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Approved Planet Zeus

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Knight Farmanus

"The Old times have ended, now I begin anew"
Region: Unknown
System: Raxius'Storminus
Suns: One orange dwarf star known as, Rikno
Orbital Position: Habitable zone
Moons: The planet had one stone moon named Rionix'ion, the moon contains large sources of Uranium on it but is unreachable to the inhabitants of Zeus due to the lack of state-of-the-art technology. It is also unreachable due to heavy amounts of radiation upon the surface.
System Features: Their is a asteroid belt circling around the system known as, Raxius's Belt, their are a few other planets in the system but they are mostly Terrestrial jungle planets with one lava world
Coordinates: To the right of the Crystalsong system , located at the bottom
Rotational Period: 30 hours
Orbital Period:
. 450 days
. 13,500 hours
Class: Terrestrial Giant
Diameter: 31,529
Atmosphere: Type I
Climate: Temperate
Gravity: Twice Standard
Primary Terrain: Forest, Grassland, Mountains, Marshes, Jungle

Native Species: Humans
Immigrated Species: N/A
Primary Languages: Galactic Standard Basic
Government:
. Nogard, Monarchy
. Gnikiv, Alliance
. Namesroh, Oligarchy
. Emor, Confederacy
. Valior, Democracy
. Vangerguard, Fascism
Population:
. Nogard, 16.8 million
. Gnikiv, 14.9 million
. Namesroh, 11.5 million
. Emor, 13.1 million
. Valior, 15.6 million
. Vanderguard, 25.8
Total: 97.7 million
Demonym: Zeusius
Major Imports: N/A
Major Exports: N/A
Affiliation: N/A
Major Locations:
Vanderguard Capital city:
The Vanderguard capital is quite a feet of architectural and military might. The walls of the city are 8Ft thick and 25Ft tall and it spans the whole city in the shape of a half circle due to the backside of the city being guarded by a large mountain range. On the outside of the walls is a 12ft deep trench with 6ft wide making it extremely hard for any enemies to get within the city. The buildings have strong foundations and they are made out of the strongest wood and brick currently available making them withstand a few earthquakes before toppling over. In the center of the city is a large square wall which is 30ft tall and 10ft thick, within the square is a large square building filling up all of the inside space of the square. The keep, or square is decorated at it's gates in gold and black tapestries and shields. The gate leading into the city is made of 5x reinforced steel doors able to withstand quite a punishment. The City does have one weakness, a river runs through the city and exits out of it through a steel grate. Large forests surround the city making the city appear a magnificent beacon within the forest and mountains. The city took a total of 69 years to make with the help of 1,000,000 workers, craftsmen and blacksmiths.
Templar Citadel:
Possibly one of the greatest citadels to ever exist as of this time other than the Vanderguard Capital. The Citadel lies within the snowy mountains and only had one way in and out, a large and strongly built stone bridge which is 15ft across and 46ft long. Bridges separate out from the citadel, two on the left and one large one on the right that leads to a large tower on each side. The Citadel lies upon a rocky slope coming up from the ground and large thick stone walls rise up from the slope. The towers of the citadel sport black flags upon the roof of them decorated with a white cross on them, the roofs of the tower are a sloped brick roof with snow covering them from constant snowfall. The keep of the Citadel is like the meeting hall, magnificent. The halls of the keep are sported with various animal heads ranging in size along with some coat of arms and a few Templar tapestries. It took a total of 4 years to make with the help of 30,000 workers, craftsmen, blacksmiths and many more.
Home of Raxius's Chosen:
This place is contained within Five large islands which have a quite diverse wildlife compared to the rest of the planet. It is unknown why the wildlife is so different but it might have to deal with the difference in the climate surrounding all of the islands. The Islands are located within the tropical waters off of the coast of Namesroh, it is roughly 3,500 miles off of the coast. Large stone-brick bridges branch all of the islands together due to the islands being within close proximity to each other. The bridges are built with the finest and strongest stone bricks available due to raids upon Namesroh and Emor. Upon the islands their are large citadels and the occasional city. On the center island their is a large city known as "Raxius's Foot." The city is highly decorated with masterful architecture along with gold and jewels. The coasts of the island are littered with sand and they also contain large sand dunes. Tropical trees grow along the cost along with a few tropical bushes and one Saralac Pit along the coast in the central island. The islands are filled with a great variety of thick tropical vegetation along with a great variety of animals and wildlife. The islands have caves and tunnels running under them but their are also man-made caves that are to be used during the time of war, to transport troops around and as safe passages back to the mainland and to other islands. Upon the bridges and railroads are large trains and their is one single bridge that leads back to the mainland but it it guarded by a large stone and barbedwire fence along with rifle posts upon towers on the wall. This place or "Haven" is possibly one of the most secure locations ever created upon here as of yet and it had many fail-safes, all are restricted except for those of high ranking authority here.

