: LPD53 Grenade Launcher
Link to Submission: LPD53 Grenade Launcher
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Editing affiliation and minor updates

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: RI-19 Assault Rifle
Link to Submission: RI-19 Assault Rifle
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Editing affiliation and minor updates

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Wrist Blaster
Link to Submission: Wrist Blaster
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Editing affiliation and minor updates

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: M-14 Sniper Rifle
Link to Submission: M-14 Sniper Rifle
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Editing affiliation and minor updates

 

[Aien Mueller]

Cleaned up ordinance
Edited Affiliation
Thanks a lot Ravenfire

 

[Listib Hibin]

APPROVED!
Aien Mueller