The Lion King
So me and [member="Coci Sinopi"] started a private role-play almost two months ago that took place on Midvinter, home of the Valkyri species. Earlier this week we finished it at a staggering 100 posts, the longest-running private thread I've ever been a part of, as well as the one I've put the most dedication into. We soon discovered that it also has a large following, judging by its 1,000+ views. To all those who kept coming back for more as the story progressed - a big Thank You!
Now, with this shiny new forum dedicated to feedback on people's writing and their creative creations, I'd be interested to know what you all thought of it. Did it drag parts out needlessly, was it too long, too detailed/too vague? Let us know! Both me and Coci would love to follow it up in the future with something akin to it.
Link to role-play: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/45532-we-are-the-sons-of-winter-and-stars-coci-sinopi-ask-to-join/
Now, with this shiny new forum dedicated to feedback on people's writing and their creative creations, I'd be interested to know what you all thought of it. Did it drag parts out needlessly, was it too long, too detailed/too vague? Let us know! Both me and Coci would love to follow it up in the future with something akin to it.
Link to role-play: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/45532-we-are-the-sons-of-winter-and-stars-coci-sinopi-ask-to-join/
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mG7_fOuM5vE