Culture: Culture generally depends upon the empire of choice, but they do many similar things. Daily life upon the planet often includes, going to the market, going to work, training, fighting and a few other matters. Society mostly is a medieval caste system, where it goes from poorest to richest in this order, Peasants, Knights, Duke, Priest, Royalty, and the King. The Government is quite unique between each faction, Monarchy has a king, priests, dukes and royalty, an Oligarchy is a combination of three leading representatives, and Alliance is like a formation of multiple countries into one, Democracy is where the people choose who is in charge of the faction, a Confederacy is a combination of two factions to better serve both of their needs, and Fascism is mostly a combination of militarized strength and individuals. Art upon the planet mostly consists of, beautiful spires, statues, marble buildings, green and white gems, and paintings made from various dyes to depict certain events or images. The sports of the planet include, hunting, a game similar to football, jousting, archery, mountain climbing, swimming, running and a game similar to soccer but with a round leather ball painted white with a single black stripe. Military training upon the planet is quite simple, horse riding, sword training, bow shooting, running and exercises like sits-ups, pull-ups and push-ups. The people upon the planet worship and offer sacrifices to their god, Rikno, Raxius, and Rionix'ion. Rikno is the god of the sun, Raxius is the god of the cosmos and Rionix'ion is the god of the moon. Large statues and temples are nominated to these three god and their are also some minor gods that control the elements but they share their temples and statues. The hierarchy of the religion goes as follow, from less power to most power, monk, priest, high-priest, and priest-king.
Technology: The technology of the planet is in the medieval ages with cannons and what not, although it does possess a few means of combating superior technology.
History: The first people to live upon Zeus were the 25 tribes of Raxius, they believed they were the first of Raxius's children so they would make the best of it, to serve him. Roughly multiple tribes grouped together to form the empires of today. Within the first few years of their establishment, prophets and men of divine birth came and spoke onto the new formed empires, about what they should become and of how they could serve the Cosmos. Within roughly 300 years the empires grew to mighty heights until, a powerful source of power was found in the center of the continent known only as, The eye of Raxius. It was thought to be a blessing from Raxius to his children, although this "gift" would cause years of conflict to come. The empires battled over land and grabbed for power, trying to be the first to the "eye." The first one to reach the "eye" was the Vanderguard empire, thought to be the divine children of Raxius due to their power. Once obtained, the "eye" gave nearly unlimited power to the Vanderguard empire. it turns out, the "eye" was a large opening in the ground leading down to a large chamber holding a large but extremely powerful power generator. The Vanderguard were the first and currently only to accept other than the Nogard empire that, to survive.....they must adapt their technology and grow to new heights. The Vanderguard empire began to dig and put up defenses around the center while also building a few castles around it to protect it. Large steel pipes were constructed and large tunnels were dug to connect the power to the empire. After 125 years of not being challenged, the Nogard and Valior Empire attacked the Vanderguard empire. This event was known as the "100 years war" which would last up to a hundred years until the Vanderguard rose on top. Although, from this conflict it was gravely weakened and it would take many decades for it to recover. The Nogard empire began to send spies to the center to study the technology and steal from it. Soon, the Nogard empire began building up high-tec trebuchet's, catapults and cannons to combat the power of the Vanderguard empire. They also began to build steam-powered crossbows and ballista's to combat even more empires. During the 400 years of Darkness roughly 2/6 of the population was killed off. Although, the empires did later recover from this event once it finally ended and they developed new medicines to try and combat dangerous and powerful diseases such as the Gulag Plague. During the Netherworld event or "Raxiu's trials" as they were called here, roughly 1/2 of the previous 195.4 million disappeared. From this event, only roughly 1.9 thousand people survived that disappeared and they were famed as Divine Chosen and they later formed the Cult known as "The Circle of Raxius." This cult would later conquer five large islands and they would become known forever as "Home of Raxius's Chosen."


Notable PCs: Knight Farmanus
Intent: The purpose of this planet is to add a planet with a medieval society and that contains medieval weaponry to add some unique diversity to the outer reaches of the galaxy
 
Knight Farmanus said:
the moon contains large sources of durasteel and fuel
Durasteel is an alloy, not a metal so it can't be found naturally -- it's created. What kind of fuel are we talking about? Crude oil, gas, uranium, hypermatter?


Knight Farmanus said:
Gravity: Standard
Note your world's diameter is over twice that of the earth. So unless the world is made of low-density materials it should have a a stronger gravity than the Earth. So it should be somewhere above standard.

You'll also need to mention how the world was affected by the Gulag Plague/400 year darkness ; of course assuming it's an isolated world just say that. However; the Netherworld event affected all worlds regardless of isolation. So a large portion of the population should've vanished during this.'

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Wonderful edits! I'm actually quite impressed how you decided to reflect Uranium's effects on the moon.

One minor nitpick. Could you expand on the "Home of Raxius' Chosen" in the major locations? I'd love to read on that. I think it'd flesh out nicely. Do that and I can stamp this.
 
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