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Night was falling fast on the planet Mimban. Too fast.

On a remote corner of the planet-wide swamp, far from the settlements of the native Mimbanese - far from any trace of civilization, for that matter - Ren Sogan stood on the edge of a landmass adjacent to a murky, plant-choked body of water. Though one could still see the vibrant emerald hues that riddled the slough, hues that formed a strangely pleasing contrast to the dreary blackness of the water, his focus was more on what lay above. His head was angled up to view the overcast sky, which was steadily darkening the longer he stood there.

After a brief moment, the Jedi Knight swiveled right 90 degrees to inspect the path that lay ahead, a path he had been following for the past several hours. A vexed sigh came muffled through a cloth garment that covered his lower face - a garment to protect him from the grimy elements, though it did little to conceal his distinctive Duros features. His conical blue head turned in every direction to follow the winding sandstone road as it curved through a massive patch of foliage, his glowing red eyes squinting as he searched tiredly for his destination.

Still nothing. Just dirt, and stone, and mud, and trees, and grass.

The explorer raised his right hand and glared at the watch on his wrist, adjusted to the 21-hour day cycle of the planet. 15:45. From the rate at which light was leaving the sky, he estimated he would only have an hour or so before night would fall, after which the explorer would be left in total darkness. But an educated guess told him it would only be a little ways off before he reached his destination. 20 minutes or so.

Great, he thought. I’ll only have to stumble around blind on the way back to my ship.

Pushing such pessimistic thoughts away, the Jedi resumed his trudge through the thick, ankle-deep mire before him. The sandstone path was barely noticeable, covered in saturated dirt and mold and grime, the stone chipped away through tens of thousands of years of wind and horrid weather. But he refused to let himself get lost. Where the path had become totally obscured, he had let the Force guide him.

He wouldn’t let this one get away. If this didn’t turn out to be a wild Bantha chase, Ren Sogan would make history.

It was only a week before Sogan would be stationed in the Coruscant Temple of the New Jedi Order, and if everything would go according to plan, he would make quite the first impression. He hoped to waltz into the Great Hall holding the first collection of lightsaber crystals to be found on the world of Mimban. Only months prior, a team of anthropologists had discovered an ancient Threllan manuscript discussing ritual practices, ceremonies involving precious gemstones and interactions with a “cosmic power.” It was the first piece of evidence found for force sensitivity among the culture, and for a society still shrouded in such mystery, it was a delightfully promising lead. Months of literary analysis (and finagling with dreadfully ancient, faded maps) yielded a potential repository for these gems, what Ren believed to be Adegan crystals, stuffed away in one of the many deep wells the Threllans had built. How the Threllans were able to acquire such crystals on a world which seemed devoid of any Force-reactive gems was beyond him. But that was, of course, the joy of archaeology: every discovery seemed to yield more questions than answers.

If, indeed, there was a discovery to be made. There might not be any crystals in the well. There might have never been. The entrance to the well could have been destroyed, leaving behind only the desecrated remains of ritually-marked stone. He even could have interpreted the map incorrectly, and been going in the entirely wrong direction. But this was always the case. Any one of the countless expeditions he had undertaken had the risk of being failures, leading to dead-ends. But Ren was, above all, a risk-taker. And while such failures had happened once or twice, his intuition for these matters rarely came up short.

So, of course, he would keep going. But something about this journey made him feel…uneasy. Something wasn’t right. Throughout the 4 or so hours he had spent wading through water, brushing through thick branches and patches of grass, there had been brief moments where he could sense past the vast web of life that inhabited the planet, and catch an instant’s glimpse of something else…someone else. Someone strong in the Force. Someone near him.

But it was only for brief moments, moments that got lost in the sea of life that swarmed his perceptions. And it could have very well been nothing. His senses were still not perfectly attuned, and his focus on the mission could have clouded them further. Still, it kept him on edge. The slightest sounds, the movement of animals, even the wind would occasionally make him reach for his lightsaber…only for him to realize that it was nothing.

So far, at least.

He looked again to his watch after a while of tired stomping through the swampland. Ten more minutes had passed. It was easy to lose oneself in one’s thoughts on these long, arduous journeys. But these worries were unbefitting for such a promising expedition. He stopped for a moment, closing his eyes. Taking a deep breath. Attempting to center himself.

But that just made things worse.

Nearby, he sensed something. Not the being he had sensed before, but something else entirely. Something horribly monstrous, lying in wait, off in the distance.

