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Kai'el Brat "Guardian of the Light"
Armor
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Light Armor
  • Weight: Light,
  • Resistances:
    • Acid: Average
    • Disruptor: Very High
    • Elemental: High
    • EMP/ION: Extreme
    • Energy: High
    • Force: Average
    • Kinetic: Very High
    • Lightsabers: Extreme
    • Radiation: Very Low
    • Sonic: Extreme

SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Protection: The armor offers advanced protection against a wide range of threats, including kinetic impacts, blaster fire, sonic attacks, and environmental hazards. It features materials like Phrik, Songsteel, and Armorweave, which are known for their durability and resistance to damage.
  • Environmental Adaptability: Equipped with systems such as an enviro filter, anti-corr 113 coating, and a comprehensive de-icing system, the armor ensures the wearer can operate effectively in diverse environments, from hostile atmospheres to extreme temperatures.
  • Situational Awareness: The armor enhances the wearer's situational awareness through a heads-up display, electrobinoculars, and photoamplification features (thermal, infrared, low-light, and ultraviolet vision), allowing for improved visibility and target acquisition in various lighting conditions.
  • Stealth and Mobility: Designed to be lightweight and modular, the armor allows for high mobility and flexibility. It includes a photo-reactive coating for near-invisibility, aiding in stealth operations.
  • Resilience and Maintenance: With self-sealing properties, an antisepsis system, and an anti-kinetic underlay using shear thickening fluids, the armor is built to withstand and quickly recover from physical damage, ensuring the wearer remains protected and operational.
  • Communication and Tactical Advantage: The armor integrates advanced communication systems, including a holocomm, and various targeting and counter-detection technologies, providing the wearer with a tactical edge in combat scenarios.
  • Battle Meditation : Added through crafting via: clan solus forge works



    Universal Systems:

    Helmet:
    Cuirass:
    Pauldrons / Shin Guards / Arm Guards:
    • Duraplast - Strong white metal used in protective equipment.
    • Reifflex Cellular Padding - Padding used in Darth Vader's and Stormtrooper helmets, providing protection.
    • Songsteel - Light, luminescent metal used in masterwork swords, resistant to lightsabers.
    • TYI Flex-Armor - Flexible armor protecting head, torso, arms, and legs, with reinforcement options.

    Gauntlets:
    • Crushgaunt - Increases grip strength to crush bones, durasteel, and deflect weapons.
    • Faraday Cage - Provides electromagnetic shielding.
    • Mag Lock - Magnetic device to secure starships.
    • Phrik Alloy - Rare, robust alloy used in ancient staffs and lightsabers, resistant to lightsaber strikes.
    • Songsteel - Light, luminescent metal used in masterwork swords, resistant to lightsabers.

    Boots:
    Bodysuit:
    • Armorweave - Armored cloth dissipating blaster bolts, limited lightsaber resistance.
    • Baffleweave - Material used to jam sensors.
    • Black Insulating Shell - Uniform with self-sealing properties against cuts and punctures.
    • Enviroweave - Material for adaptive, durable clothing and armor, protects against environmental conditions.
    • Herdon Leather - Comfortable leather used in Millennium Falcon's cockpit chair.
    • Mylar Laminate - Polyester film known for strength, transparency, and chemical stability.
    • Photo-Reactive Coating - Coating that renders armor nearly invisible by reflecting and warping light.
    • Reifflex Cellular Padding - Padding used in Darth Vader's and Stormtrooper helmets, providing protection and comfort.


Everything used abouve in this submission and what It does in short hand:

