Approved Planet Zuaberlord

[Salvador Grim]

[member="Jairus Starvald"] i agree the idea was for two multiple gravity wells not exactly black holes that would be crazy , ok editing now thanks for your patience. i was kinda waiting for my Titian Star ship and new race to be approved, then in the history i was going to describe how on the maiden voyage of our new ship we found this place for its history , recently they both got approved so i can write in some history and take care of the corrections please give some time at work should have it done early tomorrow thanks for your time.

 

[Jairus Starvald]

[member="Salvador Grim"]

That's looking better. I am going to need you to replace liquid durasteel with something else though, because durasteel is an alloy. It doesn't actually exist naturally by itself and needs to be made through combining other materials.

My advice for the temperatures of the moons is to just leave them out. Simply mentioning that they are single biomes, like mustafar and hoth is fine.

Last thing that needs clarification- are you saying that the planet is in the middle of the system and that sun is orbiting around it?

 

[Salvador Grim]

[member="Jairus Starvald"] yeah the planet is in the center of the universe a smaller sun orbits it at a great distance along with two moons and i can make those corrections right away

 

[Salvador Grim]

[member="Jairus Starvald"] i think i addressed all your concerns thanks for your patience.

 

[Jairus Starvald]

[member="Salvador Grim"]

I talked it over with the Codex and having a planet in the middle of the system with a sun orbiting it can't really be made to work. I am gonna have to ask you to change that to a more physically possible thing.

Just have the sun in the middle and have the planet orbit it like you'd have a normal system.

Luckily, after that I will be able to stamp this submission!

 

[Salvador Grim]

[member="Jairus Starvald"] i see your point of view but that's exactly what i was going for a solar system with a everything revolving around the main planet and the sun being slightly smaller than the planet , it is far more interesting than your standard solar system not that i am arguing the point but a few hundred years ago everyone thought the earth was the center of our solar system xd meh in the actual role play of star wars i suppose it doesn't matter much. I suppose i can make some corrections i am still curious as to its importance kinda i mean what difference would it make if a solar system did revolve around the planet and not the sun ???

 

[Salvador Grim]

[member="Jairus Starvald"] ok i think i got it all in order

 

[Jairus Starvald]

[member="Salvador Grim"]

Because while this is Star Wars, there are still some forms of physics that need to be adhered to, it's just not feasible. But I see you changed it and other than that this planet submission looks alright.

Thank you for working with me here to make this submission adhere to Codex standards, enjoy your work!

 

[Quietus]

Approved.