Journal Entry:
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Whispers of ancient Sith echo from the pit known as the Hollow Gate. Cracked, faceless statues ring the sinkhole, as if in silent vigil. Discover its secrets. Prepare a report on the danger this place poses to future travelers.
“We unearth the past not for glory, but for warning. Katabasis does not want to be remembered.”
– Dr. Tavren Harrex, Field Journal Entry 8
ENTRY 112 – Katabasis
Dear Diary (because apparently, this is how I cope now),
Today I landed on a world that feels like it’s trying to remember how to scream.
Katabasis.
Even the name sounds like it’s clearing its throat to tell you something awful. From orbit, it looked like someone took a vibroblade to the crust—long, deep scars cutting across plains of black volcanic glass, like the planet got into a fight and lost. I don’t know who named it, but I hope they got a drink afterward.
We touched down on what they’re calling Sanctum Mesa, which is code for “the only vaguely flat spot in walking distance of total doom.” The Jedi were here before me. They stayed topside—sensitive types said the Dark Side down in the pit was “saturating.” That’s Jedi code for “we’d rather not get mind-melted by ancient Sith trauma today, thanks.”
So guess who they called instead?
That’s right.
Me.
Michael Angellus.
Pilot, junior peace envoy, part-time dig site babysitter, and today’s official drop-into-hell specialist.
To be fair, I didn’t have to poke the Sith hornet’s nest. I could’ve stood on the mesa with the scholars, given my security rundown, and flown off back to the Long Gaze like a good little lieutenant.
But then Dr. Iddinit showed me the inscriptions.
Old Naboo phrases, barely legible. Twisted Sith glyphs curling around them like vines. The words Sky’s End and Verè stood out like cracks in the hull. That’s not something you expect to find at the bottom of a crater halfway across the galaxy, on a world supposedly lost to history. I asked him what he thought it meant. He said something about “falling stars opening gates.”
And maybe that’s when it started. That itch.
Like I wasn’t just supposed to be here—I was meant to go down there.
So I did what any level-headed pilot would do: I got in the shuttle, flipped the repulsors, and flew straight into the mouth of the planet.
BRED objected. Loudly. Multiple times. I told him to log a complaint with HR. Then the turbulence hit.
Not from the atmosphere—this wasn’t weather. This was pressure. Like the air didn’t want us there. Like it was trying to push us back out. I held the stick steady. BRED cursed in binary (I’m choosing to believe it was binary). The light vanished about fifty meters in. Then it got cold.
Really cold.
We broke through into what I can only describe as a cathedral for nightmares. Giant stone platforms, some floating. A monolith in the middle that hummed like a living thing. The Force down here is thick—even I felt it. That’s how you know it’s bad. It’s like the world was holding its breath… waiting.I could feel the weight of something ancient and powerful pressing down on us. The shuttle trembled as we moved closer, and I swear I heard whispers in the dark. Whatever was down here wasn’t just dangerous—it was alive. And it knew we were coming.
It was weird… such a strange entrance to basically an oasis. Hovering in place, I was stunned, just stunned. What if it rained really bad?
BEEP BEEP BOOOOEEEP (softly) [I take it back. ‘Profoundly stupid’ was generous.]
Opening the comms. I remember being freaked out. Man this was weird.
Michael Angellus to Theed University and Jedi Command. I’ve reached the bottom of the Hollow Gate. You’re going to want to see this.
Yeah! I was a wuss! I opened a comm back to the topside and told them what I saw.
They didn’t answer… Wusses.
Either I’ve lost signal, or I just became the first idiot in history to go on a solo diplomatic mission to the bottom of a Sith sinkhole.
So.
Here I sit.
Still in the shuttle. Still hovering. Watching that black monolith do absolutely nothing but feel like it wants to blink. I should wait for backup. I should power down. I should not, under any circumstances, open that ramp and step outside.
-Michael
(Too bad BRED isn’t complaining how we’re gonna die. He’d probably be right)
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Entry 113
Journal Entry, (“Dear Diary” makes me sound like a teenage girl)
I’m going to open the ramp. Yeah, yeah I know… Horror Holo-Movie opening.
So. I opened the ramp.
Because I make bad choices under pressure and because something about this place was whispering "You won’t regret this"—which is exactly the kind of thing you always end up regretting.
The air hit me first.
Thick. Wet. Like breathing through a damp towel soaked in history and malevolence. Smelled like old metal, burned incense, and something I’m only going to describe as “disappointment.” I stepped onto one of the stone platforms. It felt solid, which was the only reassuring thing in the past twenty minutes.
