[member="Keira Ticon"]
You probably know my opinion on Keira already, but I'll post it here anyway
Not only her concept alone is fairly unique and interesting - you have executed the idea behind her very well, so congrats! Not many manage to do both. I know that all too well.
First off, I really love that Keira has a personality instead of being a walking suit of Mando armour (lol). You don't write a Mandalorian - you write Keira Ticon, who happens to be a Mandalorian. She displays all sorts of emotions, coming across as a living person without being artificially "humanized" every once in a while. I admit I started following her threads only after the Omega event, but from what I have seen, her development is pretty organic, fluid, without her writer shoehorning her into completely artificial BS. There's a story of its own behind her personality and how she acts as well. Which is great! She is influenced by things happening around her and it molds her as a character. She has her own head and you write her
consistently, without forcing her into stuff, greatly helping Keira in being a believable character. Sure, Keira's incredibly flawed as a person, yet you managed to portray it in a believable way many can relate to.
Yeah, I can definitely buy what you're selling.
Well, and her duel with Veles in the Omega thread showed her as someone who's badass through experience and wit instead of relying solely on gadgets and beskar
She's a tough queen, but not invulnerable. I love that.
