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Approved Starship MC140c Scythe-Class Main Battle Cruiser.

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Heavy Cruiser (Anaxes War College Classification.)
  • Role: Planetary Assault Ship, Pocket Fleet Carrier, Main Battle Cruiser, Taskforce Command Ship, Etc.
  • Length: 750 Metres.
  • Width: 485 Metres.
  • Height: 550 Metres (Including Central "Blade-Fin.")
  • Armament: High Rating.
    • [8] Octuple Heavy Turbolaser Turrets [Fire-linked, Fast-track Mountings, Barbette Shielding; Eight Turrets (Four Port and Four Starboard) - Four Dorsal Surface, and Four Ventral.]
    • [6] Quad Heavy Turbolaser Batteries [Eight Turrets per Battery; Fire-linked, Fast-track Mountings, Barbette Shielding.]
      • Two Batteries - Port and Starboard (Total of Four), With Half the Turrets on the Dorsal and Ventral Surfaces.
      • Two Batteries - Prow-mounted Blade-fin (Port and Starboard Sides), With Half the Turrets on the Dorsal and Ventral Surface.
    • [6] Dual Heavy Ion Cannon Batteries [Eight Turrets per Battery; Fire-linked, Fast-track Mountings, Barbette Shielding.]
      • Two Batteries - Port and Starboard (Total of Four), With Half the Turrets on the Dorsal and Ventral Surfaces.
      • Two Batteries - Prow-mounted Blade-fin (Port and Starboard Sides), With Half the Turrets on the Dorsal and Ventral Surface.
    • [12] Dual Turbolaser Batteries [Eight Turrets per Battery; Fire-linked, Fast-track Mountings, Barbette Shielding; Six Batteries - Port and Starboard, With Two Dorsal, Two Equatorial, Two Ventral.]
    • [12] Dual Ion Cannon Batteries [Eight Turrets per Battery; Fire-linked, Fast-track Mountings, Barbette Shielding; Six Batteries - Port and Starboard, With Two Dorsal, Two Equatorial, Two Ventral.]
    • [12] Dual Mass-Driver Cannon Batteries [Eight Turrets per Battery, Railgun Variant - Hypervelocity Capable; Fire-linked, Fast-track Mountings, Barbette Shielding; Six Batteries - Port and Starboard, With Two Dorsal, Two Equatorial, Two Ventral.]
    • [4] Flexible Warhead Launch Tubes [Prow-mounted, Fixed Forward; Variable Payload.]
      • 160 Variable Warhead Capacity.
    • [4] Turreted Flexible Warhead Launchers [Fire-linked, Fast-track Mountings, Barbette Shielding, Variable Payloads.]
      • 200 Variable Warhead Capacity.
    • [50] Automated Barbette Rotary Point Defense Cannons [Automated, Fast-Track Mountings, and Fire-Linked.]
    • [45] Automated Barbette Quad Point Defense Warhead Launchers [Fire-linked, Fast-track Mountings.]
    • [45] Nanomissile Blister Pods, with Seeking Anti-missile Interception Protocols. (Thirty Nanomissiles per Blister.)
    • [50] Automated Barbette Antimissile Octets [Automated, Fast-Track Mountings, and Fire-Linked.]
  • Defences: High Rating.
    • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Reinforced, and Ablative Armour and Hull Plating.
    • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Deflector Shielding (Ray, Particle and Concussion Barriers; Overlaid.)
    • Secondary [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Deflector Shielding (Ray, Particle and Concussion Barriers; Overlaid.)
    • Redundant, and Tertiary [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Deflector Shielding (Ray, Particle and Concussion Barriers; Overlaid.)
    • Reinforced [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Ionic Shielding.
    • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Emergency Thrusters (Chemical Propellent and Lateral Thrusters.)
    • Advanced [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Reactionary Pressor Beam Emitters - Maximum Coverage Layout.
    • Advanced [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] EWAR, Electronic Countermeasures, Chaff, Flare Launchers, Etc.
    • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Internal Defenses.
  • Hangar Space: Low Rating - Modular Deployment Racks: Capable of Taking Three Squadrons.
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: Two Squadrons of Starfighters.
    • Support Craft: One Squadron of Support Craft.
  • Maneuverability Rating: 55 DPF - Average Rating - Integrated Lateral Thrusters.
  • Speed Rating: Average Rating.
  • MGLT: 75 MGLT
  • Maximum Atmospheric Speed: 950 Km/H
  • Primary Hyperdrive Rating: Class 1.0
  • Secondary Hyperdrive Rating: Class 8.0
  • Engine Unit(s): Cruiser - Class Ion Engines - Six Drive Units, with Integrated Repulsorlift Generator(s.)
