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Company Modifications [V2]

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Howdy, you magnificent capitalists.

This is where you go when you want to update your company submission for when you've grown in Tier or just feel like sprucing up your submissions. Simply fill out the template here and then someone will get to it.


TEMPLATE:

Company: (What company is being changed?) (Also, link the submission here.)
Modification Made: (What are you changing?)
Rationale: (Why are you doing this?)

Pertient Development Threads:
  • [Link - add in the FULL name of the thread] - [Description]

New Submission: [Please spoiler this]
 
TEMPLATE:

Company: Silk Holdings
Modification Made:
  • Change the headquarters location from Ukio to Drogheda
  • Remove Rishi (but not the Rishi Maze) from Locations
  • Add kolto, kolcta, and bacta to Operations
  • Add Verkuyl, Lianna, and Annaj to Locations
Rationale:
  • Geographic changes involved in personal enmity between CIS and the majority shareholder; operations were moved before hostilities erupted. Other geographic changes involve addition of the following.
  • Bacta and kolto operations were formerly under the subsidiary company Consolidated Bacta Ltd., which had its own approved company submission but was not recovered after the crash. Verkuyl, Lianna, and Annaj were three key locations for Consolidated. Products included the Kolcta Geltab, sold en masse to the Sith Empire. Consolidated is discussed in more detail in the entry for Iron Crown Productions. It is 1/3 owned by Sienar and 1/3 owned by Kaine Zambrano.

Pertient Development Threads:
  • N/A - recovery of data
 
TEMPLATE:

Company: Mandal Hypernautics
Modification Made:

Change from Tier 2 to Tier 3

(also)
Vehicle and Starship Manufacturer
--change to--
Vehicle, Droid, and Starship Manufacturer



Rationale:
I was offered the opportunity to make this company as a tier 3 instead of a tier 2, but it got its second approval before I had a chance to accept the offer. Also, I have come to realize as I have been roleplaying that the company (as I envision it and as I portray it in my roleplaying) really deserves to be a tier 3 company. At the time when I submitted the company, I didn't really have a solid grasp of the difference. (also, I portray Larraq as a CEO that does things. as opposed to a character that also happens to be a CEO. So hopefully that counts for something.)

Pertient Development Threads:

NA

New Submission:

MANDAL HYPERNAUTICS
PRODUCT CATALOG




STARSHIPS
Concordance-class Asteroid Mining Vessel
Market Value: 96,850,000 Credits

Nexus-class Cruiser
Market Value: 45,000,000 Credits

Strike-class Heavy Frigate
Market Value: 35,028,000 Credits

Nebula-class Corvette
Market Value: 4,760,000 Credits

Bui'tsad-class Corvette
Market Value: 945,000 Credits

Bora-class Light Freighter
Market Value: 450,000 Credits

Shantual-class Cargo Shuttle
Market Value: 82,000 Credits

Cabur-class Starfigher
Market Value: 210,000 Credits


PLANETARY DEFENSES
HAS Military Shielding
Market Value: 220,068,000 Credits


VEHICLES: WALKERS
AT-MP Mining Vehicle
Market Value: 75,200 Credits

Tracyaat Walker
Market Value: 65,400 Credits

Trat'aab Walker
Market Value: 45,000 Credits


DROIDS
SSM-12 MkIII Guardian Recon Droid
Market Value: 45,000 Credits

Cyclops Battle Droid
Market Value: 8,000 Credits

Modular General Labor Droid
Market Value: 3,000 Credits
(upgrade packages ranging from 500-1,500 credits)

Ogre II Mining Droid
Market Value: 5,000 Credits

MTX D-Type Loader Droid
Market Value: 1,850 Credits

VCE Engineering Droid
Market Value: 12,000 Credits


PERSONAL EQUIPMENT
Hyperion Combat Armor
Market Value: 11,250 Credits
 
@[member="Captain Larraq"]

The new submission template is where you place the full company submission with the changes you mentioned. But keep that catalog on hand. That'll be useful in the future. That said, your company has been modified, old bean.
 

Noah Corek

Cocked, Locked and a Smoking Barrel
Factory Judge
Company: Hekler'Kok Defense Industries
Modification Made: Change Headquarters from Fenessa to Fondor,Delete all Locations and add Thyferra,Kaeshena,Malastare,Naboo,Corellia,Sullust and Sluis Van
Rationale: To keep my company away from the Fringe space
 
TIER INCREASE SUBMISSION

Company: Archangel Research and Design
Modification Made: Increasing from Tier 1 to Tier 2.
Rationale: Starting out as a very small operation Moira and Maelion have made extensive business deals and agreements with all manner of big players. In addition to this they now have a mobile processing ship of their own and the capital to start new locations. These new locations will likely involve Fringe and former Sith worlds.

