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Approved Species Marbrecretian

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Important Note / Disclaimer:
The world of Centerra, as presented in this setting, explores the concept of the Force. Within Centerra, the various races and micro cultures/religions use terms like interconnections and celestial energies to refer to the Force. These terms are interchangeable with 'The Force,' and their usage is intended to align with the cultural beliefs and identity of each group. It is important to understand that in Centerra, the Force is often perceived as magical or mystical, similar in thematic nature to the culture and region of the Ewoks. The terms employed in this context serve as a representation of the cultural portrayal and belief in the Force within Centerra.

The world of Centerra, within this setting, is deeply influenced by the Force, and Force anomalies occur frequently. These anomalies are manifestations of the planet's strong connection to 'cosmic energies' or Force Energies. The Stellar Convergence shapes the cultures and beliefs of Centerra, as it highlights the delicate balance between the Force and mortal existence. Please note that the portrayal of these Force-related anomalies is for imaginative purposes within this fictional world.

Their Ancestral afterlife is influenced by Force Ghosts.
Marbrecretians
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To colorize, enrich, flesh out, and diversify the Planet of Centerra.
  • Image Credit:
    - Bottom Giph Image-https://giphy.com/thesewnseed
  • Canon: N/A.
  • Permissions: N/A.
  • Links: N/A.
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Marbrecretian
  • Designation: Sentient
  • Origins: Centerra [Link to the Home World of Centerra]
  • Average Lifespan: 90 - 400 Years
  • Estimated Population: Planetary
  • Description: Tall imposing humanoid bipedal beings that stand on digitigrade legs marked with membranous wings, claws, and horns. Their skin may display patterns similar to that of sediment and rocks.
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Breathes: Air / Oxygen rich
  • Average Height of Adults: 9 ft /274.32 cm - 12 ft / 365.76 cm
  • Average Length of Adults: N/A.
  • Skin color: Any colors or combination of colors may be found though often thematically like that of stone. Marble, howlite, jade and other such textures should be good references.
  • Hair color: Any color
  • Distinctions:
    The Marbrecretians are towering humanoid beings with stone-like skin, standing over seven feet tall. They possess thick brows, slanted eyes, and horn-like protrusions on their foreheads. Their skin varies in color from dark blue to almost black, sometimes with a hint of green. They have heavily clawed hands and feet and membranous bat-like wings for regulating body temperature. Their tails are long and muscular, used for gliding rather than true flight.

    As a warrior race, Marbrecretians take pride in their physical strength. While males are typically more muscular, females can be equally strong but often focus on child-rearing instead.

  • Races: There are more or less three types, Muted Earth tones, Vibrant tones, and those who are mixed. There really isn't much distinction between them other than personal preferences for potential mates.
  • Force Sensitivity: Low
Strengths:
  • Ability to glide.
  • Superior Strength.
  • Exceptionally hard outer skin, claws teeth, and horns, Exceptionally dense bones.
Weaknesses:
  • Trouble swimming ( they sink like a rock).
  • Not actually able to truly fly.
  • They freeze up and enter a state of torpor when in exceptionally cold climates and become statues.
CULTURE
  • Diet: Omnivore

  • Communication: Spoken language: Marbrecretian

  • Technology level: [Starwars Tech Levels] Feudal

    The Marbrecretians thrive in the harsh desert of the Whispering Badlands, relying on feudal-level technology aligned with their culture. They revere war and value honor and self-reliance, choosing their own fighting styles and weapons. Their matriarchal and patriarchal society prioritizes education and loyalty, with a militaristic religion promising paradise for those who die in battle. Resilient and relentless, they embody strength.
    Their civilization operates under a feudal system, with a hierarchical structure led by the Kaiser and noble lords who control vast territories. Commoners work the land in exchange for protection and support, paying tribute to the nobility. For instance, Lord Roderick owns an estate with villagers working as farmers, providing labor and resources in exchange for security. Loyalty to the ruling class defines Marbrecretian society, with services and resources exchanged for protection.

  • Religion/Beliefs:
    The Marbrecretian Empire's culture revolves around war and confrontation, which they idolize and celebrate. They believe dying in battle leads to paradise with ancestors, a belief crucial in their harsh environment. Viewing life as a test of strength, they see the desert as a challenging trial. Surviving there proves one's capability to overcome any obstacle.

  • General behavior:
    Marbrecretians, akin to desert creatures, prioritize independence and self-reliance, with little concern for others' feelings. They value honor above all, displaying fierce pride and arrogance, believing in their superiority. Their strength, both physical and emotional, can make them appear cold or callous. Despite this, they hold unwavering loyalty to friends and allies, even if undeserving.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION


History:


In the early days, Marbrecretian tribes lived in isolation until they discovered a river flowing from the mountains, bringing prosperity. Initially, they fought over its bounty but united against the Desert Horde, becoming the strongest tribe and forming the Marbrecretian Empire.
They built the City of the Eos around the river's oasis, erecting the Temple of the Eos for sun worship, believing it would ensure victory in battle. Today, the Marbrecretian Empire reigns over the Whispering Badlands, with elected leaders chosen based on combat and skill feats.

Cultural Development:
The Whispering Badlands is home to tough and resourceful nomadic tribes, surviving in a harsh, dry desert environment without relying on technology. Marbrecretians see life as a struggle, living by their wits and physical strength, choosing weapons and fighting styles that suit them.

Their society operates as a meritocracy, rewarding prowess in battle with power and authority. Marbrecretian children are raised communally, taught basic survival skills, and the importance of hard work. Education is highly valued, with schools teaching various subjects.

Marbrecretians marry young and usually stay together for life in a matriarchal and patriarchal society, with women holding social power. Men are expected to be warriors, providers, and protectors, with honor being paramount. They are fiercely loyal to their Kaiser, elected by peers.

Religion:
The Marbrecretians' religion is militaristic, centered on their belief in being created by gods. They see themselves as superior and live by the sword, viewing life as a constant struggle for survival. In their belief system, dying honorably in battle is preferable to perishing in the desert. They envision an afterlife where spirits meet ancestors in the Hall of Ancestors, facing judgment that determines whether they join their ancestors in paradise or wander the desert forever.



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Matthew of Valendale Matthew of Valendale

Overall, this submission is fairly solid. Just a few similar issues.

1.) Image Credit - You have some stones/rocks listed under the description but there is no Image Credit for these. I'm able to find them on Google so they weren't AI created. That only counts as a credit if you actually used AI to make it. You have to source everything else. [Image Source Help]

2.) Please link the Planet somewhere in the submission. You can put it in the "Links" section.

3.) Technology Level: What does "Feudal" mean in terms of Star Wars? That's an Earth term. We don't know what you're referring to.

4.) Physical Traits: This section should actually be at the top under "Distinctions".

Tag me when you're ready to look again.
 
1.) Image Credit - You have some stones/rocks listed under the description but there is no Image Credit for these. I'm able to find them on Google so they weren't AI created. That only counts as a credit if you actually used AI to make it. You have to source everything else. [Image Source Help]
Added Credits
2.) Please link the Planet somewhere in the submission. You can put it in the "Links" section.
Added Links
3.) Technology Level: What does "Feudal" mean in terms of Star Wars? That's an Earth term. We don't know what you're referring to.
Added info
4.) Physical Traits: This section should actually be at the top under "Distinctions".
Moved these
-Added disclaimer to the top here too
 
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