  • Secondary Propulsion Method: Integrated Repulsorlift Engines.
  • Primary Power Plant: Cruiser - Class Hypermatter Reactor.
  • Secondary Power Plant(s):
    • Localized Compact Fusion Reactors.
    • Solar Ionization Conversion Module(s) with Retractable Agrinium Collection Arrays.
  • Passengers:
    • Three Hundred Soldiers - Shipboard Security Complement
    • One Thousand Soldiers - One Planetary Assault Brigade.
  • Crew Complement (Optimal): Two Hundred and Fifty Officers and Enlisted Personnel, and Integrated Droid Brains.
  • Crew Complement (Skeletal): Seventy-Five Officers and Enlisted Personnel, and Integrated Droid Brains.
  • Escape Craft: One Hundred Escape Pods and Fifty-Two Ejectable Lifeboats
  • Cargo Capacity: 20,000 Metric Tonnes
  • Consumables: One Galactic Standard Year.
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Sensor Systems and Targeting Systems.
  • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Avionics Package.
  • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Navigation System.
    • Dedicated Precision MicroJump Computer.
  • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Life Support System.
    • (Automated Barrack Deck(s,) Integrated Training Centres, Mess Halls, Meditation Chambers, Recreational Decks, Etc.)
    • Trans-binary Deflector [Anti-Cosmic Radiation,] and Rad-Dampening Shields.
  • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Damage and Hazard Control Systems.
  • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Tractor and Pressor Beam Emitters.
  • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Anti-Ion Emission Tracker (Anti-Hyperspace Tracking.)
  • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Communication Systems, with Encrypted Military Keys.
  • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Shift and Relativistic Shielding.
  • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Magnetogravitic Shielding (Internal [Cargo Bays] and External [Concussion Shield Reinforcement: Particulate Debris.])
  • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Anti-Concussion Force Fields.
  • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Thermal and Atmospheric-Friction Shielding.
  • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Force Cylinder Transit Conduits.
  • Standard [Cruiser-Class, Military-Grade] Animated Metal Sealant, with Automated Repair Drones.
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
Strengths
  • Highly Automated, with Animated Metal Sealant, Automated Repair Drones, and Minor Regenerative Properties.
  • Reinforced Defensive Capabilities on External Emplacements.
  • Advanced Countermeasure Suite, with Sensor / Energy Signature Baffling System(s) - Capable of "Disguising" the Scythe as Smaller or Larger Vessels.
  • "Cross of Fire" - Blistered, Centralized and Tiered Battery Configuration; Can Focus a Majority of its Firepower Forward, or Half to Port / Starboard Targets.
Weaknesses
  • Heavy Automation and Networked Systems - Significantly Reduced Combat Efficacy if Disabled.
  • Limited EMP and Ion Resistance; Proximity and Device Potency Dependent.
  • Limited Firing Arc's - Aft Section; Engine Block (Minimal Capital-Grade Weapons.)
  • Turreted Warhead Launchers; Direct Connection to Internal Payload(s) - Possible Chain Detonations.
  • Exposed Observation Blister, and Secondary / Auxiliary Hangar - Central Fin (Dorsal and Ventral Locations, Respectively.)
  • Exposed Engine Modules (Aft-Section) with an Armoured Dividing Fin.
  • Lateral Thrusters - Reaction and Deployment Time Requirements; Pre-Engagement Deployment Recommendations.
  • Visual Deception - Sensor and Energy Signature Baffling Systems do not work within Visual Range.
DESCRIPTION
The Legacy of the MC140 Scythe-Class Main Battle Cruiser was one that stretched throughout the centuries, and even survived the Four Hundred Years of Darkness. However, as the recent spread of Imperialism took the Galaxy by storm, the Stars soon forgot about the former symbol of freedom and prosperity. The glorious Mon Calamari-influenced design was soon replaced by the hard, angular wedge of Imperial Star Destroyers. With the demise of the Mon Calamari homeworld and their people being scattered to the celestial wind, it was likely that the Scythe would never return. That the warship’s legacy would truly be forgotten with no hope of revivification.

