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 Character Motivation

Kitter Bitters

Creator of the Bitterverse
As I continue to grow as a writer I’ve realized that my best characters have always been ones with a clearly understood objective or reason for behaving how they do.

So what are yours? Why do your Jedi keep fighting wars and sacrificing? Why do your Sith keep burning and torturing? Why do your criminals keep pillaging? Why do your imperials keep marching? Why do your rebels keep sparking?

What keeps your character from saying they are too old for this shiz and retiring on some backwater little planet?

War is hard. Why do they do it?
 
I'm more of a, general idea and throw a character out to see how they develop, type of person. So I wouldnt say I go into it with a clear objective and reason for behaving outside of general personality traits. I often find character development and reasoning based on who I roleplay with and whats important around them. If that makes sense? Dunno if it does.
 
Aurelian's view on his objectives changed, both due to IC and OOC developments. I feel it difficult to keep a steady line for many years without sacrificing something here and there.

Why does he keep on pushing? Because he knows that if he does not do it, nobody will. He is firmly engulfed in his own belief that a great, great majority of individuals will rather indulge ignorance than accept a simple truth. The Force brings balance. Balance is war. An individual raised in an orderly society with god-like Emperor, serving justice from his heart till he saw everything crumble and die, he strifes for order and unimpeded civilisation so hard, he will sacrifice anything to achieve an end to what he sees as the ultimate destroyer.

It developed over time to what it is now, needing adjustments, setbacks, rising and falling writer groups. It forms, grows, shrinks, expands, it was and is quite natural.
 
This has never been a static thing for me, with any characters I write.

Take Briana, for example. I've given her many different reasons for fighting over the years, and those reasons have grown and changed alongside her.

As a Padawan, she didn’t fully understand why she was fighting; she only knew that it felt like the right thing to do and her understanding was very limited. As she transitioned into becoming a Knight, she began questioning that instinct and trying to define what she was truly fighting for. Different experiences have since challenged, reshaped, and ultimately solidified those convictions.

Now, she fights for a few different reasons, but the primary ones are:

1. She hopes to have a family and children of her own someday, and she wants them to inherit a peace she never had, to grow up without being forced to fight the same battles she did. Of course, as we know, that peace will probably never truly come, not on Chaos.

2. She fights to protect others in all the ways she wishes someone had protected her: the way her world should have been protected, the way her people should have been protected, and the way she and her siblings needed to be protected when they were younger, etc.
 
Sometimes, you have to get a little cosmic in motivation. Cults are a pretty popular aspect of Star Wars that pops up every now and then in minor roles, and as someone who enjoys the odd pieces of the Galaxy. Allows some underlying motivations to go with my general idea of having some generally unfeasible goal to work towards till I need to shift it over to something else, so there is always something to scramble and claw up to reach
 
Honestly, I've noticed I've been a bit lacking in that. their kinda basic if any at all. Its something i REALLY need to fix but I'm not really sure how. feel like i should talk with someone who's smarter then me. I'll list em tho

Jedi:
Novac Lyrikal Novac Lyrikal :His main ting is droids and alien creatures. his ship has a huge section just for his creatures(pets). as for droids, he mostly goes through junkyards or old battle fields looking for droids to find. he's also made a settlement on a uninhabited world just for droids to live normal lives.

Orukukri Orukukri : he was a Sith experiment, well a Sith took him then made him sentient and force sensitive and what not. he's now a healer and jedi because he wants to make up for the pain he caused even though he knows it wasn't truly his fault as he was a slave to the Sith

Talresh Del Talresh Del : He's mostly just a wanderer, going from place to place, helping those he can, as well as taking care of his pet and his living plant ship and the sentient plants on there, well taking care of/living with. he has plant surge so that's part of it


Sith:
Zavik Maltheris Zavik Maltheris : He wishes to perfect the galaxy, not take it over, just perfect it. How? by turning everyone iinto perfect cyborgs, which hes done 6 times(I have them in pre codex as well as all the other types hes made)

Vorr'keth Vorr'keth : Ok so his species believe in swamp gods, he thinks that the dark side is really just the swamp gods/ their will and that the dark side brings him closer to them


Mando:
Korar Murrak Korar Murrak : honestly hes my weakest for this


Other:
Zev Corrin Zev Corrin : He wants to be free, truly free. able to just live how he wants. and he's happened to gather a large crew of people who wish the same. not in a evil way, yes he steals and what not he is a pirate after all. but still, like him and his crew have a real bond. friends and families that just wish to live free lives. not in they where once enslaved or imprisoned though some of them might have been. But like he was part of a crime group but was just a tool, not his own person.

Sullor Turral Sullor Turral : nvm this is my weakest. i made him cuz i think the species is neat and i wanted to have someone i could said makes all the droids for factory I'm planning on making
 
Interestingly, Efret's major motivation has remained the same during her transition from Jedi to Sith: that is, the foundation of both her scientific identity as an anthropologist/archeologist and her personality as an Empath (she still is one even as a Dark sider now since the power is so ingrained in her) is cultural competence.

