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Approved Vehicle GARD-14 Raven Droid

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Rara Gowisi

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Rara Gowisi
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a probe droid to assist in GADF operations
  • Image Source:Here
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: Probe Droid
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Si Tech
  • Affiliation: Galactic Alliance
  • Market Status: Closed-Market
  • Model: Galactic Alliance Recon Droid Model 14 "Raven"
  • Production: Minor
  • Modularity: N/A
  • Material: Reinforced Durasteel, Reinforced Duraplast, Vardium Steel, droid components
TECHNICAL INFORMATION
  • Classification: UAV
  • Role: Reconnisance
  • Size: Very Small
    • 15cm x 15cm undeployed
    • 43cm x 32 cm deployed
  • Weight: Extremely Light
  • Armaments: High
  • Defenses: None
  • Maneuverability Rating: Extreme
  • Speed Rating: High
  • Propulsion: Repulsorlift, Twin Miniaturized Ion Engines
  • Minimum Crew: 0
  • Optimal Crew: 0
  • Passenger Capacity: 0
  • Cargo Capacity: None
  • Misc. Equipment:
    • IR Motion Sensor and Scanner
    • Droid Brain
    • Pathfinding Programming
    • Encrypted Communication Array
    • 3D LIDAR scanners
    • High Zoom Capable Camera with Thermal and Night Vision
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Forward Scout: The Raven is designed to act as a forward set of eyes for the GADF, allowing anyone from the standard infantry tankers and walker commanders to see beyond the horizon. The Range of the Raven is 10 miles from it's launch point, and is capable of acting as eyes in the sky for anyone using it.
  • Deployable: The Raven has a set of collapsible wings, allowing it to the stored in launch tubes and fired off from a mortar if needed.
STRENGTHS
  • Eyes of Odin: Between it's motion scanners, camera, and LIDAR, the Raven acts as an eye for the GADF long before the enemy engages them.
  • Peck: Built with a blaster cannon, the Raven does have a bit of bite to it.
  • Backpack Capable: The Raven is designed to be carried by a dedicated operator, and yet is surprisingly light. Capable of being carried within a standard issue pack, the Raven makes it so that it's operator isn't weighed down by his MOS.
WEAKNESSES
  • Thin Feathers: The Ravens are designed to be replaceable, and easy to deploy, not tank hits.
  • Not a Replacement: The Raven is not a soldier. It is a scout. Do not attempt to make this thing fight an army.
  • Shocking: The Raven, much like any other droid, is fully capable of being fried, or ripped apart. Mecha-Deru is the bane of any weapon's platform, as is any form of Force Lightning.
DESCRIPTION
Designed as a new way for the GADF to keep eyes in the sky, the Raven acts as a new standard for UAV droid capability, and acts as a necessary asset to the GADF. Able to scan up to a mile ahead of itself, the Raven can help coordinate attacks, and be deployed by men on the ground, or from a vehicle mortar tube, allowing it to be launched from any GADF position.
 
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Rara Gowisi Rara Gowisi there is also a third template in there as ranged and droids don't have speed and maneuverability. Nor do either template have an armament rating. Which is throwing everything off aand why generally you would just include and balance the technical specifications sections of each template rather then junble them all together in a way that can't be plugged into the spreadsheet. If I go by what I have now it would be 4 over
 