LinkDescriptionUsed In
Absorption VisorProvides near immunity to sonic and ion attacks.Helm
Adhesion Disc PartsClimbing tools using molecular electric cling.Gauntlets, Boots
AerogelInsulation, heat resistance, padding.Helm, Gauntlets, Boots, Curiass , Pauldrons
Anti-Corr 113Coating to prevent corrosion.Universal,
Antisepsis SystemEnergy field that kills fungi, mold, bacteria, and spores.Universal
ArmorplastLightweight, advanced ceramic version of durasteel.Helm, Gauntlets, Boots, Curiass , Pauldrons
ArmorweaveArmored cloth dissipating blaster bolts, limited lightsaber resistance.Gauntlets, Boots, Curiass , Pauldrons , Bodysuit
Aural AmplifierDevice amplifying distant sounds while dampening ambient noise.Helm
Automatic Sonic Nullification SystemHigh-tech ear protection using counterwave-nullifiers.Helm
BaffleweaveMaterial used to jam sensors.Universal
Black Insulating ShellUniform with self-sealing properties against cuts and punctures.Gauntlets, Boots, Curiass, Pauldrons , Bodysuit
Dantari CrystalsEnhances Force power recovery during combat.Gauntlets, Boots
Comprehensive De-Icing SystemHeats starship hull to defrost accumulated ice.Universal
Consciousness Retainer SystemHelmet that keeps the wearer conscious during a fight.Helm
CounterdetectiveDevice warning about active-scanning sensors.Helm
CrushgauntIncreases grip strength to crush bones, durasteel, and deflect weapons.Gauntlets
D-Baffling ConstructionSound dampening material.Helm
FFS RIP Power CellIsotope 5 power cell, interchangeable.Universal
Dilatant/Shear Thickening FluidMaterial that increases viscosity with shear rate, like cornstarch and water.Universal
DuraplastStrong white metal used in protective equipment.Helm, Gauntlets, Boots, Curiass , Pauldrons
DurasteelMetal alloy more resistant than steel, used in armor and buildings.Boots
ElectrobinocularHand-held viewing devices for distant objects in most lighting conditions.Helm
Enviro FilterFunctions as air filter, rebreather, and antisepsis system.Helm
EnviroweaveMaterial for adaptive, durable clothing and armor, protects against environmental conditions.Universal
Faraday CageProvides electromagnetic shielding.Universal
GlasteelTransparent material as strong as durasteel, used for windows.Helm
Heads-up DisplayVisual aid projection in helmets, used by Imperial cadets.Helm
Herdon LeatherComfortable leather used in Millennium Falcon's cockpit chair.Universal
HolocommCommunications unit for HoloNet, sends and receives holographic messages.Helm
IntegrumHighly resilient armor material providing superior defense.Universal
Integrum Composite PaddingPadding for lower legs.Universal
Lock-threat warning systemIndicates when another ship obtains a torpedo lock.Helm
Mag LockMagnetic device to secure starships.Gauntlets, Boots, Curiass
MechgillExtracts oxygen from liquids, operates up to 10,000 meters for six hours.Helm
Meditation CrystalsEnhances concentration, clarity, and Force connection during meditation.Gauntlets, Boots
Multi-Frequency Targeting and Acquisition SystemHelmet sensor system aiding in target acquisition in poor visibility and long ranges.Helm
Target EnhancementImproves target visualization.Helm
Target AssistanceAssists in targeting.Helm
Target ImagingProvides target imaging.Helm
Mylar LaminatePolyester film known for strength, transparency, and chemical stability.Universal
Ortho-FabricProtective space suit layer shielding against temperatures and micrometeoroid impacts.Bodysuit
Ostrine ReinforcementHeat-resistant mineral used in armor and melee weapons.Helm, Gauntlets, Boots, Curiass , Pauldrons
PhrikRare, robust alloy used in ancient staffs and lightsabers, resistant to lightsaber strikes.Gauntlets, Boots, Curiass , Pauldrons
Phrik AlloySame as Phrik, used in ancient staffs and lightsabers.Helm, Gauntlets, Boots, Curiass , Pauldrons
Photo-reactive CoatingCoating that renders armor nearly invisible by reflecting and warping light.Universal
Photoamplification FeaturesAmplifies images for better contrast and detail.Helm
PlasteelCombines acrylic polymers and metal alloys, used in armor and spaceship components.Helm, Gauntlets, Boots, Curiass , Pauldrons
Poly-ceramicWoven material providing excellent protection from physical attacks.Helm, Gauntlets, Boots, Curiass , Pauldrons
PolyborodimethylsiloxaneSilicon-based organic polymer used in medical devices, cosmetics, and as a lubricant.Helm, Gauntlets, Boots, Curiass , Pauldrons
PolycarbonateDurable, lightweight, transparent polymer used in eyewear, windows, and displays.Helm, Gauntlets, Boots, Curiass , Pauldrons
Polychloroprene-2 Fiber WeaveSynthetic rubber used in wetsuits, braces, and insulation, known for flexibility and durability.Bodysuit
RebreatherFacemask allowing breathing in unsuitable atmospheres, used by Clone and Stormtroopers.Helm
Reifflex Cellular PaddingPadding used in Darth Vader's and Stormtrooper helmets, providing protection.Helm
Self-Cleaning VisorUses a low-powered laser to clean the visor.Helm
Self-Sealing PropertiesUniform that self-seals against cuts and punctures, used by the Galactic Empire.Universal
Shell Spider SilkArmor material deflecting vibroblades and blaster pistols, looks like normal clothing.Bodysuit
Shield Suit ComponentsLight armor with integrated miniaturized energy shield projectors.Universal
Ion ShieldEnergy shield against ion attacks.Universal
Particle ShieldEnergy shield against particle attacks.Universal
Thermal ShieldEnergy shield against thermal attacks.Universal
Verpine ShieldAdvanced energy shield.Universal
Silica NanoparticlesSilicon and oxygen substance found in soils of many planets.Bodysuit
Sonic Neutralization SystemDevice allowing private conversations without being overheard.Helm
Solarium GlasteelBlaster-proof, clear solar sail technology, glare reduction, and strong.Helm
SongsteelLight, luminescent metal used in masterwork swords, resistant to lightsabers.Helm, Gauntlets, Boots, Curiass , Pauldrons
Target Lock Warning SystemIndicates when another ship obtains a torpedo lock.Helm
Thermal Imaging SensorDetects living beings based on body heat.Helm
TYI Flex-ArmorFlexible armor protecting head, torso, arms, and legs, with reinforcement options.Bodysuit

