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Approved Starship Liberator Class Star Defender

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification:
    • Anaxes War College: Battlecruiser
    • Role: Star Defender
  • Length: 2,500 Meters
  • Width: 850 Meters
  • Height: 450 Meters
  • Armament: Very High
    • [90] Solar Ionization Cannons
    • [4] Heavy Composite Beam Turbolaser Cannons
    • [4] Heavy Composite Beam Ion Cannons
    • [45] Heavy Long Range Megamaser Cannons
    • [45] Heavy Long Range Turbolaser Cannons
    • [50] Turbolaser Cannons
    • [50] Megamaser Cannons
    • [50] Ion Cannons
    • [140] Broadside Incinerator Class Plasma Railguns
    • [90] Broadside Solar Ionization Cannons
    • [150] Broadside Quad Turbolaser Cannons
    • [120] Modular Missile Launchers
    • [120] Point Defense Cannons
  • Defenses: Extreme
    • Several Mon Calamari Redundant Shield Generators
    • Molecular Shields (Concussion, Particle, Thermal, and Energy Shields, Overlaid)
    • Starship Type Ablative Armor (Battlecruiser Class, Military Grade)
    • Internal Defense (Autoblasters, Ray Shields, Blastdoors, etc)
  • Hangar Space: High
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: 14 Squadrons
    • Support Craft: 4 Squadrons
  • Maneuverability Rating: Very Low
  • Speed Rating: Very Low
  • Hyperdrive: Yes
  • Hyperdrive Class: 1.0
STANDARD FEATURES

  • "Ten Forward" Drinking Bar and Officers Club
  • Auxiliary Mon Calamari Shield Generators
  • Caf Shoppe
  • Several Cargo Bays and Munition Depots
  • Captains Office
  • Etc.
ADVANCED SYSTEMS

  • Molecular Furnace
    • Equpiied with various Prototypers, Garment-Fabricators, Synthesizers, Duplicators, etc)
  • Holographic Conflict Environmental Projecter
    • Originally designed to be a real-time display of an unfolding battle, the Holographic Conflict Environmental Projector (HCEP) became something more when Corellia added it's Virtual Intelligence to the warships mainframe, allowing for the HCEP to decipher information quicker and even suggest tactics to the warships commander, as most VI's do.
  • REC-DC-01 Servitor Pattern Artificial Intelligence (Ship Operations)
STRENGTHS
  • Heavy Hitter - The Liberator Type Star Defender is a very powerful war machine, equipped with top of the line deadly weaponry
  • Energy Efficenr Power House - The Liberator Class Star Defender utilities both a Hypermatter Anhilation Reactor and Solar Energy Panels allowing for the ship to be environmentally friendly and energy efficient at the same time.
WEAKNESSES
  • Exposed Secondary Hangee
  • Slow and Steady
DESCRIPTION

In a galaxy of war and pain, there stands a thin line between preservation and destruction. Day by day, as mighty warships hang in orbit of world's spread throughout the Outer Rim, Mid Rim and Unknown Regions, the worlds of the Core Region have declared never again, as they rebuild from decades of devastation, crippling occupation and genocide.

Worlds like Courscant, Kuat, and Aargau among many more would become known as economic powerhouses within the new Galactic Alliance while others such as Free Dac, Duro and Corellia would become known for thier engineering prowess and unique cultures.

However, it was unprecedented when all of these worlds came together and combined thier knowledge and abilities to begin production of multiple new classes of warships as a symbol that the Core would not fall under the control of an oppressive regime again.

It was thier very first project however, that would become a legend within Alliance territory, a warship built and designed from the scraps of Sith-Imperial war machines known originally as the Democracy Class Star Battlecruiser.

The Imperial scraps left at worlds like Corellia and Aargau were covered in advanced weaponry and technologies, many of which have been lost to history. By combining that technology with Kuati and Corellian engineering, Mon Calamari Defense Systems, Courscanti financing, and unique Duros design methods, the Democracy, the very first Liberator Class Star Defender, which would soon became one of the most advanced warships in service to the Alliance Navy.

It wasn't until a test of the Democracy during an anti-Imperial Campaign in the Deep Core, aimed at eliminating Sith-Imperial Remenats like the Frozen Hand, did the Democracy truly earn the title, Liberator. By utilizing its advanced systems, weapons and sensors, the Democracy broke through an Imperial Blockade over Cato Neimodia, lending a hand to Silver Jedi Forces within the area. Transporting Jedi, Antarian Rangers and Alliance troopers alike, the Neimodians of the planet called the ship the "Great Liberator" and the name stuck.

Now, with limited production within the Galactic Alliance, the Liberator Class Star Defender serves both on the front lines, and the defensive lines spreading the ideals of the Galactic Alliance wherever they go.
 
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Zahara Myneto Zahara Myneto , this looks reasonable and well balanced. I think there are a few areas though where some clarification might be helpful though.
STANDARD SYSTEMS

Ten Forward

I think you may have forgotten to finish this part.


STRENGTHS
  • Heavy Hitter - The Democracy Type Star Battlecruiser is a very powerful war machine, equipped with top of the line deadly weaponry
  • HIMS - The H
  • Energy Efficenr Power House -

Same thing here.

I see that in several places, you refer to this as the "Democracy-class", but most of the rest of the sub refers to it as the "Liberator-class". I think it would be less confusing if the ship was only referred to by one name.
 
Zahara Myneto Zahara Myneto , just going over this again realized we have a few minor things to sort out because this is a limited production ship.



Production: Limited

From the starship template:

Limited
(Only one small group of characters. IE: A Single Minor Faction, Company, or Group within a faction.),
Minor
(Large groups of characters. (IE: A Single Major Faction, a few companies, or groups.),

A Limited production, the affiliation should be a little bit more narrow than "The Galactic Alliance" (a single major faction). I'm not sure what your intent for this, but if you could use something like "Admiral Myneto's forces" if your intent is just for your character to use.

The other thing is that right now, HIMS devices are currently limited to semi-unique starships. You can either take this device of this starship or change production to "Semi-unique".
 
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