Pertinent Development Threads:
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/16853-the-pact-of-steel-moira/ - Moira and Maelion meet and agree to found Archangel, make deal with Baktoid industries.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/17402-the-political-process/ - Former Chancellor Aurelia Saelari is processed and her company unwittingly becomes a tool of the droids.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/17112-the-process-of-processing/ - The processing…process…is created and tested.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/19106-stygian-depths-stygium-crystal-raid-vs-op/ - Successfully dev thread to obtain Stygium crystals by raiding OP.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/17684-i-cant-believe-its-not-ig-88/ - Major deal with the short lived Dominion earns Archangel over 100 million credits.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/19273-bringing-light-to-the-process-moira/ - The creation of the Lightbringer ship and mobile processing factory.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/17792-promotion-to-glory-maelionbellalika/ - Bellalika is processed along with her knowledge of TGE resources and slush funds.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/18450-v-is-for-virus-maelionrave/ - Major deal struck with Rave Merill from the Fringe where they work to provide a weaponised zombie virus.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/19780-kyrosian-ambitions-moira-and-kara/ - (In progress) Major deal with Sith Master Darth Kyros will net Archangel a considerable profit.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/19228-dogpile-rebel-alliance-raid-on-styx/ - Moira acquires rare tech and powerful items in a raid on the Sith.
 
Company: Silk Holdings
Modification Made: Advancing to Tier 5
Rationale:

Several rounds of staff edits have been made to the Silk Holdings company page since its creation, each one detailing increased revenue and connections.

One major pharmaceutical subsidiary has been Consolidated Bacta Ltd., owned 1/3 by Silk, 1/3 by Santhe/Sienar, and 1/3 by Kaine Zambrano. With the conquest of the Sith Empire, Consolidated's assets have been wholly seized by Silk, and amalgamated into the parent company. These assets include shipping interests, bacta production, bacta refinement, kolto production on Manaan, and kolcta production. The Consolidated Bacta brand name is retained for marketing, but not organizational purposes. Massive amounts of bacta, kolto, and kolcta have been purchased by private investors and the Sith Empire.

Furthermore, development of the HALCYON 'space train' system has permitted major growth in Silk's main business, the transportation service industry. HALCYON systems are being installed on virtually all worlds of the Fringe Confederation, including the bacta producer Verkuyl. HALCYON systems have also found private buyers; for example, the spice lord Popo the Hutt installed several on worlds where his interests lie.

Silk has sold and created many, many specialized projects for private contractors and even major factions.

Consolidated Bacta Ltd. was created in October, as detailed here:
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9707-consolidated-bacta-ltd/
Consolidated began as a three-way split between Silk, Kaine Zambrano, and Santhe/Sienar, and the only non-Omega-owned bacta corporation in the galaxy. It did immense amounts of business with the Sith Empire, including a massive deal for the QQ-L13 kolcta geltab, brokered by Darth Kryptus on the Empire's behalf. http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9712-qq-l13-kolcta-geltab/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9715-the-kolcta-geltab-for-all-your-post-dismemberment-needs/ (lost)

After the Crash, its activities were included in the Silk company submission. After the fall of the Empire, Consolidated's assets were wholly obtained by Silk and amalgamated into its structure. As a result, Silk now wholly owns the galaxy's only bacta producer apart from Omega StarCorp.

PertiNent Development Threads:


New Submission:
Corporation Name: Silk Holdings
Headquarters: Drogheda
Locations: Dressel (Moreau Station), Void Station, the Rishi Maze, Saleucami, Chalacta, Boz Pity, Verkuyl, Lianna, Annaj
Operations: Starship repair and maintenance, refueling depots, starship design, shipyard specializing in freighters and vehicles, investment, starbase operation centered on docking fees and service provision, kolto, bacta, kolcta, hyperlane creation
Rationale: Silk Holdings owns every gas station, waypoint, and service provider along the Mara Corridor, a super-hyperlane created by its founders, Jorus and Alna Merrill. Numerous political and financial deals with all sides have kept the Corridor safe from nearly all interference, while maximizing target markets for Silk products. Silk does business with the Sith Empire, the Republic, Black Sun, the Lords of the Fringe, the Mandalorians, and the Omega Protectorate. Its sole owner has a million-credit bounty in CIS space (and he would do it again), so CIS is the only significant major faction with which Silk does not do business.
Tier: 5
Description: Silk has two major structural divisions, overseen by a professional Ukioan and Droghedan staff. These divisions are of roughly equal size. One handles service provision, and the other handles production.

