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Approved Starship Bryn'adûl | Errindak Conquester

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Errindak Conquester

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To create a standard combat & transport Errindak for the Bryn'adûl.
  • Image Source: N/A
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Planetary Assault Conquester
  • Length: 4000m
  • Width: 2500m
  • Height: 600m
  • Armament: Very High
x2,000 Crusader Ballista
  • Defences: Average
  • Hangar Space: Low 16
  • Hangar Allocations:
    Starfighters: 12x Squadrons
  • Support Craft: 4x Squadrons

Manoeuvrability Rating: Average
Speed Rating: Average
Hyper-drive Class: Very Slow: 10
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Errindak Beast
  • Crusader Ballista's
  • Life-support
  • Artificial Gravity
  • Communication Systems

ADVANCED SYSTEMS
- Synthetic Molecular/Particle Shielding [Generated by Drael Tech]

Strengths:
  • Beast Hide: The beast hide of the Errindak combined with the formidable composition of the space-worthy Draelvasier technology makes for an impressive defence against enemy attacks.
  • No EMP: Due to the organic nature of the Draelvasier tech, it cannot be affected by disruption or EMP.
  • Synthetic Shields: Using the force imbued stones of Drael origin, the Conquester is protected by organically generated synthetic shielding, providing it with a standard of defence comparable to high end craft of its purpose.
  • Shock-Therapy: If the Errindak becomes unwilling to follow the directives given through the Stones, the Errindak can be subdued using shocks sent to its synapses.
Weaknesses:
  • Force Disruption: Due to the force imbued nature of the material primarily used for the constructed portion of this vessel, a force user could disrupt the mechanisms of a Conquester. This is also possible to affect the Errindak creature itself, by which the force can be used to sway its loyalties. However this would be considerably more difficult.
  • On 'Foot': The Errindak has the Draelvasier vessel portion grafted onto it, and is used as both an oxygen supply and source of interstellar travel. These beasts are not as efficient as standard vessels of an equivalent nature.
  • Low Hangar Volume: This ship is not intended as a transport vessel, nor does it carry a substantial crew or supplement of troops. Thusly, if attacked alone - could easily be outmanned.
  • Hunger: Overtime, the Errindak must refuel, it must eat. If the Errindak is not able to refuel, its spare-faring capabilities will become limited, and if it senses itself in danger - it may attempt to disregard its Masters, and head for a safe haven.
Description: The Conquester is essentially a beast operating as power supply and movement in cohesion with a technological component comparable to a ship acting as direction and implementation of that power. The Conquester is a massive beast, operating in a symbiotic/submissive capacity with the Bryn'adûl.

This vessel has required nearly five years of development to now properly be allowed for use in a greater capacity than prototype variants. It is a simplistic yet devastating vessel.
 
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[member="Tathra Khaeus"], very interesting concept here, but I like that. It's not the garden variety rinse and repeat. It's something a little different that what comes through most often. So basically what I'm getting out of this is that this ship is more or less and beast that is used as a starship. I am curious about something though....

As this ship seems to be a living, breathing creature retrofitted into a kind of space faring vessel to be utilized to the benefit of the Bryn'adul, would there be any concern with the beast carrying about on its own intentions and turning on its "master" in any situation, and if so, what safeguard is in place to prevent this? If you could provide some clarification in this regard, it would be greatly appreciated.
 
[member="Alden Akaran"]

Well, to my mind the stones probably work in cohesion with the mind of the beast. And they are well trained, its highly unlikely that they would do their own thing. However, if they were very hungry or were messed with through the force they could perhaps go against their Masters.

As far as measures go, I imagine the stones built into the metal can essentially shock the Errindak to keep it in line.
 
[member="Alden Akaran"]

Added additional details to the Strengths & Weaknesses to clarify what you'd asked. Namely by creating a new Strength, Shock Therapy and more information in the Force Disruption weakness and a Hunger weakness.
 

Runi Verin

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Tathra Khaeus Tathra Khaeus

Just two final things
Armament: High x2,000 Crusader Ballista
Seems an inordinately large number for a high rating. I'd recommend dropping the count or bumping the rating up accordingly. Your link here will also need to be fixed.
  • Hangar Space: Low 20
  • Hangar Allocations:
    Starfighters: 16x Squadrons
  • Support Craft: 4x Squadrons
4000m [Base: 4 | Very Low: 10 | Low: 16 | Average: 22 | High: 28 | Very High: 34 | Extreme: 40]
Hangar count should also be a maximum 16 with a minimum 12:4 split.
 
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