Something hunting him.

At that moment, a deep, ear-piercing, guttural growl rang out from the patch of trees off to his right. In an instant, Ren reached for his lightsaber, clutching it tightly in his gloved hands and igniting its bright yellow blade. But in only a few moments, Sogan realized the weapon wouldn’t do much good for him. Out of the sea of green, a massive head raised itself up from the ground, its mouth prying open to reveal a toothy void much, much larger than the Jedi. Its creamy skin was dotted with a handful of pitch black eyes...eyes that had all been centered on Ren. It was a wandrella. An impossibly large, worm-like creature that prowled the swamps of Mimban, mindlessly hunting for prey to seize and tear to shreds with its hundreds of razor-sharp, needle-thin teeth. Sogan wasn’t sure how long it had been hunting him, watching for the perfect moment to strike. And in truth, it didn’t much matter. It had caught him. It had him in its sights and in its reach. And in an instant, it had pounced at him.

But Sogan was no longer there to be caught. Operating on pure instinct, on the unfiltered commands of the Force, he had dashed forward, sprinting along the road with blinding, inhuman speed. He crashed through leaning branches and harsh bushes, his brown leather jacket ripping and tearing every which way. Still, it didn’t seem to be enough. Though momentarily shaken by the sudden escape of its prey, the wandrella quickly recovered and gave chase. Its slimy, veiny body fired out of its hiding spot, spinning and whirling every which way as it oriented itself through the winding path.

The panicked instincts of Ren gave him hardly any time to catch up with his thoughts. But ahead in the distance, up the steady incline that the path was taking, he caught sight of something that made his terrified mind soar with abounding hope: the Threllan well he had been searching for. It was intact, waiting for him.

His thick boots beat against the weathered path as he desperately made his way up the hill. Though foliage partially obscured his view, he could see the massive well slowly but surely coming closer in his sights. But the worm did not relent. The distance between the two steadily narrowed, the predator coming ever closer to its prey, until it was close enough to snap at the back of the Duros, its teeth sinking into the thick leather of his jacket.

Ren acted once more on instinct. Converting his forward momentum into a great, Force-assisted leap, he bounded away from the creature, his jacket easily ripping as he soared toward the outskirts of the well and crashed face-first near its edge. Pain from the impact began to flood through him, though his adrenaline largely negated its full extent. Indeed, he had no time to fully register the pain, no time for anything but to quickly hop up onto his feet, about-facing and peering down the hill to see the status of the worm.

It kept coming with surprising speed. The considerable distance that Ren had afforded himself was rapidly narrowing with each second the worm zoomed forward. Its massive presence slammed into trees and bushes, knocking them over with full force.

Ren swiveled around once more and peered down the depths. Pure darkness. No bottom in sight. It could be miles. There was one rusty ladder. Broken - only the top of it was left. Damn!

He could hear the worm. It was close. Closer. Right behind him.

It was life or death.

Ren moved without thinking, though waves of fear shot through every fiber of his body. He made a desperate leap into the shadows below. If he screamed, he didn’t notice. He was flung straight down, into depths untouched for centuries…
 

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Even from down below, in the murky waters of the well, Ren would be able to see a flash of purple up above him. Valery had been too late to offer the Jedi Knight the assistance he needed, but fearing the beast might lurk nearby, she had still followed after them. Unsurprisingly, the large Wandrella was within the waters close to the well, waiting for its prey to come out, or perhaps for a new target to appear.

A Jedi Master would be its new target.

With an outstretched hand, Valery crushed a large tree close to the ground, and lifted the entire thing up, only to throw it at the creature. The impact stunned it long enough for her to throw a lightsaber right after it, and she manged to strike it against the side of its head. She knew the beast wasn't sentient, so what it had done was purely instinctual, which meant she didn't want to even try to kill it.

The pain of the tree, followed by the burn of her blade were good reasons for it to get away, and slither away it did. Valery let out a soft sigh, withdrew the lightsaber back into her hand, and turned to the well.

"Are you down there?!" She called out loud, hoping to hear even just a faint noise from the Jedi Knight.



 
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Luck - or the Force, it was hard at times for Ren to differentiate the two - had deemed it fit to let the Duros fight another day.