STRENGTHS


  • Extreme Defense Rating:
    Given the extensive and high-quality materials used in the armor and the detailed resistances provided, the overall defense rating for the Phoenix Fire Armor can be classified as "Extreme." This rating is based on the armor's exceptional protection against a wide array of threats along with high resilience in other areas.

    These resistances indicate that the armor is capable of providing outstanding protection across numerous threat vectors, justifying an "Extreme" overall defense rating.

    Please note that while this armor offers extreme protection, not all areas are shielded to such a high degree. The highest level of protection primarily covers the vital organs. The design aims to prevent death on the battlefield, but injuries are still likely in the less armored, more vulnerable sections. This armor is intended to be lightweight, offering limited but effective protection to allow for freedom of movement and speed.
  • Comprehensive Protection: The armor provides robust protection against a wide range of threats, including kinetic impacts, blaster fire, sonic attacks, and environmental hazards. This is achieved through advanced materials like Phrik, Songsteel, Armorweave, and various composites.
  • Environmental Adaptability: Equipped with an enviro filter, anti-corr 113 coating, and comprehensive de-icing system, the armor ensures the wearer can operate effectively in diverse and hostile environments.
  • Enhanced Situational Awareness: The armor features a heads-up display, electrobinoculars, and photoamplification features (thermal, infrared, low-light, and ultraviolet vision, along with x100 optical zoom), significantly improving visibility and target acquisition.
  • Stealth Capabilities: The photo-reactive coating provides near-invisibility, making the wearer harder to detect during stealth operations.
  • High Mobility: Designed to be lightweight and modular, the armor does not sacrifice mobility for protection, allowing for swift and agile movements in combat.
  • Resilience and Durability: The armor's self-sealing properties, anti-kinetic underlay, and various reinforcements (such as poly-ceramic and shear thickening fluids) ensure it can withstand and quickly recover from physical damage, maintaining its protective capabilities.
  • Advanced Shielding: Integrated shield projectors provide additional protection against ion, particle, and thermal attacks, enhancing the armor's defensive capabilities.
  • EMP Shielding: The incorporation of a Faraday cage within the armor provides effective electromagnetic shielding, protecting the wearer and the armor's systems from EMP and other electronic attacks.
  • Communication and Tactical Advantage: The armor includes advanced communication systems (like holocomm) and various targeting and counter-detection technologies, offering a significant tactical advantage in combat scenarios.
WEAKNESSES
  • Vulnerability to Void Stone and Ysalamiri: The armor's integrated crystals (such as Dantari and Meditation crystals) can be rendered ineffective by void stone or ysalamiri, which disrupt or nullify Force abilities, severely limiting the wearer's Force-related capabilities.
  • Water Resistance, Not Waterproof: The armor is water-resistant but not fully waterproof, which could lead to potential issues in extremely wet environments or prolonged exposure to water.
  • Partial Coverage: The armor offers high protection primarily to major vital organs, while other areas receive decent but not exceptional protection. This design choice could leave less vital areas more vulnerable to damage.