Silk is, at heart, a service provider. It operates nineteen starbases along the Mara Corridor. Major interests include food, fuel, lodgings, docking fees, repair services, medical services, and starship modification. These operations extend into Fringe and Empire space, among others, as well as throughout the Rishi Maze. Silk is also the galaxy’s only major, systematized creator of hyperlanes, a service which it provides to major governments, and for which it can name its price.

Even Silk’s production side is bound up in service provision. Specifically, Silk is frequently contracted to design starships, but does not always manufacture them. Nevertheless, Silk’s proprietary products are a common sight throughout the Outer and Inner Rim. Silk focuses on bulk transports, tramp freighters, cheap defense small craft, and surface vehicles. It has designed capital ships, but prefers not to manufacture them in most cases unless contracted specifically to do so. Silk’s assets often pull double duty; for example, several ancient, refitted Cardan III and IV stations rank among the larger Silk waypoint starbases on the Mara Corridor, but also serve as shipyards. Various modular Shokita- and Chaavla-class stations also serve as repair/modification yards while filling a primary function as starbase waypoints. Silk even owns a ground port on Drogheda, a port which fills all of the above functions. Azure Station, an XQ2 platform over Saleucami, is similarly used. Silk also owns major interests in Void Station, due to the station’s rescue from mercenary forces, Circe Savan, and Darth Moridin by Jorus and Alna Merrill, and subsequent Silk-backed repairs. Furthermore, Silk owns major interests in Moreau Station, and has supplanted its quiet owners.

Silk’s products, however, are not confined to vehicle design, manufacture, and modification. Silk was the first corporation to break the Omega StarCorp monopoly on bacta, through rediscovery of the planet Verkuyl. Contracting with a Sith alchemist with plant expertise (Sirella Valkner) allowed Silk to merge its bacta holdings with its revitalized kolto interests, and recreate kolcta. Massive amounts of kolcta have since been sold across the galaxy, including substantive deals to major factions. So far, kolto and kolcta production remain a virtual Silk monopoly.


As of the date of this submission, and since the initial submission, a full product list is as follows:


If possible, please include the old list of development threads at the end of this submission.
 

Basaba Willamina

A'den and Alor be aliit Willamina
Company: Chai La Armory
Modification Made:
  • Change Headquarters to Mandalore
  • Tier 1-2


Rationale: The sisters have moved up in ranks and position within both the Protectorate and Mandalorians. Letting them get better resources


Pertient Development Threads:
  • Promotions - Basaba is promoted to Field Marshall in the Mandalorians allowing for more command and resources
  • Promotion within the Omega Protectorate was Lost in the Wipe but @[member="Ayden Cater"] has appointed her the rank of Major

New Submission:
Corporation Name: Chai La Armory

Headquarters: Mandalore

Locations:
  • Mandalore
Operations: Weapons, armor, designs of weapons, armor, ships and droids

Rationale: Allison partnered with Mirshen after a mission on Tatooine. The two realized they both had a love of building weapons and she the team and know how while he had the connections to sell them. They found and cleared out a cave while buying a pre-fabricated base that could be used. Then buried it in the sand with the cave being sealed as the entrance.

Tier: 2

Description:
A small garrison and forge located deep in the Dune sea and set in a cave. Designed to be hidden so they can't be discovered while also allowing a place to always test what few pieces of equipment they produce. The primary focus is and was to create for the Mandalorians or Omega Pyre but sometimes designs are sold to people for the right price. While small some of the designs that are made but never done get sold to the highest bidder, faction or are custom works. Several designs are leftover from jobs that the person never collected upon. The Chai La team defends the place and is stationed there and money from bounty and mercenary jobs keep it moderately funded.

Products:
 
Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
Company: Sasori Reseach
Modification Made:
  • Change location "Spero" to Ossus (since the Spero became the Shepard and was given to the CIS if not allowed then remove)
  • Add to operations Ship design (not creation)
  • Add to operations light armor creation
  • Tier 1-2

Rationale: Through agreements with Baktoid and work on the Teyan Restoration project the company has learned many new things.

Pertient Development Threads:
  • Charity Case - Matsu meets with Alli Wren and Sasori becomes a part of it as a charity and tax write off getting scraps, equipment and old model ships/droids to use.