Ren wasn't sure how long he fell for, though it was short enough that his rational thoughts were yet to override the instinctual fear he felt from plummeting. All of a sudden, he could barely make out the subtle movements of liquid in the darkness -

Then he crashed into the pool of water with a harsh smack. The adrenaline running through him as well as his training-induced instincts allowed him to cushion the impact...but still, damn, it hurt!

It took longer than he would have liked to recover. He allowed himself to sink into the roughly 5-foot-deep pool, though being submerged in water wasn't exactly the best way to gather his thoughts. Frantically, he pulled himself up onto his feet and looked around. He was surrounded by nearly complete darkness, the light from the evening sky above providing only the slightest illumination. He could see the smooth stone walls, a cloud or two up above -

And then, a vibrant shade of purple that reflected off of the surface of the well.

Then he heard a booming crash. Another ear-piercing growl, from that same beast he had barely made his escape from. And in between that growl, the characteristic slash of a lightsaber.

Fierfek, he exclaimed under his breath, careful to not attract any attention that he hadn't already drawn. His lightsaber was still held tightly in his hand even after the perilous fall - another effect of his well-ingrained Jedi training - and he ignited it, thanking the stars that it still worked after being submerged in water. The bottom of the well lit up, revealing a set of steps to his right that led to the opening of a dark hallway, but Ren barely noticed. At the moment, all he realized was that the presence he felt earlier wasn't some misperception or meaningless fear. It - they were real. And they were close above him.

Then, he heard a voice ring out from the top. He was slow to respond,

"Yeah! Who is that? I trust you, uh, dealt with the worm?"
 
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"The worm is gone!" Valery shouted down, before she looked over her shoulder to check that it wasn't coming back around. Her fiery gaze then shifted back to the well, and she tried her best to see. Keshian eyes could look beyond the visible light spectrum. Both infrared and UV were visible to her, so within the darkness of the well, she had spotted the head from his body. He seemed to be okay, luckily, but she did need to get him out of there.

Perhaps she could lift him up with telekinesis, so he wouldn't have to attempt a jump straight up.

"Are you hurt?" She decided to ask first. "I can get you out of there if you keep yourself as still as possible." There was little risk about lifting him up, but she was going to be careful about it all.


"Please let me know if you need any more help!"



 
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The stranger's offer of help worked quite well to set Sogan's mind at ease, so he lowered his blade ever so slightly from a readied position. His mind beginning to fully catch up to the circumstances of his surroundings, he could finally catch his breath fully. The news of the wandrella's absence worked wonders for this in particular.

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Well, good work then! Thing almost did me in. I owe you one, whoever you are."

Then, he began to look around, and he noticed the doorway that he had previously let slip from his mind. Aha, he thought to himself, and he let a grin form on his features. He had feared being almost digested by a giant worm was going to be for nothing.

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I appreciate that. But y'know, you won't believe this, this place is what I was looking for." He tried to glare past the shadows that filled the hallway, even tried sloshing through the water to let his blade penetrate the darkness, but no dice. The corridor stretched on indefinitely.

Then, he thought of an idea. "
Hey, uh, I'm sure you've got business of your own. And I won't ask why in Force's name you're on a backwater mudball like Mimban. But if you've got a safe way down - and nothing better to do - there's some stuff down here that might interest you."

The last words of his offer echoed off the stone walls of the well as he looked up. There he saw what appeared to be a humanoid female, though the distance and the setting sun only gave him a vague outline. Whoever she was, Sogan could sense the Force radiating off of her. She was powerful. But through that power, he didn't sense any signs of a threat. She could be a Jedi. Still, he didn't want to take that risk just yet.
 

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"The name is Valery," Valery called back down, "Jedi Master Valery Noble." Perhaps he'd recognize her if he had been with the NJO or just kept up-to-date on Jedi news, but she wanted to be sure. Though, she went a little quiet when he called back up that this was the place for him to be.

Hadn't he just jumped down there to escape the beast?

"Is that so?" she asked, and after another moment of quiet contemplation, she let out a soft sigh. There were still beasts on this world, so leaving him alone wasn't a good idea. He'd have to come up at some point, and she'd rather be there to guide him to safety if he needed it. Additionally, she was here already... so why not explore something interesting?

"Alright, stand clear! Coming down!" Valery yelled, and without further warning, she just jumped. The Force shifted underneath her feet to cushion the fall, so despite the distance to make it down, she landed as if it was nothing.

"Quite lucky you found this place the way you did, hm?" she asked after rising up to her full height. She then flashed him a smirk, and respectfully dipped her head.



 

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