Approved Tech Godawan Est Machina

[Dunames Lopez]

Intent: To provide the galaxy with a comedy movie
Development Thread: N/A
Manufacturer: Taking Off on a Star Tour
Model: Godawan Est Machina holoflick
Affiliation: Open Market
Modularity: No
Production: Mass-Produced.
Material: Standard software (and electronic components if purchased on its own data disc)

Strengths:

• Can be viewed on any holovid

Weaknesses:

• Useless in combat - should be used strictly as entertainment

Description: Godawan Est Machina's basic premise is that four godawans, each studying under a different master, all turn out to be troublesome to teach due to them being smarter than most known Force-users, including their own Masters. Nevertheless they all seem to be on the cusp of knighthood. Dismayed by this state of affairs, their respective masters decide to host a three-fold tournament where their respective godawans would compete against each other. The first stage is more intellectual in nature, whereas the second part is about their command of the Force and the last one is about a talent show. Due to the turmoil surrounding funding issues, Godawan Est Machina was delayed for five years, released as the Rogue Sith stood poised to attack the galaxy with Omega at their helm.

Primary Source: N/A

 

[Zef Halo]

RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review
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Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
Pending initial review
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WITH DEV THREADS
Pending Initial review
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SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[Zef Halo]

[member="Dunames Lopez"]


Passing judgement to the big boss - [member="Spencer Varanin"]

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Dunames Lopez"]

So reading this it seems a bit like you're trying to call someone out or something, especially with the term godowan... Is this a serious submission? If it is to be honest its just a movie you don't need a submission. If its a joke please don't waste the time of the judges and myself.


So either way, if this is a joke its being denied and if its just what it seems to be as just a film...you don't need a submission if there is nothing special about it.

 

[Dunames Lopez]

[member="Spencer Varanin"] Then why could the other TOoaST subs about holovids (DF1, DF2, Broken Bones and Breadsticks, The Gospel and Testaments of Ardgal Raxis) stand? DF1 has no dev thread either...

ICly it is just a movie: I made no implicit reference to any particular padawan-master combo since Dunames would have no IC reason to do so: as mentioned in the Star Tours Guide to Force Specialties sub, Star Tours (and its subsidiary, TOoaST) is a purely NFU company, with the right to employ any FU actor for the shooting of holomovies.

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Dunames Lopez"]

Because this particular submission seemed to raise a few eyebrows, honestly though the others shouldn't have been they're just films from that. Other than that, since you've stated its a serious submission then I guess here's nothing really needing to be done. Just didn't read like a serious submission. Oh well.

 

[Allyson Locke]

Approved.