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Drexel & Axel

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Name: Drexel Amalon
Loyalties: Maxis
Role: A ghost that follows Maxis. He can provide tactical advantages due to his knowledge of battle on the field. He is also Maxis' old boss/Friend
Development Threads: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/69119-a-new-home-past-thread/
Age: Forty-three Galactic Standard Years at death
Species: Thrysian
Force Sensitivity: None. He is a ghost.
Appearance: Many scars over his entire body, the only ones that Maxis can see are the ones on his face. Drex also is blind in his right eye due to shrapnel hitting his eye in a warzone a long time ago. Having rather darker skin to match with other Thrysians, he is clean shaven and bald.
Personality: Tough, yet careful. Stern, yet understanding. A man that can understand people make mistakes, act stupid, or are simply different than him. He is a tactical thinker. One that will make plans and stick to them. Even more so when he makes promises. He is a man of his word. Drex is also very trusting of those who he works with.
Weapon of Choice: Military Blaster rifles, Blaster pistol *can't really use them as he is a ghost.*
Wealth: None needed.
Combat Function: Provides tactical knowledge to Maxis. Teaches him to use weapons better. Otherwise, nothing.
Skills: When alive, Drex was a very strong man. He was a two hit man. His use of rifles, and shotguns are over the top good. He could also use other small arms, however, prefered rifles, and scatterblasters. Drex was also very good at hand to hand combat. Very much a brawler and throwing fists to beat the enemy into submission.
Notable Possessions: Durasteel armor, Military grade blaster rifle, scatterblaster, a hold out blaster pistol. *As a ghost he cant use them, and so he appears to Max with these items on.*
Other Notes: Drex is Maxis dead boss. He was killed by a bounty hunter who worked for a Hutt that double crossed the trio of Maxis, himself, and Axel.

Intent: To help create a backstory for a new character, and possibly bring back into his life once more. As well as to create a secondary story for Maxis that will be done over a long period of time.


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Name: Axel Toqiquin
Loyalties: Maxis
Role: A ghost that follows Maxis. Axel can provide tactical knowledge, as well as insight on what the force, and force users are.
Development Threads: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/69119-a-new-home-past-thread/
Age: twenty-three galactic standard years at death.
Species: Epicanthix
Force Sensitivity: None. He is a ghost. In life, he was force sensitive.
Appearance: Black hair, Tall, and rather lean, Axel is one of the few (it seems) of the Epicanthix who are not on the dark side of the force. However using emotions to fuel him was not out of the question. Anger, hate, fear, happiness, whatever he could use to fuel his force powers, he would. A Grey Jedi, or a Rogue Force user that was more focused upon getting Credits and supplies for his fellow members, rather than studies to become stronger in the force.
Personality: Friendly, Trusting, and a friend to most, Axel was a good man over all. Did things because they were right, or simply out of kindness. However, he did have a different side to him. Vengeful and powerful. One not to be easily tested simply by prodding him and his past. All Max knows of Axel's past was that his parents were killed by one particular man, and that he had never found him. Axel keeps his cards close to his chest, and when trusting, will reveal them to a rare few who can truly understand the man's pain.
Weapon of Choice: Military rifles, Sniper rifle, and Knight level force powers. *can't really use them as he is a ghost.*
Wealth: None needed.
Combat Function: Provide tactical solutions against force users, as well as can be his cheering section in a fight. When alive, he was a rather strong user of telekinesis. Other wise, he was apprentice level in Animal friendship, Sensing, and mind trick.
Skills: Telekinesis, Animal Friendship, Sensory Force, Mind Trick, Blaster rifles, Sniper rifles,
Notable Possessions: Durasteel armor, Military grade blaster rifle, Sniper rifle, and the force.
Other Notes: Axel was like an older brother to Maxis. Very close and this causes Max to be touchy about any affiliation with Axel.

Intent: To help create a backstory for a new character, and possibly bring back into his life once more. As well as to create a secondary story for Maxis that will be done over a long period of time.
 
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Hi, I'll be working with you on this one. :)

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Windstrider said:
Intent: To help create a backstory for a new character, and possibly bring back into his life once more. As well as to create a secondary story for Maxis that will be done over a long period of time.
When you say “bring back into his life”, do you mean bring him back into your character’s life in the form of a Force ghost? Or do you mean literally, bring him back to life? Please clarify.

Drexel:

Windstrider said:
Notable Possessions: Durasteel armor, Military grade blaster rifle, scatterblaster, a hold out blaster pistol.
He would not possess these items now, right? Or do you mean to suggest he would appear with them? If the former is true, and these are not current possessions, I feel this would be more appropriate to include in the character’s history, unless you add a note stating that these are his former possessions. This applies to Axel as well.

Windstrider said:
Other Notes: Drex is Maxis dead boss. He was killed by a bounty hunter who worked for a Hutt that double crossed the trio of Maxis, himself, and Axel.
I would like to see you expand on this, to give the NPC a little more depth. Could you elaborate on how he became a Force ghost? This usually seems to occur with either powerful Force users, or to individuals who received some form of training to allow them to remain in this world as a ghost. If you could also elaborate on the relationship between Maxis and Drexel, to explain why he would linger and offer him guidance, that would be great.

Axel:
It looks like you left out “Skills:” on this one. Please include the full template.

Windstrider said:
Force Sensitivity: None. He is a ghost. In life, he was force sensitive.
Just to clarify, by this you mean that he is not able to access his Force powers or use them to interact with the world around him in any way, correct? Could you include his Force rank in brackets? Example “Force Sensitive (apprentice/knight/master). For the record, if he’s listed as knight or higher, that would require a dev thread.

Windstrider said:
Combat Function: Provide tactical solutions against force users, as well as can be his cheering section in a fight. When alive, he was a rather strong user of telekinesis. Other wise, he was apprentice level in Animal friendship, Sensing, and mind trick.
The impression I get from you is that none of his Force powers would be available to him now. Could you add a line to clarify this here? If that is not the case, please include the limitations of his abilitiies in his current form.

Windstrider said:
Other Notes: Axel was like an older brother to Maxis. Very close and this causes Max to be touchy about any affiliation with Axel.
I would like to see you expand on this. What was his role in life before he died? How did Axel and Maxis become like brothers? How did he become a Force ghost?

Thanks.
 
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That's fine. Until then, this submission will be archived. When you have finished your dev and are ready for final judgement, please PM either [member="Valiens Nantaris"] or [member="Lorelei Darke"] to have it restored.

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