Tirahnn Palace

[Xian Neet]

Tirahnn Palace

Name:
Tirahnn Palace

Image Source:
http://www.lonelyplanet.com/

Classification:
Government Facility

Location:
Tirahnn

Affiliation:
Galactic Republic

Description:
The Tirahnn Palace is the national government facility of Tirahnn. This is the home of Viceroy Xian Neet, the leader of Tirahnn. It is supported by the Republic, and of course, the Tirahnn government itself. It is mostly made up of offices and government housing, but also the usual rooms such as bathrooms and a library.

History:
The Tirahnn Palace was erected early in Tirahnn's history in around 26,000 BBY. Back when the planet first joined the Republic. Since then, the government has thrived in the building and supports the Galactic Republic completely.


Intent:
For the government of Tirahnn to have a headquarters.

Links:
None yet.

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

Under review. Expect some form of judgement within the next 24 hours.

 

[Reverance]

[member="Xian Neet"]

Greetings. I will be taking over judgment of this submission.

 

[Reverance]

[member="Xian Neet"]

Do me a favor, hyperlink to the planet for the purposes of the location.

On top of that, 26000+ years is a long time for a location to be standing from being original erected. Add in the fact that Tirahnn has changed hands numerous times in its history, there's is a lot of potential for rich history and elaboration.

Bulk up the history and bulk up the description, please. I'll need more details. Focus on restoration of the building, uses during the tenure of other governments, who is currently staffing the building, and what sort of defenses, if any, currently come with the structure. Don't limit yourself to my suggestions, take your time and really flesh things out.

 

[Xian Neet]

[member="Reverance"]

Alright, thanks!

 

[Reverance]

[member="Xian Neet"]

How are the edits coming along?

 

[Reverance]

[member="Xian Neet"]

This submission will be archived in 24 hours if no response or edits are posted.

 

[Reverance]

[member="Xian Neet"]

Archived due to inactivity. If you wish to work on this once more, please contact [member="Lorelei Darke"] or [member="Valiens Nantaris"].

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

Archived.