Her character's thesis is and had always been that every people deserve to exist on their own terms. She's a cultural relativist when left to her own natural tendencies, and strives to be ethical in all the learning and sharing of traditions across the galaxy that she does and supports.

The event that caused the domino effect that ultimately lead to her fall was suspending her independent research of cultures through first-hand immersion experiences to help the NJO prepare for war with the Dark Empire. Returning to the Core forced her to realize her fellows' feeling regarding the Dark side—everything from apprehension of battle to hatred masked as the stoic necessity of duty to the greater good. Since anger and hate is connected to having a sense of superiority over another group, the latter didn't sit well with her initially, but she unconsciously let go of that as soon as she actually had her first encounter with an Elite.

Then the ongoing war effort and her new duties upon being granted a seat on the Council kept her from thinking what she saw a Jedi hypocrisy.

So when she finally did start thinking about what she was really doing and how it wasn't aligned with who she used to be, who she wanted to be again, resigning from her position and leaving the Order became an eventuality.

Another event helped to push her towards where she is now, but the core (haha, pun not intended but still funny) cause is her personal understanding of cultural relativism. She is currently uncovering with Anet Raine Anet Raine awful things that Jedi Orders did to the Sith with intent to exterminate both the culture and organizations, and trying her best to personally atone for the actions she took against Dark siders under the auspices of war (specifically, stealing and hiding away cultural objects, both by her own hand and by encouraging others to do so for her).

She's gotten to a point that she's willing to ignore Sith immoralities in order to seek justice for them from the historic and contemporary wrongs that they've suffered from the Jedi.

Okay, I'm going to end my yap here. I could write an essay about this.

I'll end this way: Efret's path has unfolded in a way I never imagined. She's absolutely a tragic figure but I love writing her so much. I'm so invested in seeing where she goes from here. Thank you to everyone who has or will help me write her story, and those who enjoy reading it. I love you all; it means so much to me. <3
 
There's a couple things that motivate Jonyna.

The first is Culture.

It's been a deciding factor from day one, that her people push this ideal onto her and her tribe. The ideal that if you are born with the gift of the Force, you are expected to not only be a jedi, but a great one. She's earned that, earned the right to be called a jedi master, but its also dragged her into motivating factor 2...

Guilt.

It's something I rarely get to touch on in a way I'm happy with. Jonyna being a cryobaby, a child of the rebellion, she sees herself as someone who's destiny was robbed from them. First in the sense of bearing witness to O66 at age 3, and seeing the promise her mother had made to her of becoming the great jedi she thought she was destined to be get shot right in front of her. Both metaphorically, and literally. Then, she becomes a hero of the rebellion. Slowly works her way up after years of avoiding it, out of fear of ending up the same as the jedi she saw shot in the streets. And just when things are looking up, just when she thinks her promised destiny has arrived...

She gets frozen for 900 years.

And now, the found family she had made, her rebel squad she had cultivated, the eight siblings she had back home, the two lovers she had...

they're all long dead.

And now, in the age of chaos, all she has left is the guilt of knowing she has to honor them. Which leads into the third and final...

Tenacity.


Because it's all she has left. A dream of being the hero that will make personally sure that the three kids she has now, the family she left behind, the promise she made her mother, to her lovers, to her siblings, to the rebellion, can be fulfilled.

So that one day, the galaxy can rest. So that one day, evil will be vanquished.

Until that day comes, Jonyna will be the eye of the storm. The fireball that can never be extinguished.
 
Carnifex's main character motivations basically boil down to a few points
  • Will
  • Possession/Control
  • Transcendence

Now, what do we mean by that. It is quite straightforward, Carnifex is a character who believes that any action, regardless of moral or ethical complexity, is ultimately vindicated so long as there's sufficient enough will to carry it out. This can mean a wide array of things, from altruistic actions like helping others, saving worlds, defeating villains, to totally selfish and even despicable acts like murder, torture, genocide, and ecological devastation. He doesn't believe that any action is inherently morally good or morally wrong, he doesn't believe in morals as a fundamental concept to begin with. He believes in the supremacy of the self and the triumph of will over all other things. If you can do something, whatever it is, then you are automatically justified, legitimized, and correct in doing so.

He's also fiercely possessive of other things, he covets. He covets what others have and he's viciously protective of what he already has. He's quite greedy and voracious in that regard. Ultimately, he wants to possess people like they're objects, and he routinely treats people as objects, even disposable ones. Love, affection, and romance aren't actual tangible concepts to him, they're just off-shoots of possession. He possesses his wives, he possesses his consorts, his children aren't their own individuals they're just extensions of what he owns. Every relation is centered around a power dynamic of control, and even though he may display acts of affection, all of it is rooted in that desire to control.

