Approved Starship Yinch's E-wing

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Image Credit: http://www.moddb.com/mods/star-wars-a-galaxy-in-chaos/images/e-wing-starfighter

Intent: To solidify and make a reference for Yinch’s fighter
Development Thread: (Can try and accomplish one)
Manufacturer: FreiTek Inc (Original)
Model: E-wing escort starfighter
Affiliation: Yinch
Modularity: no
Production: unique
Material: Primarily Durasteel
Description:
After leaving the home world of his secluded people, Yinch feel in with a group of freedom fighters and redressers of wrongs known as the Rebel Alliance. During his early days with the alliance Yinch fell in love with the rusted hunk of durasteel that was once an E-wing escort fighter. Though he had no skill in engineering he found out that the Alliance was going to restore the ship along with others to use in relief efforts around the galaxy. Yinch who is naturally good natured anyway became over joyed and asked to be the pilot of said E-wing. His small and only request was granted and Yinch flew the ship in an engagement to bring relief to Mon Calamari and Quarren refugees.

During the engagement however he saw the need to preserve the enemy as much as possible so they could face justice. Not wanting to feel like judge jury and executioner Yinch asked for the laser cannons on the E-wing to be replaced with Ion Cannons and the torpedo payload to be lessened. He also noted the cockpit was to big for his small size and standing on the seat to see was not Ideal for fighter to fighter combat or much of anything else. Due to the fact he was making the request based on his conscience, the alliance made the alterations.

Classification: Escort Fighter
Role: Reconnaissance/ Escort
Height: 2.5m
Width: 8m
Length: 11.2m
Power Core Generator/Reactor: Fuel cells
Hyperdrive Rating: 2
Minimum Crew: 1
Optimal Crew: 1 + 1 astromech (preferably an R7 or later model)
Armaments:
3 fire linked Ion Cannons
2 proton torpedo launchers (6 torpedoes total)
Non-Combative Attachments: Long range communications system, powerful sensor array, deflector shields, astromech slot

Spoiler

Passenger Capacity: 0
Cargo Capacity: 100kg
Consumables: 1 week
Sublight Speed and Maneuverability: 2

 

[Domino]

Alright, several things.

• Run your description through a word program for some grammar and punctuation checks.
• The wookie says the E-wing had enough speed to counter the interceptor, that doesn't mean it matched it for speed. You need to set speed to 2.
• You are also matching our bombers for payload, I know it's cannon but bear in mind that this ship would be about 7oo years old at this point. It's far more likely to be a reproduction at the current tech levels.

I will discuss this with the other judges, just fix the first two points for now and think on the third.
@[member="Kalordo Lah"]

 

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@[member="Domino"] I decided lower the torps anyway after checking similar craft. Other changes you suggested have been made.

P.s. I made this in word so no idea why so messy. Sorry.

 

[Domino]

Now your text is as small as it can possibly be...
@[member="Kalordo Lah"]

 

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A Dios Mio, uno momento.

 

[Not Ordo]

@[member="Domino"] sorry adjusted formatting again

 

[Domino]

You don't have to tell me when you adjust formatting, only if you edit content. Otherwise it looks like you're trying to bump which is against factory rules.

Thank you for bringing the torpedo count down without me having to ask, you still have more than the usual amount but you've got one less cannon as well.

Please use the full template and increase your description some with more detail on how Yinch acquired and modified a 7oo year old ship. We like at least a full paragraph on descriptions.

@[member="Kalordo Lah"]

 

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@[member="Domino"]
Sorry I didn't mean to look like I was bumping the thread. I have added the requested description, and thank you for working with me on this.

 

[Domino]

I know you weren't, just letting you know for future subs.
Approved pending secondary.
@[member="Kalizka"]

 

[Lief]

Approved.