However, there was a glimmer of hope. When the populace of Mon Calamari took to the stars, they took with them the secrets of their craft. Amongst those many secrets were the schematics for the venerable MC140, and it’s various offspring. When news of their tragedy came to light, the Republic Engineering Corporation sought to give the errant people of Dac a chance to rebuild, and for some - an opportunity for vengeance. From this moment of fortune, the Free Dac Engineering Corps was established, and was bequeathed a selection of Deep Space installations from where they could work in relative safety and seclusion to restore their collective pride. From this endeavour, the MC140 found itself reborn as the MC140c - the newest iteration of the Scythe-Class Cruiser.

On the surface, the MC140c was little different from its predecessor. The overall structure was larger than the original version, but that was a design choice meant to house more advanced systems that couldn’t be miniaturized, and add additional batteries in select locations to increase the warship’s versatility in combat. The once famed Cross of Fire was unfeasible in the modern era, especially when attacks could come from any angle and outpace their variable methods of re-orientation. To allay those dissenting concerns, the Mon Calamari introduced a tiered methodology to their armament blisters, which combined with their measured disposition of overlapping fields of fire, made the Scythe a capable warship when combating foes from almost every angle.

From there, the advancements to the venerable MC140 design were wrought within the bulbous armoured husk and it’s myriad connecting corridors. Many of the systems that were integrated into the Warship’s design were networked by a collection of slaved droid brains, and various technological means - allowing the vessel to operate with a significantly reduced Organic Crew complement. Terminals that were once analog, found themselves advanced beyond compare, as their surfaces became holographic projections that were manipulated by variable operators throughout the entirety of the ship. With this new advancement, it made things difficult for unauthorized personnel to access the ship’s ships - meaning that if it were to be captured or salvaged, it’d be nothing more than an overpriced heap of scrap.

Adding in the comprehensive security measures, and internal and external countermeasures, the MC140c would easily fall prey to unauthorized commands - be they from hostile slicers or mechu-deru specialists. The latter would find themselves overwhelmed by the amount of feedback they’d receive whilst trying to force their will onto the Warship. Due to the linked network of Droid Brains, and the Shipboard AI - there would be voices and the collective will of thousands of digital minds competing against a lonely candle, flickering in the shadows. Despite the vast capabilities of the warship to fend off the myriad method of hostile electronic warfare, there existed the possibility that these measures would be defeated - and so a host of redundancies would be required in order to keep the warship space-worthy. There was even the chance that the dedicated shipboard AI was capable of operating the ship, should the Organic crew be incapaciated, or killed - although this meant the combat efficacy would be significantly reduced.

There was an interesting addition to the MC140c that some of the design technicians were pleased to include. It was a system that worked towards fooling traditional sensors, making the enemy believe that the ship was bigger, or smaller than it actually was. Should their deception work, which meant that the vessel was outside of the visual engagement range, the enemy’s firing solutions would be targeting empty space - when in reality, the armoured portions of the Scythe would be physically elsewhere. This would give the Warship an incredible boon in combat at longer distances, where the enemy would be wastefully consigning munitions to the void - whilst the Scythe sought to deliver the killing blow.

With the advanced technologies woven into the heavily armoured form of the MC140c, the most notable addition - aside from the decentralized AI core and heavily automated systems, was the regenerating hull plating. In combining Animated Metal Sealant and Laminanium, the MC140c would be able to automatically repair itself in a crude manner that partially mimicked an organic sapient’s physiology. This process would be further enhanced by the deployment of automated repair drones would assist the warship with making battlefield repairs. It wouldn’t be a perfect process, but the sealed bulkheads and semi-repaired systems would be enough to keep the warship in the fight - or at least until the vessel made it back to friendly waters.