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Rara Gowisi Rara Gowisi

I would recommend doing as I said

Vehicle
John Locke said:
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: (Blaster, Disruptor, Ion/EMP, Slugthower, Rail/Coil/Gauss, Etc.)
  • Size: (Please choose a size between Extremely Large, Very Large, Large, Average, Small, Very Small, Extremely Small.)
  • Weight: (Please choose a weight between Extremely Heavy, Very Heavy, Heavy , Average, Light, Very Light, Extremely Light.)
  • Ammunition Type: (List the ammunition type: Power cell, gas canister, slugs, etc.)
  • Ammunition Capacity: (List the ammunition capacity. The more powerful and lighter the weapon, the lower the magazine capacity is likely to be. Please choose a size between Extremely Small, Very Small, Small, Average, Large, Very Large and Extremely Large. You may also include a number with the Rating)
  • Effective Range: (Effective range in relation to the weapon type. Remember that a carbine will have a longer range than a pistol, an assault rifle longer range than a carbine, and a sniper rifle longer than an assault rifle. Choose from None, Point Blank, Personal, Average, Long Range, Battlefield, and Extreme. Battlefield and Extreme will require justification in strengths and weaknesses.)
  • Rate of Fire: (How quickly the weapon fires. Choose from None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, and Extremely High. Very High and Extreme will require justification in the strengths and weaknesses.)
  • Damage Output: (How powerful the weapon is, in relation to its class. Choose from None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, and Extreme. Very High and Extreme will require justification in strengths and weaknesses.)
  • Recoil: (How much recoil does the weapon have? Generally speaking, the lighter the weapon and the more damage output it has, the more recoil it will have. Also, certain types of weapons will not have recoil. Choose from Extreme, Very High, High, Average, Low, Very Low, and None.)
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Ranged
John Locke said:
TECHNICAL INFORMATION
  • Classification: (First Degree, Second Degree, Third Degree, Fourth Degree, or Fifth Degree)
  • Weight: (Please choose a weight between Extremely Heavy, Very Heavy, Heavy, Average, Light, Very Light, Extremely Light)
  • Height: (Please choose a weight between Extremely Small, Very Small, Small, Average, Large, Very Large and Extremely Large.)
  • Movement: (Repulsorlift, Wheels, Tracks, Bipedal, Quadrupedal)
  • Armaments: (What weapons does the droid possess, if any?)
  • Misc. Equipment: (Sensors, scanners, shields, etc.)
  • Resistances (Optional): This is suggested for Battle Droids and other Droids intended to participate heavily in direct combat. (For each category choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme. Ratings of High, Very High, and Extreme will need to be added as strengths with elaboration.) Resistance Ratings Extreme will require the submission to be Unique.
    • Energy (And other Blaster type weapons): How much protection does the armor provide against this type of damage?
    • Kinetic: How much protection does the armor provide against this type of damage?
    • Lightsabers: How much protection does the armor provide against this type of damage?
    • Other: How much protection does the armor provide against this type of damage? (Examples: Sonic, EMP/ION, Elemental. You must disclose each specific type that applies to this submission with its own rating.)
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Droid
John Locke said:
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: (What is the classification of vehicle? e.g. Airspeeder, Landspeeder, Swoop Bike, Speederbike, Personal Walker, Heavy Walker, Tank, Submersible)
  • Role: (What role does this vehicle fulfill? e.g. Assault Tank, Reconnaissance, Troop Transport, Personal Transport, Anti-aircraft, Artillery, Cargo Transport, Minesweeper, Armoured Personnel Carrier, Infantry Fighting Vehicle, Gunship)
  • Size: (Please choose a size between Extremely Small, Very Small, Small, Average, Large, Very Large and Extremely Large.)
  • Weight: (Please choose a weight between Extremely Heavy, Very Heavy, Heavy, Average, Light and Very Light, Extremely Light.)
  • Armaments: (What weapons are mounted on the vehicle? List them in full and provide a rating relative to the scale of vehicle from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High and Extreme. [Links: Vehicle Weaponry, Vehicle Launchers, Approved Technology])
  • Defenses: (What kind of defensive systems does the vehicle have? Give a rating for how well it protects the crew from. Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High and Extreme. [Links: Vehicle Armor, Approved Technology])
  • Maneuverability Rating: (How agile is your vehicle? Can it take tight turns? This is relative to the size of the vehicle. For your type of vehicle how maneuverable is it? Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High and Extreme.)
  • Speed Rating: (Give the top speed of the vehicle relative to its size category. Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High and Extreme.)
  • Propulsion: (Repulsorlift, Wheels, Tracks, Bipedal, Quadrupedal)
  • Minimum Crew: (Lowest amount of people required to operate the vehicle)
  • Optimal Crew: (The ideal amount of people to operate the vehicle)
  • Passenger Capacity: (How many non-crew individuals can the vehicle hold, if any?)
  • Cargo Capacity: (Please choose a size between None, Very Small, Small, Average, Large, Very Large and Extreme.)
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Using the technical specifications from all three as others who have done it. Cherry picking throws off your numbers. Just make sure each sections is balanced with the production.
 

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Rara Gowisi said:
FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: GATE Tiger
Link to Submission: GATE Tiger
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Submitted it with one of the strengths half written, and that's gonna eat at my brain if I don't fix it.

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: GAMR Spot
Link to Submission: GAMR Spot
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Fix Image

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: GALMG Beak
Link to Submission: GALMG-4 Beak Blaster Cannon
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Fix Image

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: GARD Raven
Link to Submission: GARD-14 Raven
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Fixing Image. Slight Updates

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Power Paw
Link to Submission: Power Paw
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Fixing Image, and Updates
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