Darth Ferox Character Profile

[Darth Ferus]

This is really the first time I've ever decided to really do a character profile, and as such I'm looking for some feedback on what people think of it! And suggestions of course.

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/99828-darth-ferox-wip/

Hit me up!

 

[Dar'rak]

*Smacks [member="Darth Ferox"] across the face*

What not what you meant? Ok, ok, just thought I'd try.

Anyway, from what you have written I don't see any problems concept wise. For Dar'rak in our duel that may be a different story. As my description of his abilities are a bit vague but list his proficiency with the multiple lightsaber forms at a young age while in the academy. Thus resulting in his saber-staff training. You however have more detail within your detail. I am going to love reading the rest of the profile when it is finished and realize I really need to keep up with mine. I'm in several threads since my return and not a one is listed on my profile yet...

 

[Darth Ferus]

[member="Dar'rak"]

I wouldn't worry about that thread list.

Well, once you reach master. Unless you do want to keep track.



I've hundreds of threads that I simply haven't kept track of and am now missing. Heh. I should probably start saving my threads.

 

[Darth Ferus]

[member="Dar'rak"]

I wouldn't worry about that thread list.

Well, once you reach master. Unless you do want to keep track.



I've hundreds of threads that I simply haven't kept track of and am now missing. Heh. I should probably start saving my threads.

 

[Sur'tra Sunblade]

I've hundreds of threads that I simply haven't kept track of and am now missing. Heh. I should probably start saving my threads.

Go to your profile. Go to find content. Change type to topics to find topics you made. Change to posts to find posts you made.

 

[Darth Carnifex]

Keeping track of your threads is for the birds.

Cool kids have too many to reasonably keep track of.

 

[Darth Ferus]

[member="Darth Carnifex"]

Does this mean I'm finally cool?

 

[Teynara Jeralyr]

 

[Darth Ophidia]

I used to obsessively keep track of my threads. That just isn't happening anymore. If you're sure this is the character you want to play, then you don't need a complete thread tracker post master. Especially when you have more than 8000 posts.

As for the character sheet, it's quite alright. It's tidy enough, though not filled out completely yet. I'll be sure to take another look when it's complete.

Also, good to see Krest around. I'm sure we'll beat the shit out of each other soon.

 

[Natalie LaForte]

Pretty cool,

'Dad'

[member="Darth Ferox"]

On a sidenote, I would personally add more weaknesses/strengths, and I'm sure you have something in the works for the background

 

[Darth Ferus]

[member="Serenity LoveHeart"]

They're secrets for now.

You know. You could always be [member="Asajj"] 's twin.

 

[Natalie LaForte]

Funny enough she looks exactly like Serenity Oh wait they're based on the same character lol.

I could see us getting along quite well [member="Darth Ferox"]