Transcendence is probably the easiest understood motivation. He wants to push beyond limitations, constantly seeking power and means by which to bypass any roadblock to greater heights of power. Limitations of the flesh? He overcomes through magic and science, creating bodies strong enough to serve as vessels for his ever-growing power. Economic and military limitations? Then he develops an entire shadow infrastructure entirely divorced from conventional logistics and production, bypassing traditional bottlenecks when one has to rely on physical worlds and finite resources. Ultimately, he wants to completely transcend mortal limitations and become a fundamental aspect of the universe, as powerful and ever-present as gravity or light. To become an intrinsic fabric of reality, total power and total annihilation of personhood into abject godhood.

There's probably other things I could jump into but I think these three points sum it up fairly well.

Kitter Bitters Kitter Bitters
 
This is gonna be a bit long, so the TL;DR is because he's a bad person.

Put simply, Helix does everything for his own benefit. Pretty much just read the "Neutral Evil" article on TVtropes or your handy RPG core rulebook of choice, and you won't be far off. He is that alignment personified.

There's plenty of principled or philosophical bad guys on Chaos and in media in general. People with creeds or religions or some reason to do things beyond "it was for my benefit or interest at the time". Most IRL bad people, however, are bad in large part because they are selfish and unempathetic. There are other reasons to do bad things (lots of ideological bad guys IRL too), but as someone who's spent a lot of time around bad people for work reasons, my observation is that they're almost all compulsively selfish. This is Helix, and it occasionally makes him a little uncomfortable to write.

Helix will use laws, break laws, keep agreements, break agreements, make friendships, break friendships, or do anything and everything else if it benefits him. He doesn't even care much about faction or ideological lines in others. A Jedi that stays out of his way is better than a Sith that doesn't, and he'll cheerfully work with that Jedi to solve a common issue or remove a common threat. Anyone and everyone of every imaginable loyalty is a valid buddy or ally, as long as he benefits in some way.

He is, in short, an ultra-egoist. "Anything I do is correct because I'm the one doing it."

Everyone else mostly falls into two categories: a tool to be used, or an obstacle to be avoided or removed. It's all very impersonal, very sociopathic. Rare is the person that can escape these categories and become something else to Helix. There's a low single-digit number of people who have.

Of course, as I've been increasingly showcasing, sometimes he does bad things for no apparent gain. This has been a growing theme in his recent actions.

The supreme kicker being that Helix is cruel partly because of his ability to absorb or assimilate the personalities and memories of others. He has done this to, at this stage, tens of thousands of people, and it has affected his reasoning.

All that human or humanoid cruelty, stupidity, hatred, bias, selfishness, and short-sightedness focused to a single white-hot point. That's Helix. He is malicious on a level that is difficult to quantify, yet also very petty. Not the guy who'll take over your planet, probably not the biggest threat on the board, but one of the very last people imaginable that you want to be at the mercy of. After all, he's got a small city's worth of experience and imagination to pull from.

Of course, people are more than the bad, right? Being a Sith-aligned person, a lot of his victims/constituent personalities have been largely good people. He actively chooses not to engage with that part of his consciousness, because he is fundamentally a bad person. Evil by nature, maybe, but mostly evil by choice. He could be empathetic, merciful, brave, altruistic, etc tomorrow if he wanted. He could probably even be very good at it, as his understanding of the universe and its underlying principles is astounding, appearing to be magic to many. He could cure disease, end hunger, and maybe single-handedly drag up the galaxy's standard of living a few percentage points. Instead, he uses his considerable intellectual and material gifts to cause suffering and enrich himself.

If he has anything like a redeeming trait, it is a sympathy with weird, offbeat, outcast or broken people. He's one himself, after all. He gathers such people to himself as much as possible, genuinely likes them, might even mildly inconvenience himself for their sake, but if the chips are down and it's himself or them, he's not picking them. For reference, watch the recent HBO series about the Penguin to see what this type of person thinks and acts like. Selfish affection isn't really affection.

Helix is basically just everything stereotypically bad about human behavior, dialed up to 11 and given the power to indulge it all to the fullest. He can be very thoughtful or introspective, but any moral or philosophical underpinnings he cites to you are probably window dressing or a manipulation tactic. If you cite any of yours to him, he will file them away and use them against you later if necessary. In his eyes, needing to justify your actions is the refuge of inferior beings, and what is philosophy if not the art of seeking justification? If you're going to do something that others might see as evil, do it, own it, and do it with some panache, he'd say. Don't make excuses or pretend there's justice in an uncaring universe. As an aside, this is why he's all-in with the Sith. They tolerate this type of individual better than most.

All of this in mind, what primarily motivates him is independence. He wants complete freedom of action for himself while not caring overmuch about the freedoms of others. His assets are almost entirely fleet-based, his technology is all proprietary and jealously guarded, all to be as non-dependent on others or their resources as possible.

I don't think he could retire or do anything else even if he did want to. War and destruction are all he's known, and probably all he ever will know. Even if he succeeds and plucks the last credit in the universe from the last bank, kills the last possible threat to his interests, he'd find new stuff to pointlessly fight over. You know what they say about living the sword, though.
 
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