DESCRIPTION

Symbolism: A blue phoenix on a black field surrounded by flames.

Colors:

  • Black Field: Symbolizes strength, constancy, and resilience.
  • Blue Phoenix: Represents wisdom, tranquility, loyalty, and rebirth.
  • Blue Flames: Signify transformation, renewal, and controlled insight.

Symbols:

  • Phoenix with Wings Spread: Denotes leadership, rebirth, and eternal renewal.
  • Flames: Emphasize transformation and the cycle of renewal.
These ideals heavily inspire and fuel Braze, harking back to the days of the Rebel Alliance. The blue phoenix is what Braze has chosen as his battle armor heraldic motif.

Phoenix Fire Armor is a unique set of light armor designed by Braze Braze . The armor features intricate blue and black fire and phoenix motifs on the tabard, symbolizing rebirth, resilience, and the enduring spirit of the Jedi and the Rebel Alliance.

This modular armor allows for parts to be swapped out as needed, ensuring a perfect fit and alignment with Braze's combat style. Its lightweight design offers solid protection without sacrificing mobility, making it ideal for Braze's unique aerial and acrobatic combat style. The armor provides strong protection to vital organs while allowing greater freedom of movement in less protected areas. This design ensures that while Braze remains protected, he also maintains the agility and flexibility needed for his combat maneuvers.
 
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Braze Braze

I understand what you're trying to do here, but this submission is a mix of tabs in tabs with information scattered all over the place making it very difficult to read.

I'm returning it to the pre-factory so you can work on clearing it up before you resubmit it. You have two different sets of tabs, and then more information hidden away within other elements of BBcode. Please try to make this submission more legible before you resubmit it.
 
Kai'el Brat "Guardian of the Light"
Braze Braze

I understand what you'd trying to do here, but this submission is a mix of tabs in tabs with information scattered all over the place making it very difficult to read.

I'm returning it to the pre-factory so you can work on clearing it up before you resubmit it.
I thought it made it easier to read cause you didn't have to scroll. But okay I'll spread everything back out.
 
Braze Braze

Thank you.

Something like the shorthand list of parts is hidden away making it hard to see all the tech you have in this submissive for judges and any possible opponents. There's a lot of technology, everything and the kitchen sink, an answer to any situation, but people can't see what's there and what you can do.
 
Kai'el Brat "Guardian of the Light"
Braze Braze

Thank you.

Something like the shorthand list of parts is hidden away making it hard to see all the tech you have in this submissive for judges and any possible opponents. There's a lot of technology, an answer to any situation, but people can't see what's there and what you can do.
I'll poke you when I'm done editing it I think I have a way of simplifying things.
 
Kai'el Brat "Guardian of the Light"
John Locke John Locke

I've alphabetized the shorthand list with descriptions of each material or item on the right, detailing where it's used. Although somewhat redundant, it provides an alternative method to understand the components. I've added a yellow note to the Materials section, acknowledging that most of this information isn't crucial to the overall concept of the submission. Additionally, I've included short descriptions and made sure the special features list specifies where each part of the armor is used.

Originally, I rearranged the template to better match the information the auto-loaded template prioritizes. I've now reorganized the information to align with the traditional template format.

My goal was to make the information easier to read and understand at a glance. Although my method might seem complicated, it helps me envision how the components will work and understand their role in roleplay scenarios, including maintenance and repairs.

I aim to make it easier for others to understand and read quickly.

I hope this layout is easier to read.
 

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