Thus, and in conclusion, the MC140c was not only a warship that embodied the ideals of it’s technical ancestor, but the new iteration of the Scythe-Class sought to forge a new legacy amongst the spatial battlefields of the modern era.
 
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Same issue on the other submission.

Affiliation:
Republic Engineering Corporation - Security Forces, The Galactic Alliance - Galactic Alliance Defence Force, Closed-Market.

Please hyperlink this to the proper section along with the Galactic Alliance.

Hangar Allocations:
  • Starfighters: Two Squadrons of Starfighters.
  • Support Craft: One Squadron of Support Craft.
  • Design Note: Additional Starfighter / Support Craft Squadrons can be taken at the Cost of Support Craft / Starfighter Carrying Capacity - So long as the Count remains below Three.

Much as I would like this, it is ONE or the OTHER. Please pick which squadron it goes to. Design Note does not exist here.


Finally, we have a .75 Hyperdrive which is technically VERY FAST. Give me a Weakness that can be talked about for that Hyperdrive such as long warm up, shutdown of systems, ect. and I will pass it on through.


Please let me know when you have done those changes.
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Listib Hibin Listib Hibin - Same as the other submission, as Republic Engineering is already hyperlinked under the manufacturer's field. I have, however, elected to go against my better judgment and hyperlink the Galactic Alliance for you.

When it comes to the Hangar Allocations, I am allowed to add items to the template so long as I don't take them away - so it may not exist on the template, but it exists here and has been done before on dozens of my own submissions. It's kind of the point for modular hangar racks. I have added, however, a bit of information that was missed - as a 750 metre cruiser requires a base rating of One support squadron.

As for the hyperdrive? They're very fast for a reason so they don't have a long "spool-up" time, as the 0.5 Class is capable of "warming up" in ninety seconds or less. The shutdown of systems is highly inappropriate to the design of this submission, and I won't be crippling the ship by adding that arbitrary weakness in. However, as you've shown me what kind of judge you are - I've added in a weakness regarding the hyperdrive.

Edit: Added the REC affiliation hyperlink.
 
I do appreciate arguments on basis and so forth. I have however due to your request on if the things on your Hanger Allocation is fine. Well I have had my discussion with John Locke, a Senior Factory Judge and with the information provided, this section:

Design Note:
Additional Starfighter / Support Craft Squadrons can be taken at the Cost of Support Craft / Starfighter Carrying Capacity - So long as the Count remains below Three and there is at least One Support Squadron to account for the Base Hangar Rating.

Is not allowed. This is to be removed and the proper hanger allocations be done right. I understand it was done previously but currently, this is no longer allowed.


Also for the Hyperdrive...yes, that qualifies as Very Fast and in honesty, it is above one rating.

Minor -1
Armament: High 1 (0)
Defenses: High 1 (1)
Hanger: Low -1 (0)
Manuverability: Average 0 (0)
Speed: Average 0 (0)
Hyperdrive .75 (Very Fast) 1 (1)

Reason why I mentioned a Weakness is because I liked how this was already balanced. This ship was made with a lot of love and unfortunately, going below .9 qualifies as Very Fast. Yes, the Hyperdrive chart is a pain and it is being worked on right now but this needs to be done. Those weaknesses were also just options, they were not meant to be honestly used unless you thought of something better.


Weakness:
Interdiction Fields - Despite its fast hyperdrive, the Scythe is still affected by the artificial gravity wells.

That however is not a qualifying significant weakness to use for your hyperdrive or actually, even a regular weakness. At least ninety percent of the ships I seen can still be affected by a gravity well and yes, I have discussed this with John Locke also who said the same thing. Please find a different one that is appropriate or start downgrading some ratings or simply just make it rating 1 which just makes it Average.


Let me know when you done this and you can mention me when you want to go further. I am not here to be a pain in the neck, I am just ensuring this is done right.
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