The monolith loomed ahead, humming just loud enough to sound like a migraine. I took a few steps toward it, blaster holstered but ready. I figured: I’ve faced pirates, Sith cultists, political press conferences… how bad could one ancient floating obelisk be?
(Spoiler alert: that question always goes badly.)
That’s when BRED beeped twice—low and urgent—and ran a diagnostic on his own sensors.
Then the comms crackled. [Static. Click. A female voice on the network—probably Jedi comms:]
“...storm front approaching from the western ridge... sulfur density rising... advise shelter within five minutes... repeat, massive ion and particulate disruption expected—” BRED turned his dome toward me like a disappointed teacher. Then he rolled back into the shuttle.
BAIP BEEP BOOP “I knew this would happen. Stop being “you” and GET. BACK. IN. THE. SHIP.”
Me?
I’m standing on a death-era Sith platform, at the bottom of a bottomless pit, during a pre-apocalyptic weather event. Just enough signal left to hear the word “ion storm” before the static swallowed it again.
Fantastic.
Look, I know how this sounds. But the truth is… part of me still doesn’t want to leave. This place feels like it’s hiding a memory, like the whole planet is waiting for someone to say the right name, or ask the wrong question. I don’t think I’m the first person who’s stood here. I don’t think I’ll be the last.
But I will be the first to get flash-fried by atmospheric sulfur if I don’t get back inside.
...
Ramp’s closing.
Engines powering up.
I’m going to hover just above the platform while this storm rolls through. If the monolith lights up and tells me I’m the Chosen One, I’ll let you know. Otherwise, add “nearly boiled by toxic clouds” to today’s list of regrets.
See you at Entry 114.
—Michael
(Still alive. For now.)
Entry 114
Journal Entry,
So. I didn’t die.
Yay, me.
Also, new entry title:
“Things You Hear in a Sulfur Storm (That Shouldn’t Have Voices).”
We made it back into the shuttle just as the edge of the storm hit the Hollow Gate. You’d think, being underground, we’d be protected. You’d be wrong. Katabasis laughs at logic. The first thing to go was the light. Not the sun—it hadn’t been doing much anyway—but the interior panels. They just… dimmed. No power failure. No overheating. Just a soft flicker like the ship was trying not to draw attention to itself.
Then the comms died.
No signal. No static. Nothing.
Just a flatline where the Jedi channels used to be.
BRED ran a full diagnostic—he’s been quiet ever since. I don’t think he liked what he found. He keeps plugging and unplugging from the shuttle’s comm panel like he’s trying to convince it to remember how to radio. Every now and then, he turns and stares at me with that slow dome-tilt that just screams “You did this.”
He’s not wrong.
The weird part? We’re still hovering. Engines are fine. Life support’s stable. It's everything else that’s unraveling. A few minutes ago, I started hearing echoes.
Not outside.
Inside.
Faint. Layered. Like half-caught transmissions or maybe... memories? I’m hearing a woman’s voice, old Naboo dialect—reciting something that sounds like a prayer or a warning. Can’t make out the words. Every time I try to record it, it doesn’t play back.
Best guess? The shuttle is haunted.
Worst guess? I’m hearing my own death on repeat.
But here’s the thing.
The monolith is glowing now.
Not bright. Just a thin line down the center. Like a crack. Blueish-white. Cold light. The kind that doesn’t radiate—it sinks into things.
We’re out of here!
Boop [How Noble!]
Shut up, you toaster!
And with the storm outside eating comms and visibility, I made a decision.
I took the Dropship up about twenty meters, just above the top edge of the pit. Just high enough to see the full circumference.
That’s when I saw it:
The statues at the rim—those faceless sentinels—they’ve moved. Not all of them. Just enough to be wrong. They’re not facing the center anymore. They’re facing outward. Like they’re waiting for something. Maybe watching the stars. Maybe guarding us from whatever's beneath.
I climbed into the co-pilot chair and switched the backup relay to a narrowband pulse beacon—dumb signal. No encryption, just one line:
Flight Officer Michael Angellus, alive. Storm disrupted comms. Holding position. Observing anomaly. Need Jedi consult ASAP.
I don’t know if anyone will hear it. But I had to try. I’m not losing my voice down here too.
It took a little while, but the Storm thinned. I’ll make another pass once visibility’s up. Maybe scan the upper layers of the monolith.
Maybe I’ll find nothing.
Maybe I’ll find Set.
Or worse... maybe he finds me first.
—Michael
(still hovering. still haunted. definitely not sleeping tonight.)
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