New Submission:
Corporation Name: Sasori Research

Headquarters: Tython

Locations:
  • Coruscant
  • Ossus

Operations: Jedi/Republic utility items for missions, jedi/republic equipment on a small scale, jedi robes, ship designs, light armor

Rationale: Matsu became head of the group by being one of the top researchers within the order.
Tier: 2

Description:
Bits and bobbles, necklaces and rings. These are some of our favorite things, kept small scale and defined within the jedi order. The researchers division has always studied artifacts but now with their reseach empoering small things to give extra stamina, some small immune system boost, clarity, focus, inspiration but not on something unneeded. Jedi should only hold what they can carry on themselves so the biggest item in their division is robes and possibly a speeder for missions to be lent. Their primary base is the libraries of Tython but there is a small group on each jedi world or in the case of the mighty Spero the Hope of the Republic and jedi in space.
Products:
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11930-murr-earrings/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/15384-sasori-plushie-line-set-ii/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/18637-wind-fans/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/18638-ossus-robes/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/18639-parasol-blade/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/18640-manaan-robes/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/18641-laufeyson-bracelet/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/16220-sasori-staff/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/20120-sasori-gauntlets/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/15950-teyan-spiritus-prison/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/16990-jedi-shadow-robes/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11800-moro-dashi-robes/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/20122-dalaang-vestiments/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/20156-sasori-boots/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/12784-sasori-plushie-line-previously-approved/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/15955-sigil-of-hope/
 

Matreya

Well-Known Member
TEMPLATE:

Company: J.A.C
Modification made:
Adding in subsidie
Rationale:
Forgot one of the subsidies

Pertinent Development Threads:
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/20846-my-thread-activity-update/?p=263699 - the ooc readmittance to giving up ownership


New Submission:
Corporation Name: James Armor Companies
Headquarters: Val'halla
Locations: Courscant, Korriban, Styx, Tatooine
Subsidies: M'n'M, Blasted Decisions, SS Shipmaker, IRIS
Operations: Charities, Vehicle Creation, Weapons Creation, Armor Creation, Kolto Kolcta and Bacta Distribution
Rationale: Zaiden funded the initial shop with his own creds
Tier: Tier 4
Co-Owner(s): @[member="Solrune"] @[member="Northstar"]

Description:
Originally Zaiden was inspired by his father's Recon Armor. Immediately he began to make an armor shop, believing it to be a powerful way to honor his adopted father. So he opened a shop on one of his favorite planets, Tatooine.

Initially making a few specialized armors, he made his money back quickly. But that wasn't what made him continue. He continued in honor for his father whom he spent most of his life hating.

The next step came (technically will come soon) when he recieved his inheritance from his real father, the family found not long ago. He spent a vast portion of this money on making two new plants one on both Coruscant, and Korriban. This officially tripled his income. Making a great deal of cash, Zaiden was able to take a portion and set it aside for charities.

He soon moved to making any brand, design, or faction of armor. Then again he moved on further to weapons as well.

James Armor Co specializes in unique items. They make Lightcycle's, Lighttanks, Recon Armor, Force Lightning channelling armor. They also made newer weapons including Lightdisks, which are similar to chakram save using Lightsaber crystals to make energized blade edges around them. As well as several other unique weapons.

The reason his tools are so loved across the galaxies is the improved Ion Lithium power cells, they are extremely durable as well as last a superb amount of time. The lithium cells also for a great deal of the items glow, but this can be removed.

Products:
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/20476-expanding-horizons/ - Acquisition of Bacta etc.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/3582-shadow-dagger/ - Mass produced Neuranium daggers crafted in multiple forms and sizes
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/3614-zaidens-demon-armor/ - Personalized armor for Zaiden James-Greyson
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/3811-eag-lightcycle/ - Minor produced speeder style bike created for vast speed
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/3879-zaidens-recon-armor/ - Personalized armor for Zaiden James-Greyson
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/4280-zaidens-darkestnite-longsaber/ - Unique lightsaber crafted for/by Zaiden James-Greyson
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/5947-trikos-duo-sps-666-slugthrower-revolvers/ - Minor produced Slugthrower Revolvers
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/6453-9xa-cybernetic-leg/ - Mass produced leg implants
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/6396-lj-909-lightjet/ - Minor produced high altitude speeder bike
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/5532-zaidens-cybernetic-left-arm/ - Unique arms made of Phrik
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/15406-betty/ - Mass produced blaster for the LotF
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/15442-lola/ - Mass produced blaster rifle for the LotF
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/15585-rex/ - Minor produced assault/reconnaissance droid
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/15405-melinda/ - Mass produced Slugthrower for the LotF
 
@[member="Basaba Willamina"]

Being promoted in a military organization doesn't give you access to resources to use for your own desires. Your tier advancement request is denied because you do not meet the standards illustrated in this thread. Your headquarters has been changed as requested.

@[member="Matsu Ike"]

Once again, your tier advancement is denied because you do not meet the standards illustrated in this thread. Your headquarters has been changed, no new locations have been added.

@[member="Penumbra"]

Before I edit your submission, wasn't Val'Hala destroyed? Or was that thread redacted?
 

Matreya

Well-Known Member
@[member="Gerion Ardik"] uhm? Lol Val'halla has never been destroyed. Faenroven bombarded his estates, that and most of Olympus. But the planet as a whole is fine.
 
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