Thoughts on 'Terror & Hubris'

[Siobhan Kerrigan]

I'm trying the feedback thing again. Let's see what happens! Recently, Siobhan and the amazing [member="Matsu Xiangu"] had a big duel. Definitely one of the most brutal fight Sio was in. It was supposed to take place in one of the recent Rebellions (I forget the name, but it was the Black Empire vs. Republic one), but ended up as a private thread after the initial posts were made in the Rebellion, since that thread wrapped up before the two could get to fight.


I had a ton of fun. People's thoughts would interest me. Constructive criticism is very welcome. This concerns storyline, writing, combat and so on.


http://starwarsrp.net/topic/92660-terror-hubris/

 

[Darth Carnifex]

Two of my favorite writers duking it out together in the same thread?

That's what dreams are made of, luv.

[member="Siobhan Kerrigan"]

 

[Nima Tann]

[member="Siobhan Kerrigan"] [member="Matsu Xiangu"]

-Total destruction
-Same strength level opponents
-Tension between them is very real that you can feel it even reading
-No god mode'ing, everyone took hits and delivered when they have the chance
-General plot, environment and using it in the duel are very strong points.
-The best of all, no salt.

This duel thread was very fun to read and I am very excited to see them interact with each other once again

 

[Jericho]

How duel should like with story to back it.
Well written, hope to read more from you and Xiangu soon.

 

[Mythos]

Holy mother God this is good. Imma go get something to drink while i finish this up.